Jin Chengkong

It's obviously a huge hook, but the main character's character is disgusting, grinding, and boring, making the viewers more and more unhappy. I guess you must say that for a growth-promoting protagonist, this is what happens when you travel through time... That's why it's disgusting. This is a fast-paced era, who wants to see you grow up slowly? I want to see rivers of blood flowing and killing decisively, instead of being indecisive and indecisive like you.

He is 26 years old, which is almost middle-aged in ancient times. You are still without a wife and children. Who in a family with normal values ​​would be willing to marry their 16-year-old daughter to you?

I am 26 years old at the beginning. In ancient times, the first wife would have been married a long time ago and had several children.

What are you writing about? Every one of them is written around women! The world is in turmoil. I am still struggling to get women. I have given up.

It was okay at first. But the more I look at it, the more it looks like fantasy. Historical novels written as fantasy are a relatively big failure.

The writing is very confusing, and the protagonist blindly follows the so-called "building a wall" theory. Since we are going to compete for hegemony, is there any point in staying in a small county? How far can you accumulate? There is no advantage in terms of population and land. Since it is already in Hedong, is it not difficult to apply quietly to the core area of ​​​​Bingzhou? It's really boring to keep suppressing the protagonist and making up the plot.

It's written like a martial arts fantasy, with a bow and ten arrows. Why don't you just throw out all the arrows and only hit them?

What are you writing? It's inexplicable.

At this time, I feel that there are not many people who can be the basic base. It is too chaotic and surrounded by barbarians. I can only choose one in Hebei or Henan to support war with war.

If you are a commoner and come from a small family, it is understandable that this widow appears frequently. She only travels in such a big place. She comes from a high-level compound and immediately starts directing the aunts in the second room to cook when she arrives at your house. You can see her next to the male protagonist in every chapter. Does she have Qinggong? The guests don't stay in the house but surround the hero?

Damn shark arms, really poisonous

Shoot 5 people with one arrow? You can't achieve this result even if you use armor-piercing artillery shells.

The author doesn't say a word

Why does the protagonist want to interfere with Ran Wei? If he doesn't develop into a local tiger in Hedong, he is also treated as a donkey liver and lung by Ran.

It can only be said to be a fairy tale. Many parts are incomprehensible and completely impossible to analyze. Is the author also messy in his work in reality?

Being able to write disgustingly is also an ability

Building walls high and hoarding grain widely, where do people live? Jiangnan, Gannan, Zhili, where are you? County seat? How many more doors does Li Yunlong have left?

The preface to the Orchid Pavilion begins in the ninth year of Yonghe, when he was in Guichou. At the beginning of late spring, he would go to the Orchid Pavilion in Shanyin, Kuaiji, to repair evil spirits. All the talented people have arrived, and the young and old have gathered together. Here there are high mountains, luxuriant forests and tall bamboos, as well as clear and turbulent streams, which are reflected to the left and right, making them look like flowing water. Although it is not as prosperous as silk and bamboo orchestral music, one drink and one chant are enough to express the secret love. It's a sunny day, the air is clear, and the wind is gentle and gentle. Looking up at the vastness of the universe and looking down at the abundance of categories, wandering your eyes and wandering your mind is enough to provide you with great visual and auditory entertainment, which is a joy to believe. I will look down upon you forever with my wife. Or take it into their arms and realize it in a room. Or because of the entrustment, he went out of his way. Although there are many different interests, calmness and restlessness are different, when you are happy with what you encounter, you are temporarily satisfied with yourself, you are happy and self-sufficient, and you don't know that old age is coming. When I am tired of what I am doing, my emotions change with the situation, and I am filled with emotion. The admiration towards it and the admiration of it have become old traces, and I still have to be excited about it. If it is short-lived and transformed, it will eventually end! The ancients said that life and death are equally important. Isn't it painful? Every time I look at the reasons for people's interest in the past, if they are combined into one, I will not fail to express my condolences in writing, which cannot be expressed in my heart. I know that death and rebirth are just illusions, and mourning for Qi Peng is an illusion. The future looks at the present, just as the present looks at the past, sad man! Therefore, I listed people from that time and recorded what they said. Although things are different in different times, I am interested in them and they are consistent. Those who view it later will also feel the elegance.

The biggest flaw in the whole book right now is that Pei Jing keeps causing trouble and never dies.