I Am an Apex Predator in the Game of Cultivating Immortals

It's a female author. I feel like she has ideas but can't control them. It's a pity.

If you write slowly and steadily, you will definitely be able to take off.

If the world is so cruel, then the pig's feet should have been exposed as soon as they arrived. After all, it is a cannibalistic society. Haven't seen meat, haven't seen people? Don't you want to eat at the bottom? Impossible? Since you eat them all, it means that the world is as dark as crows, but you feel disgusted. This is different from Shipu Education, but no one doubts it?

The setting is okay, but some aspects are a bit or very weak For example: There are benefits to cooperating with the official, right? But both are useless. The first one made me laugh even more. You are weak, but the reality has begun to be lurking in danger, and you have revealed your identity without much concealment. So what should you do if you seek revenge on your family in the future? You are too weak. You can't instantly defeat the enemy while monitoring outside, and you can't stay by their side all the time. In the end, you gave the authorities a way to protect them without monitoring, lol. The second point is the same. I don't want to talk about it anymore. Ask your friends to check it out yourself and see what they say.

I have seen a lot of starting points for these elements such as cruel decryption and immortality games. This book is not bad in this aspect. After all, the puzzle element can easily create suspense. The arrangement of the protagonist's identity and the immortal bones is very realistic and refreshing. It is quite suitable, but I prefer the original body to be transplanted with the immortal bones. In the story, there are too many relationships involving beauty and temptation. In fact, family and friendship can also be relationships. It is not just love. For those who go out to practice Buddhism at a young age, the inseparable relationship between parents and family is the first relationship. Are their parents really still there when they return home after practicing Taoism for decades? It is said that other people who time travel have the same personality as me, so maybe the protagonist just lost his memory. In fact, it was really him who did it. This thing looks very similar to what the protagonist can do 🤓

😥 I was tested just now, so I turned around and muttered to myself, so I shouldn't have been discovered.

It's an ancient novel with a bit of a rhythm problem and it feels like there's no main line.

I want to leave foreshadowing everywhere It depends on how you fill it in later Some places are written just for the sake of writing and there is no logic.

Is she the author of a female video? Why doesn't the real-life protagonist try to practice Qigong? Secondly, the power of the immortal cultivators in the game world seems a bit rubbish. In addition, the obsession of the ancient gods that appears is not a setting that pollutes the world. I have ideas but the writing is rubbish.

I feel that double penetration is a failure. When I am so excited, I wear it back to reality.

I hope the author will not be the same as the author of "Side Effects Entries to Cultivation of Immortality"

The more I write, the better it gets. I hope I will update it twice a day. One update is too little.

The writing style and plot are very good, much better than many authors. I thought it was a male author, but I didn't expect it was a girl. Unexpected. The suspense and hooks are not enough, and the feeling of continuing to read is not interesting; The imagination also has the pleasure of breaking through the human threshold. The reader knows, the protagonist does not know, and the interaction with the rookie, etc., This point needs to be innovative or written to make it more exciting; There is also writing around desire, revenge, superiority, and the relationship between men and women. I feel that this is a strong point. Of course, we must also pave the way. You can consider this design.

I feel like the protagonist doesn't know how to share information, he can only read it. If you don't tell me, everyone will read it. For example, you can say that there is a mole who is revealing the player's situation to the NPC. What is the player's advantage? Can't players level up? I can't become stronger and challenge players. Doesn't the system have a trading platform? What about plot mission rewards? There is only a forum, and the immortal cultivators themselves can use sound transmission to communicate. What is the use of this? What's funny is that the player can reveal to the NPC that he is a player. Are you going to engage in a rape plot 😥? If you return to reality, won't the country take control? The development of the Internet is not a guarantee. Big data knows what you buy. How many people can enter the game, and how can they bring out their abilities? I can't believe that people are still playing when the mortality rate is so high. Even if someone quits the game and hangs up, I'm still hung up on reality. Should I return to the game to be bullied and treated like a pig or a dog?