Dou Po, After Traveling Through Yao Lao, the Plot Is Spoiled in Advance

If Xun'er is the heroine (i. E. The wife of the protagonist "Yao Chen" in this book), then it will be very poisonous. The author must refrain from writing like this 😅

I've seen the latest, but some of it was skipped. How should I say, the concept is relatively new, and there are indeed relatively few old people who fight against time-travel medicine. However, the author's writing style is too immature, and the characters are relatively immature, which makes the overall reading a bit awkward and inconsistent. The current plot has always followed the original work, but the latest chapter has made some innovations, so overall it's okay. At present, there are few Dou Po fans that can be read, not as many as Douluo. This book can be read for a while, but the first QQ version has 50,000 words on the shelves. The author will have to work hard in the future.

Dear author, you really followed the original plot completely. Basically, the plot of the original work has not changed at all. Although the progress has been accelerated, it is still no different from watching the original work. What Xiao Yan did in the original work, Xiao Yan still does here. The biggest innovation is that Yaolao does nothing different from what he did in the original work, but his character has changed a bit. I hope the author can work hard after it is published. I don't mean to criticize you. I just hope it is not too similar to the original work. Otherwise, we can just read the original work directly. Why should we read the fanfic? Come on, author!

1. This 1 is not an ordinary 1. It is posted to prevent you from feeling that no one will read your book. 1

I was speechless after reading this book. I even lost my face when writing it. In order to copy the original work, you had a bunch of demon puppets, all with Dou Zong strength at the beginning, and two Heavenly Snake Mansion Dou Huang who were not at their peak. They fought in front of you for most of the day, only to pay a little injury, and took people away easily. They were not let go by you on purpose, and you couldn't catch up...

I hope I don't want eunuchs. As long as I don't write any brainless plots, I can book them all. There are not many good books about Dou Po nowadays.

Have you forgotten the plot of Qinglianhuo? What's so surprising about a pool of icy water? Nothing new. Just fast forward the original plot

Luo Liba is verbose, just like what Tudou wrote, nothing new, just copy and paste it.

Yi Tuo💩 is the same as the original. The settings are written randomly, and the magma next to the Qinglian Earth Core Fire can burn Dou Zun's puppet. How did the original Xiao Yan and Medusa get in? People from the Tian She Mansion in Shimo City came to grab Qing Lin, and they said that Xiao Yan couldn't catch up, so why not send a Dou Zun puppet to catch him? He had to go himself. I didn't read it later and just abandoned the book.

No, if not, just say, thank you.

Why not be the protagonist? You have to help others.