I Want to Be the Co-Owner of This World

If the author can see it, I would like to give some of my own opinions on the plot below. 1. Regarding the portrayal of the heroine's father, don't be too black and white. Absolute badness will detract from the plot. The description of his friendship for the heroine's mother is true, and his father-daughter love for the heroine is also true. If he does not have to kill the heroine to get the system, he can "love" the heroine and give him the noble status of the Crown Princess/Emperor Concubine, but power is what he desires, and seeking power has become his instinct. This plot of father and daughter fighting must be written with tension. The father's indulgence and pampering of the heroine in trivial matters under the premise that he cannot kill the heroine can enrich the character image. The heroine also uses this meager "father-daughter love" to seek benefits even though she knows that they will kill each other if there is a chance. It reflects the hero's father's obsession with power. In terms of characterization, the heroine's biggest enemy must be described as resourceful and knowledgeable. The enemy's strength is also an affirmation of the protagonist, who can win through complicated strategies. 2. Regarding the heroine's cultivation speed, it is recommended not to stumble here. It will affect the enjoyment and make it difficult to discover the subsequent plot. The heroine's father has the power, and even other kings have the ability to replace the bones. This requires the heroine to have at least a certain ability to protect herself, so the force value must be on. 3. The heroine's mother, the only woman who had a system before the heroine, really didn't leave anything behind? Don't you have your own power? I don't believe it. There must be a line of people in Zhao who are loyal to the heroine's mother. After getting to know the heroine, they should cooperate with each other inside and outside. Changing the master does not happen in a moment. It is important to cultivate one's own power, but it is also important to accept the mature power, and this will also give the heroine resources to a certain extent, allowing her to grow faster. 4. Since you are king, meet more interesting people. This is a very suitable subject for group portraits. Above I especially like the plot of this book and the character of the heroine. She is smooth, thoughtful yet sharp, knows how to make progress, absorbs information and knowledge like a sponge, and has her own thinking and opinions. I will keep up with the updates. If the subsequent portrayal of the heroine's character remains at this level, then I may have found a good book.

Well written, this kind of fluency, is this your first time writing? Tantan is so cute.

Looks good, waiting for the update😁😁

Very well written. This kind of subject matter is really rare.

Was what happened to Li Niang actually caused by him? That's very insidious. Is Xiaotan a little too impulsive, taking action without estimating the strength of his opponent? Not to mention not being able to kill him, what will he do even if he kills him? It is normal for the protagonist to be impulsive at a young age of fourteen, but as a protagonist, she cannot be so black and white. Even if she saves Hua Niang, Hua Niang's fate will not be much better. Another way is to use medicine that spreads in the air to make him tired/soft and weak, or find an opportunity to pretend to knock the person unconscious... This can save Hua Niang's life without having to conflict with the warrior. My lord, you have just started practicing, so please be patient. There is also the girl who entered the brothel with you. Now that you are exposed, what will she do? And will this flower girl really be grateful? Taking such a big risk I will be sold to the lowest brothel/have no friends to save/may be beaten to death. To save a girl with an impure mind who doesn't keep her mouth shut, won't she turn you in or leak your information the next time her life is threatened? Do you want to bet on her goodness? With your life? I read the novel and accept that the protagonist does some altruistic events in the early stage that will cause a lot of trouble and have no benefits at all, but I cannot accept that she will always do this, because to be compassionate requires strength rather than relying on the golden finger luck given by the author to escape disaster. I hope that some of her future experiences can teach her a lesson, letting her know that mercy comes at a price, which is also a lesson in becoming a lord.

I like big writing! And vote 2!

There are very few female protagonists fighting for hegemony, and the ones that are well-written are even rarer. It is also a pity for me to mention the disabled man in Phoenix Downstairs. I hope this book can be completed smoothly. I am very much looking forward to how Tan Qi will achieve the goal of fighting for hegemony and what kind of country he will build. In addition, I was a little worried when I saw the name of the protagonist. Fortunately, the author explained 😃

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