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The writing is pretty good, the female protagonist is pretty good, and the male protagonist is not a bad guy, but I felt uncomfortable after watching it for a while. Why? The following is my personal feeling, only the first 10% of the content, welcome to discuss and correct me The beginning of the chapter gives the heroine a lot of aura, that is, good swordsmanship, tenacity, and no acceptance of fate, which makes the readers like her. But it immediately gives her a huge blow. Longquan Sword does not recognize her. This is growth for the heroine, but it is uncomfortable for the reader, because the reader is from the perspective of the heroine at this time, and this is not a male video. At this time, the male protagonist is recognized again. The reader and the female protagonist cannot see anything worthy of recognition from the same perspective. Then the reader's discomfort is transformed into a negative impression of the male protagonist, ranging from disapproval to disgust. The subsequent short-term plot did not express this emotion quickly, that is, it did not make the readers have a big change in the male protagonist, a change that was enough to make the negative impression disappear. Instead, it gave the male protagonist a highlight, while the female protagonist only had some changes in mentality (becoming mature) and did not substantially change the predicament The reader is a female channel reader, and the female protagonist can have feelings. The line can be not so strong in the early stage, can fall down, and can be less mature But the heroine has always been depressed, has been suppressed, has no substantial growth, and there is no hope of solving the dilemma, and even the male protagonist is one of her new dilemmas I am not saying that the male protagonist is not good, but he has not shown enough in the plot related to the female protagonist. Quality that is enough to be recognized by readers (of course, the readers here only represent myself) To sum up, if the heroine has been unhappy and the readers have been unhappy, then there is a problem. This cannot be explained by "slowly warming" The work is for people to read. Since the main perspective is the female protagonist, not the male, then the author is writing a character Under the premise of logic, the readers should be taken into consideration. There should be an outlet for negative emotions, instead of just getting over it by making a fuss. The readers are not the heroines, and they are not here to feel embarrassed Finally, I am not typing these words to criticize the author, but as a reader who has read the heroine's perspective all year round, I hope there will be more and more good works

The heroine is so weak. It's not a drama with a female protagonist at all. I gave it up. Moreover, the dialogue between the heroine and the male protagonist is so retarded. The highlight is given to the male protagonist. The master recognized by Longquan Sword is the male protagonist. The male protagonist has a noble status and extraordinary talent. The female protagonist has nothing and her efforts are useless😮‍💨. This is a drama with a male protagonist, right

This article is a growth story about a childhood sweetheart growing up. The pace of the plot is relatively slow. Since you want to grow up, there will be no strong and perfect protagonist from the beginning. Whether a character is strong or not should not be determined by her power and origin at the beginning. I want to write some stories about imperfect people becoming strong enough. I hope everyone will enjoy reading it.

This is a male-led drama, right? The male protagonist who is given all the highlights is abandoned.

I haven't started reading it yet, but readers of female immortal novels are generally stronger and hate the male protagonist's spotlight. It's difficult to balance the relationship between men and women in female immortal novels, so the male protagonist is usually a background.

It's so beautiful, the character setting, plot development, and detailed descriptions are all very good.

Come on, although some plots still need to be polished, the heroine's perseverance, fierceness, persistence, and values ​​​​such as family and friendship are very upright. I still like this kind of novel. I have read so many Goldfinger novels now that I am tired of it.

If you like to read novels that are not so Mary Sue, not so cheating, not so formulaic, and can be read word for word, this is a very good choice. It's a bit strange that the level of this article should not be so good that the rankings and subscriptions are not ideal. Maybe it is the influence of some comments. Even though these comments may have affected subscriptions, the author still maintained his grace and insisted on writing them down. Looking at it from another perspective, perhaps it is precisely because of this that the author maintains his own creative ideas and freedom.

Really well written! The heroine has such a strong heart at this age, so persevere! Like it very much!

Please update it, it's so well written, why haven't you updated it yet?

It's so rare to see such a decent fantasy novel at this starting point. When I read the first few chapters, I felt as if I was watching a modern and ancient legend, martial arts/fantasy from more than ten years ago. The carefully prepared background, the step-by-step plot, and the eloquent narrative were so touching. There is no golden finger, no exciting point of climax, but you can see it all at once, and when you look up again, it has been several hours. This is a good story, but unfortunately the current market does not like such stories. The author may need to make a choice. I have read less than half of it now, and I will wait and see what choices the author made.

It's so well written, please update it.