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Under what circumstances did the author write such a novel? As long as they are good-looking women, they will never leave the male protagonist, even female fans (except for the female boss). As for the male (so far I have read Chapter 7), only Xiaowa is friends with the male protagonist, and everyone else looks down on him. A male artist who debuted at a young age, appeared in so many excellent film and television works, and sang so many classic songs with outstanding talent and appearance, was blacklisted by the entire Internet because he became sick and gained weight? And there were only 800,000 fans at the peak? Although I am very sorry for Teacher Han Hong, I still want to ask, has Teacher Han Hong been scolded like this? Who would really hate Teacher Han Hong? The author may want to express the darkness of the entertainment industry, where the jungle prevails, but real life is not easy anymore. A male protagonist in a novel has to be disliked by others. Although people who dislike the protagonist will be slapped in the face later, this kind of writing is not about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger This kind of coolness is outdated, right If you wrote this kind of thing a few years ago, I would read it and even give you a good review, but now I just think it is average and even slightly poisonous.
A capable person will not be scolded for being ugly, not to mention there are not many particularly handsome singers.
Difficult to evaluate
There are so many poisonous points that it's hard to tolerate them if you don't make excuses. Go to the list and learn how others write. If you keep writing like this, why not find a classmate?
It's too poisonous. The main character hates people and dogs. People provoke him wherever he goes.
Thirty years in the east of Hedong and thirty years in the west of Hexi. He bullied the young man with poor writing skills and tortured the master. After reading the article, he vomited blood. He was so poisonous.
Stop writing. Your first chapter is a piece of cake. I can't even stand the second chapter.
What novel to write? Let's drive the screws. Driving screws is easier, but not everyone is suitable for writing novels.
What kind of opening is this, what is this thing written about?
What did JB write? It's so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore.
Isn't there an actor named Yan An? This is how to write a drama
The first chapter is about poisoning. Well done to the author. At least he didn't trick anyone into killing him.
I can only say that today's authors don't want to make money ~ they can't write cool articles
Personally, I feel that since there are already things written about rebirth and retrospection, it is better to be reborn. Even if you are not reborn directly, you can also write that the company will terminate the contract after getting sick, even if you owe a lot of debt, etc. There is no need to suppress this episode at the beginning. It is quite unpleasant. It persuades people to quit at the beginning, but it is useless no matter how good the writing is later.
As long as the author puts away his own ideas and writes according to the formula, he will get better results than this
It's poisonous. I don't want to read the second chapter.
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He weighed 260 pounds and turned into a handsome guy overnight, or is he still in the hospital? Didn't anyone around me notice it? Don't you think it's strange? Are nurses organizing doctors blind?
Fathers-in-law, please stop by for a moment!
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