The Man Behind the Scenes: I Created Frankenstein

I started to fantasize again. I fantasized that I didn't need to drive screws in an electronics factory, and that fantasy novels could sell well. After reading the first dozen chapters, the preface does not match the postscript, the messy water talk, and all kinds of descriptions with unclear meanings. I can only say that the writing is really too naive 🙂. Originally, this kind of article is just based on imagination. As long as the writing is not too bad, I can read it. But at least you can write the article fluently.

In order to avoid taboos, "China" cannot appear, so I use other pronouns. I can understand this... But you changed the descendants of Yan and Huang to Huo Tu people. This is too stupid. What are you thinking in your little brain...

The author has already immersed himself in his art. Chapter 17 successfully made me drunk. Please consider it carefully. The protagonist's image at the beginning is not realistic at all, and the whole story is full of incomprehensible nonsense and inappropriate remarks. What I wrote in the first three chapters can be condensed into one chapter, and it is like this. It can be seen that the author's writing experience is not very rich, and the writing style is almost tangled. The main plot is not advanced where it should be promoted normally, but the protagonist's trivial things are described. There are not many attractive behind-the-scenes elements. The protagonist's urban life line is unfolded first, and it makes people feel embarrassed just watching it. The author seems to have no idea what the subject matter is. Are you here to read this? Another point is the problem of chaos. The first ten chapters are written in a complete mess, which makes people wonder if there is no outline. There are a lot of worthless descriptions in it, such as the parts describing students and the president, which are simply insulting to the IQ. It can be seen that the author has tried very hard to go against the routine, but the consequence of "anti-routine" coupled with poor writing is a disastrous plot to reduce intelligence. Especially the author has repeatedly reiterated at least two or three times how different and anti-routine he is through the mouth of the characters. This is really meaningless. The difference in writing style brings us a very different perception, and even the basic world view is not shown at the beginning. The last part is the most shocking part of what I saw. In Chapter 17, the protagonist discovered that the world he traveled through was an imaginary novel world, and then he sighed for a while, and then nothing happened. I said to the author, if you want to enjoy yourself, there is no need to bury it so late 😒. It is like opening a package and suddenly being splashed with shit and asking if you are surprised. I almost vomited when I read it🤮, it is simply unbearable. That's it. To be honest, the things I typed may be deleted soon, but I still want to say it. If newcomers don't feel anything after reading this, then this book is probably suitable for you; and other people, after seeing the red flags I listed, will probably be able to make correct judgments.

The writing is okay, but the author should not regard The Great Desolation as a myth. The Great Desolation is a novel, and Cthulhu is not a myth. I don't want to see another Great Desolation and Cthulhu become a myth again.

Like the title, the mysterious resurgence of the mastermind is all about spiritual energy or forging spiritual energy to create extraordinary things. I want to say that there are rumors or unexplained creatures or phenomena in every country in every period, so we must put the perspective on each country's failure for the sake of that little sweetness, and there is basically a serious homogeneity in the future.

It's a bit messy, Antarctica, the protagonist, Cyclops. The cross description of the three lines in Chapter 14 seems a bit confusing. And part of the plot about the protagonist and the system is hard to describe. . . Probably both unnecessary and a bit baffling.

Didn't it come out this year that the base of the giant stone at Stonehenge has corroded and leaked out the reinforced concrete inside? Also, when building a house in the city, we dug out more than ten centimeters to unearth relics from thousands of years ago.

I'm here to see stories about monsters, like water monsters and large creatures. Can you tell me a myth and legend about ancient humans?

Advantages of this book ① The protagonist was not qualified before he became successful. I think it is an advantage of the life and work of ordinary people. He has no sense of being born into a powerful and noble family. . ② Easily invincible. . Disadvantages of this book ① The influence and importance of those things that are taken for granted. ②I don't understand what the protagonist wants. He has no short-term goals or long-term plans. ③The protagonist does things for the sake of making things happen, and the protagonist has a fragile sense of existence. There is no idealist sage in the protagonist who makes the world a better place, nor is there a tyrant with animal instincts to make the world worse. ④ Blank interpersonal relationships, empty protagonist creation, and the protagonist is not an adult. What about the interpersonal relationships before getting the golden finger? What about relatives, friends and enemies? ⑤ After having the ability to redeem God, the protagonist's choice is not in line with basic human nature. I can understand it if the protagonist was a special group such as a mental patient before getting the golden finger.

Alas🤓👆, these are all unsolved mysteries of science, and my flat earth theory and conspiracy theory must be indispensable. How about the author directly sews these two in, and the material is ready Post a picture

No, why write in Chapter 17 that the protagonist discovers that this is an imaginary novel world? ? Does this make any sense? The author intends to pull the big one?

Waiting for the author's next book to be ready, but this one is not very good. Other readers have mentioned the faults, so I am too lazy to repeat them. I can only wait for the author to be strong enough to open a book on the same theme, or for other big names to write a similar one? Let me talk about my feelings, before reading: I even survived the poisonous behavior at the beginning of raising all human beings, and am I still afraid of what these readers say? After reading: Well, you can't generalize between people. The idea is good, but if it's bad, it's bad. This book will help you hone your strength. If you read a few more works, it's not a bad idea to debut again.

There are too many meaningless descriptions and dialogues with psychological activities, the plot rhythm is too slow and the excitement is not obvious. Don't say anything, it's not a brainless novel. It has to be interesting, otherwise no one will read it. The author obviously bit off more than he could chew and wrote in a broad and general manner but lacked the ability to sort it out well. The book won't go far if it continues like this.

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The subject matter is interesting, but I feel that the behind-the-scenes flow has reached a bottleneck.

The first chapter directly describes the yellow people, which qualifies the book. I'll come back and tweet once it reaches 1 million words.

Just like the title, I just finished watching the part where the Cyclops was dug out. To be honest, I didn't feel at all happy about it personally. The protagonist was so behind the scenes that no one knew it was related to the protagonist. Moreover, it was also a foreign myth, and the sense of immersion was down to the freezing point. As long as you put some of the unique spirits in the Classic of Mountains and Seas abroad to prove that the Classic of Mountains and Seas is indeed a book that records the world, the sense of immersion will be stronger.

I came here to see behind the scenes, and it turned out that at least 7 of the 10 chapters were about daily life.

Boring, no 👴🏻favorite water monster

Well, it seems that the author still wants to continue this style. The plot is watery and boring, with no ups and downs and no serious homogeneity. The author should practice his writing skills before writing a novel. Reading your novel really makes me want to read it. There is too much meaningless content.

Is the author still revising it or just cutting it off?

It's August 12th and it's almost time to confirm the eunuch. No need to wait, alas.

It's an interesting setting, but the author's writing is a bit poor. I particularly like settings similar to "Frankenstein". Does anyone recommend a similar behind-the-scenes stream?

Cut it or not, delete the bookshelf first, and then add it back if you don't cut it back.