The Promised Sailing Game, What the Hell Is One Piece?

How can I put it, your game should be the most interesting before the top war. But after the battle at the top, it became extremely stretched. Especially the Wano Country chapter. I can't even watch the commentary at double speed. After the war, it became inexplicable. Well, the fact that the rubber fruit turned into the nikah fruit left me even more confused. Anyway, I always feel like my fate has been sealed by one sentence. Luffy is not just because he is Luffy. Luffy is Luffy because of the Nika Fruit. This is quite disgusting. In a word, your creativity can reach the pinnacle of the war at the top. After that I couldn't adjust it anymore.

It would be more appropriate to change the name of "The Great Voyage" to "One Piece". For fan fiction, it doesn't even have a name. It's hard to get this part of the traffic.

Except that the land is almost submerged and the world is still vigorously developing entertainment. This setting is a bit strange, but everything else is fine.

One player quota requires one million people. Can 10,000 players enter before the book is finished? Not to mention that some players simply gave up after being unable to play. The source of popularity is all the viewers watching the live broadcast, so why not just make it into an anime, so that the number of viewers can increase by one or two digits. Are the number of views of live broadcasts comparable to the number of views of anime?

I feel like it's better not to follow the plot and develop it based on the settings of One Piece. It should be quite interesting to explore the early stages of the game and the union naval battles in the later stage.

Having written so much, where have the players gone? The most important player in the game has disappeared.

There is a problem with the plot. I can't figure out why Roger's execution was not included since it is hzw. It's a shame that such a great plot and famous scenes don't have to be at the beginning.

I was originally looking forward to how you would write about the war😩

There is a problem. The male protagonist is purely invisible. I feel like he is just a transitional person.,,

You're a eunuch again, bro, if you take pictures like this, I'll block you.

A great setting, but there are still big bugs. How can the player's identity as an outsider be fulfilled? He also joined the Red-Haired Pirates. With Beckman's IQ, it is impossible not to notice it. Not to mention that so many people will enter the game in the later period. There are all kinds of birds, and there are probably many self-destructive identities. How to deal with the consequences when the characters in the game know that they are avatars?

Will the game created by the protagonist become real in the future? Or did you travel through time itself? What benefits does it bring to the protagonist? Does the role of emotional value not feed back on itself? I don't understand!

I'm a eunuch. I saved a lot of money.

? ? ? What's going on? A eunuch?

Although it is following the trend, at least it counts as half of food The approach in the article is tantamount to entertaining yourself to death. It is almost like a beautiful water world. If you don't consider living first, is it better to consider entertainment first? It is better to spend a prosperous era, discover a new water planet, and use this to promote enthusiasm in a world where entertainment is enough to promote enthusiasm (just complain The setting is too contradictory. Generally speaking, the story is generally not very good, and you just throw a bunch of settings at the beginning, plus the settings mentioned by the author, it is not very durable. My guess is, what are you talking about? Get out of my book list! Going to the back story, there are a lot of so-called barrage, which is so surprising that the official did not release the setting. To be honest, I have been tired of the same old writing by those who wrote it before. It is more interesting than ordinary pirate stories, but not much.

The book about World War II was the first to write about it, and several other books of the same type appeared all of a sudden.

Let me collect player characters from everyone. I don't have enough brains on my own, so I brainstormed. The format is: [ID:] [Gender:] [Character characteristics:] [Hope camp:] [Highlight moment:] (optional) Everyone try to combine the ID with the character characteristics. It can be secondary, it can be a wholesome life, it can be serious, it can be special, whatever it is, please speak up and I will adopt it as appropriate. However, there won't be too many characters written in the book. If you have ideas, please tell me. Don't be angry if you don't necessarily take care of them. Thank you for all your support!

A game with 100 players is called a public beta. Can the author check it?