I Am Practicing in the Zhuxian World

What the comment section said is right, it looked fine at first, but Zhang Xiaofan will start licking it as soon as it comes out. When someone calls the protagonist, the protagonist feels happy for a long time. It has only been less than ten chapters, and he doesn't dare to think about what will happen next, so he slips away.

No, is it really the small head that controls the big head? Not only is Shuiyue Lu Xueqi's master, but she is also related to your master. Don't you think this is a good thing?

Zhang Xiaofan is really a little speechless. The male protagonist Goldfinger has changed a lot. Are you still considering the direction of his original work? Should he become a nanny? The most important thing is that the original male protagonist is not just needed for you! It affects the perception very much. Does being so considerate of him consummate his marriage with Baguio (your position?) Or Lu Xueqi, etc.? (Although Lu Xueqi and others will not appear, there is no guarantee to what extent the author will protect them). Also, the previous life of the male protagonist and Lu Xueqi is not described in detail. When Xiao Zhufeng meets again, it feels like the author has implicitly acknowledged that the two have known each other for a long time and their behavior is well known to readers. The sudden dialogue description will appear greasy. .

I don't even have the desire to click on this introduction.

It's disgusting and cold, even Shuiyue Youji must be tolerated. . It's a waste of money to watch.

Rubbish, you have traveled through time, and you still care about the protagonists who are not the protagonists. You still talk about the protagonists all day long. It is simply bullshit. You have been a supporting role all your life and you are not enough. You have to be a supporting role in the novel.

What kind of JB plot is this? The Shuiyue plot is too abstract and abrupt, like TM eating💩💩💩

Is it better to go to the female channel for female channel books? What bad luck

Soul piercing means soul piercing, reincarnation and amnesia. At the beginning, you said that you ran away due to a conflict and were not in the village. Then how did you faint and your memory suddenly awakened inexplicably? The writing was too messy.

Every one counts, but no one can write well, and none can pass the test.

When you see Zhang Xiaofan, go up and lick it. Are you the protagonist or is Zhang Xiaofan the protagonist? If Zhang Xiaofan was the protagonist, wouldn't I just go read the original work?

When you combine work and rest, you don't see any work. You only see rest and rest. You might as well say that you are waiting for work with leisure 😰

The introduction just smells greasy and can't even pretend to be cool.

After reading a few chapters, you will know that what you write has one rebuttal point per page, and you can tell at a glance that you have dug holes that cannot be buried, and it is a messy batch.

When I saw the main character's name in the introduction, I knew the plot was probably going to be bloody.

How to say it. The person who can read this book is really Wolong. YY talents who live in their own world

Since there are multiple female protagonists, I'll take a look! Don't let me down

Just reading the introduction makes my scalp numb with embarrassment.

Is Zhu Xian a cultivating novel? It can't even be called fantasy, it's just a romance novel 🙂 There are actually some fans who write this

There are self-entertainment, literary youth, and the character Shen Yin. You can still see the mess from the front. Summary: A mess.

According to your introduction, what is the situation of worshiping Tian Buyi as your disciple, and then your junior brother Daoxuan?

I only read the first few chapters and it was all nonsense. The water is so bad. The author was drowned in the sea and came back to write a novel about revenge. Doesn't it disgust me? The writing is not attractive at all.

Sometimes when you feel that your writing is not making sense, or when you are embarrassed, you have to stop and think about it. If you don't stop and think about it or make corrections later, you will look at the good fans in front of you. If you really can't stand it and think about it, you will definitely not be able to continue writing like this. Alas, you can't write casually and awkwardly.

I don't know why I want to write about having close contact with Suiyue. This character is quite disgusting and looks like an aunt in the anime. I remember that the anime agreed with Xue Qi and Li Xun's engagement. Don't just teach Doxuan a lesson, Suiyue also has a responsibility. There was still talk later on, saying that the engagement to Xue Qi had been delayed, and it was suggested not to get married and give it away to someone else. Also, the strength in the back was basically invincible. So why did Li Xun keep him if he refused to kill him? Is he the green male protagonist? Li Xun has always been brought out as a disgusting character, and he likes to lick disgusting characters, right? There is also Fenxiang Valley who deliberately seeks trouble. He doesn't kill those who should be killed, and pretends to be a good person. Wouldn't it be a disgrace to his reputation to kill them all? Don't laugh to death. They even wrote about Li Xun asking for marriage. Are you okay? Fans still write this kind of plot. People want to be less poisonous, but you want to be more poisonous.

Will Tian Linger accept it? Tian Linger's first modeling part is the most beautiful

Alas, there is a common problem in the front part after it is put on the shelf but not in the shelf. After it is put on the shelf, the writing becomes more serious, and the writing style in the later part is also a mess, which is very embarrassing. Do you know that kind of thing? The writing is awkward, so I can't say that the writing style is different, but your article is quite good compared to other Zhu Xian's writing.

Let me give you a suggestion. After you finish writing a piece, use the kind of listening device that you are currently using to listen to books and listen to it to see if there are any problems with your piece. Do you understand where it is?

Will anyone really like this kind of joke?

You have to have brains but no brains (relying on foresight and foresight to plan or stick to your fate) You have to have brains but no brains (the use of golden fingers) You have to have heart and no heart (small head controls big head) There is no simple sense of maturity. It is like a time travel for elementary school students. Yes, the three realms in a year are awesome, and then what? It doesn't bring any benefits. Can a little reputation bring benefits to cultivation? It's not just a show-off, but it doesn't feel very satisfying. Anyway, the main character is just one... It would be the same if it were someone else.

After raising it for a while, today I saw the part about refining the Nine-Heaven Divine Weapon. There were frequent typos and duplications, and the reading experience was poor.