Pirates: from Recruiting Ace to Subverting World Hegemony

The name of the protagonist is really strong. The mustache and the big forest are combined. The seagull logo should be changed and the slogan is "Prosperous Navy". It can be simplified and called Xinghai!

The justice of the protagonist is very good, but I feel that the World Government, CP0 and Knight of God will not choose to give the protagonist enough development time, and will probably force him to turn against the protagonist when he becomes a lieutenant general.

Pirate fandom. . Whether you are using other people's fruits or the protagonist is special and is not afraid of sea floor stones, these are highly poisonous.

A lot of scenes were added to the small supporting role of Erchuang, which gave it an unexpectedly warm feeling. But don't add a scene like a mouse. The value of the villain's existence is to be hacked to death. There is no need to know why he became evil. Describing it will make readers unhappy. Characters like Mista, who have no evil deeds and are a little interesting, can be expanded more.

The upper limit of the development of the Shayaki Fruit is higher than that of Akainu's Lava Fruit, but the lower limit of Akainu's Lava Fruit is higher than that of the Shayaki Fruit. That is why the Lava Fruit is the upper level of the Shayaki Fruit. The most important thing to develop is to increase the temperature ### **1. Basic ability enhancement** 1. **Flame temperature stratification** - **Low Temperature Flame** (Blue/White): High temperature burning, melting metal (refer to Ace blocking the Blue Pheasant Ice Spear). - **Medium Temperature Flame** (Orange): Regular combat, range attack. - **Ultra-high temperature concentration** (cyan/plasma state): Penetrating attack, similar to Sabo's "Fire Fist" blasting through the arena. 2. **Form Control** - **Compressed Flame**: Compress the flame into a high-density fireball (such as "Firefly Fire Bodhidharma"), which explodes upon contact. - **Flame Jet**: Moves at high speed like a jet engine (similar to an extended version of Ace's "Musket"). --- ### **2. Combat Skills Development** 1. **Melee Fusion Skills** - **Fire Enchantment**: Wrap flames around weapons or limbs to enhance the striking power (such as Sabo's "Dragon Claw Fist + Flame" combination). - **Instant Explosion Counterattack**: When attacked, flames will instantly explode from the body to counter the enemy (similar to the natural elemental counterattack). 2. **Environment Utilization** - **Oxygen Control**: Evacuate the surrounding oxygen through burning to suffocate the opponent (be careful, you may accidentally injure your teammates). - **Terraining**: Create fire walls, fire traps, or melt the ground to form magma pools (restricting the opponent's movement). --- ### **3. Special applications and imagination** 1. **Flame Shaping** - **Mimetic Creatures**: Create firebirds, fire dragons and other creatures to track and attack (such as Ace's "Fire Internet"). - **Tool Transformation**: Condensate fire into swords, whips and other weapons, and even temporarily form flame armor. 2. **Science to Development** - **Explosion Art**: Mix combustible dust (such as aluminum powder) to create large-scale explosions. - **Thermal Energy Conversion**: Use flames to heat the air to create updrafts to achieve short-term flight. 3. **Defensive Magic Skills** - **Fire Shield**: Rotating flames form a vortex to resist attacks (refer to Akainu's "Hell Dog" but more defensive). - **Remnant Flame Clone**: Use flame residue to create a visual clone to confuse the enemy. --- ### **4. Weakness Avoidance** - **For Haki users**: Highly concentrate the flames to break through the armed defense (such as Akainu attacking Whitebeard). - **Those with the ability to deal with seawater/water**: Develop "steam explosion", which instantly vaporizes and recoils when encountering water (requires precise control). --- ### **5. Awakening direction (hypothesis)** 1. **Environmental assimilation**: Convert surrounding objects into flammable substances to form an "endless fire domain". 2. **Conceptual Flame**: Burns non-physical targets (such as "fatigue" and "emotion"), but requires the support of Oda-style metaphysics. --- ### **6. Practical Reference Cases** - **Ace**: Focus on large-scale AOE (Emperor of Fire·Great Flame Ring). - **Saab**: Combining physical skills and precise control (fire fist penetrates buildings but does not harm civilians). - **Original idea**: Flame + knowledge and color prediction, ignite the air in the enemy's path of action in advance. The core of development is **imagination + control**, and the upper limit of the natural system depends on the user's creativity. Even in the face of a new world filled with domineering power, the temperature, speed and changes of fire can still create unique tactics.

I think the author looks like a dead salted fish

Have you ever been an admiral? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Like the title, if not nothing, who or who is there?

Dear friends, if you think this book is good, please read it. This can determine the life or death of a new book

In fact, you can tell something is wrong with this book from the introduction. After all, two of the three new generals in the introduction are Ace and Sabo, and the remaining one is not Luffy. The other new generation characters seem not qualified. Except for Akainu and Green Bull, who is obviously impossible to join, all the original generals have appeared in introductions. I was really curious about who the author was going to write about at the end. After reading all the way, I thought it was Zoro, but it turned out to be Fujitora. If this book was to be a long one, it would have followed a mass line. The protagonist slowly climbed up step by step, accumulated connections and strength, and finally took control of the navy and changed the world. But the author didn't have an outline and didn't intend to write a long story, so he made the protagonist's combat power increase rapidly and stuck to the original work. As a result, he obviously failed to grasp the plot and ended up unfinished. It can only be said that it is a pity. I neither took the red route nor successfully completed the personal combat route. I am stuck there. If the last paragraph was wrapped up properly, the plot would still be okay, but the author wanted to end it so much that he just crashed. I hope the author will write an outline before writing a book, whether he plans to write a long novel or a shorter one. The kind of people who write books as soon as their minds are hot are either eunuchs or unfinished, and they rarely finish successfully. Finally, finish with flowers.

One Piece fan becomes a god, by the way, is there a female protagonist?

Boys, if you like which character you like, you can post it and the author will make a reference

I'll finish reading it once it's updated, and there will be more to come.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is not strong enough. My head is buzzing while listening to the book.

Don't lose copies, write more

I suggest you rewrite Golden Chapter 3, it's too messy It feels like you want to write the kind of story where you didn't want to take risks, but because of the villagers' injuries, the warmth of the world, etc., And then the protagonist was infected and embarked on the path of justice. But it's really messy and the focus is not highlighted And it's the same as other book friends said, it's weird You are writing a Japanese manga fan, but your words are ancient Chinese communication methods, which is weird I haven't finished the second chapter yet.

I can't even sign the contract for the Pirates fandom I wrote, 😭

Is the background story of the plot character created by the author? Why does it look weird? It's not in the anime, right? The character of Colonel Mouse looks so inconsistent.

It's good to watch I've read a lot of One Piece fanfics, and there are more or less problems. Some of them are extreme, either they are all members of the protagonist group, or they are all self-created characters. I personally think Ace and Nami are reasonable at the moment. Ace lives for his ideals, and as long as he can accommodate him, he can do it whether it's a navy or a pirate. Nami needed to see who was saving him. After all, he had not suffered from the rats and had no ill intentions towards the navy. The people in the team do not necessarily have to become a navy (you can refer to the idea of ​​​​just wanting to fish and become a general), you only need to let the protagonist's belief pass through. The team does not need to have a name for each profession. Navy logistics can ignore tedious things such as supplies, permanent pointers, etc., Such as chefs, navigators, cooks, etc. The main thing is to be able to accept the protagonist's thoughts. ... It's really well written, and the characterization is great. The description of Valentine's Day is really vivid, and it brings her to life. When I watched it, I was afraid of you because she was a small character and used a knife. The description is very relatable. When writing small characters in the future, do you need to write more about his past or the story behind him? I think it might be great👍🏻 Come on! It will definitely be popular!

😐 Isn't Akainu on the opposite side?

With the current combat power, it seems that the end of Chapter 250 will be at most.