Legend of Sword and Wind: I Can Read Weapon Memory

1. After it was publicly revealed that Clam backstabbed the protagonist and killed 50 people in his own team, Gazi still swore allegiance to Clam as in the original work 2. Since the protagonist and Clam parted ways, Casca, who followed the protagonist, has not played a role in the relationship with Gazi 3. The protagonist has basically founded a country, the army has taken shape, and the basics have been laid. , And then led his elite troops to find Clam, and asked Clam to sacrifice the protagonist's army 4. The protagonist's heroine Amy went from missing to becoming a magician, to meeting the protagonist and then in the latest chapter, she did two major things. A fire did not burn the Clam to death, accelerated the blackening, and sacrificed herself. A large light bomb gave Batman a toy 5. As of the latest chapter, the protagonist's physical body has burped, and his spirit has possessed him to fight, and he has become a fairy 6. The protagonist's style throughout the whole process is just to join in the fun and then send him off, the so-called Tang Dynasty is over, it is Song Dynasty 7. The writing is good, it is recommended to read the chapter "The Death of Griffith", the protagonist's army killed Griffith with 10 shots (of course not) (Beat to death) is enough, and then it will be a dead clam, the finale, and then you can imagine it yourself. Except for the absence of ntr Casca, it is basically a sadist. Personally, I think the look and feel is average, so you don't need to watch it 8. The original work is a very twisted, physically uncomfortable darkness, but there is logic to follow, and the final result , everything has a reason, there is always a glimmer of hope, and the indomitable belief of the protagonist Gazi, this novel adds Finn's role, and reveals Griffith's true face on the spot. The result is still relying on the path of the original novel, but some things are impossible to lead to the results of the original novel with Finn's intervention, insisting on returning to the main world view, and then sentence The fate has already been determined. The basic setting of the original work is used to fill the holes. The protagonist shouts that he does not believe in fate, but is pushed to the cliff time and time again by the invisible hand of the author. Moreover, the protagonist makes major changes to the world line, such as making firearms to overthrow the original system, basically building his own country and army, and then everything goes back to zero and he is brutally killed. I don't think there is anything wrong with it. The meaning is that it just feels like forcing a photo into a much smaller frame and distorting it 10. But the author's writing style is not bad. If you read it as the DLC of the original work, it would be good. Just like the original work, you will sigh after reading it. But in fact, everyone searching for Jianfeng fans must feel that some of the characters that everyone likes can be in different parallel worlds without that. It's so miserable. After all, no matter how dark the fanfic is, it can't be better than the original work. It's impossible for a father to be like a son 11. In short, I basically read the latest word for word, except for some statements or battle chapters that do not advance the plot. The author's writing style is very comfortable to read, but I really can't agree with the current situation of this Eclipse. Goodbye

The author of the latest plot is completely immersed in his own world and cannot extricate himself. I think the meaning of fandom is to write his own protagonist's story in the world setting of other people's works, but the author still cannot escape from the so-called original plot. Is there any essential difference between your latest plot and the original work? Just one new female character and no tauren? The protagonist even has no physical body and can only possess the original protagonist to fight? This is so stupid. I don't have any objection to how outrageously you abused the protagonist before. After all, it is a new story with a familiar setting, but now the plot has no meaning and excitement at all, and it is a bit boring😑

When I thought the protagonist wanted to upgrade alone, he ran to confront Griffith, and then I contacted the previous article and thought it should be memory synchronization, and then I cut it directly. After a while, we should talk about the evidence, right? What, just kill Griffith? ! Why would you fight him alone? When I was fighting the Sima Necromancer before, I thought that I would be alone and let another person report the news. Then someone else would find out something was wrong and run to save the protagonist. Then I thought that the protagonist was just seeking death and simply couldn't control himself. This could barely explain why the protagonist didn't grow. Now, I finally realize that you haven't grown at all? ! Whenever the author starts to lay the groundwork and feels like it's about to take off, he gives me a thumbs up. I thought it was just to portray the protagonist as immature, stupid and naive. I'll save it for a while, and then I'll come back and see this big thing directly. This confrontation is not even about the protagonist showing off his superpowers to synchronize memories, or vaguely talking about his ability to see other people's memories. Why do you want to fight with him alone? Well, I can only say that I don't understand, but I was shocked

That little brat is actually interested in the heroine's little beard figure? ? ? Or did you just get lucky when your two companions died in front of your eyes? ? ? Author, can you please stop being so humble?

This book was well written in the early stages, and it completely preserved the cruel and dark atmosphere of the Legend of Jianfeng. But since the plot of Etch, it began to gradually collapse. The main reason is that the plot progresses too fast and there is no sense of rhythm at all. There is also a complete imbalance between the personal adventure part and the war part. Especially since it was separated from the original plot, it felt like the plot was completely out of control. It feels like the author's writing ideas gradually become confused, and finally ends in a rush. Give it 6 stars, after all, the first 60% of the writing is okay.

The protagonist grows too slowly and is not big enough. I feel that if I continue at this pace, I will probably abuse the protagonist. The original Jianfeng novel is already very miserable. If I read the novel and abuse it again, then what kind of Jianfeng fanfic should I read? I hope the author can improve, after all, there are very few Jianfeng fanfictions.

I've read Chapter 26, and I just feel uncomfortable and disgusting, with no sense of empathy. The protagonist is not even as good as Lu Mingfei.

Doesn't this kill Griffith and let him play house?

You've already read Legend of Jianfeng, so you shouldn't read any cool novels and stifle them. Reading these words gives me a headache. If you want to read cool novels, it's really not suitable to read Legend of Jianfeng and interesting fan fiction.

The Hand of God must die! ! ! Hum hum hum ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

There are too few fanfics about Jianfeng, and the writing style is so good. It's a good source of food. I hope there won't be eunuchs 😡

Is the protagonist indigenous? How can you write such a kind-hearted protagonist in such a cruel world? This level of morality is at least in the top 10% of modern times.

The author said that the core character of the protagonist is "protection", but as far as the protagonist is currently written, I have not seen the belief in "protection". The general's evaluation is that it is "a sharp weapon with too much thought". Now it seems that the protagonist's experience has nothing to do with "guarding", and the logic of the protagonist's behavior does not seem to be based on "guarding", but also based on "interest" like Gus. I initially thought that in the world of the dark and ignorant era, the protagonist's beliefs (ideals) that merged into the "past life" and the current life were protected. Now I feel like the author just wants to write about the second generation gazi. I looked back and found that the protagonist and Gazi were too similar 🙂. They both developed faith because of a woman 😐, and it was also because Gus turned into a vengeful beast. In the end, 80% of the time he was rescued by a woman, and then because of the woman's struggle with the hand of God 🙂. It gave people the impression that they were both thoughtful weapons, a weapon that Gus could use easily. At present, it seems that the memory of the protagonist's "past life" does not give the protagonist the ability to move independently, at least not from the perspective of the plug-in thought. .

It's very sword-like, but not a web-based novel... The original work should be able to be chewed up. It's hard for someone like me who has only a little knowledge to accept such a depressing and frustrating narrative. There are also a lot of various fan fictions from Qidian, such as Journey to the West, Three Kingdoms, Red Mansions, Naruto, and One Piece, but they remain the same. What everyone wants to see most is in each In the known world offline, the "protagonist" who is a traveler can change the plot and help the uneasy characters in the original work to break the predetermined fate. Some people always say that the setting of the original work should be respected, so this tests the author's skills. Under the same world view and setting, being able to write a tragedy into a satisfying novel is the charm of fan fiction.

The author's writing is delicate and the characters are well drawn. I can't read the story yet because it's a new book. I hope the author will continue according to his heart! No matter what, this Jianfeng fanfic is the best in my opinion. You should keep your Taoist mind steady in this book and don't be bothered by other people's words.

The author really can't figure out how to save the Eagle Group before the Eclipse and arrange this breakup plot in advance. In fact, saving people in the Eclipse is very simple. Just cheat and it's over. Why not cheat if there is a cheat?

Overall, it's a pretty good Jianfeng fanfic, with a bright future to look forward to, but there are two points that could be further improved. 1. This may be a characteristic of the author's writing style, but I feel that the characters are a little too emotionally exerted. There are often a long section of psychological descriptions that are too intense, and it rains heavily where only a gentle drizzle is needed. 2. The protagonist can't see much progress. This is the biggest problem, especially when there are problems with retrieving memories and emotions. I can reluctantly explain the protagonist's passion for trapping hunters to death because he hasn't touched many weapons yet, and it's normal for a child to be immature. But when he had sufficient combat experience, mastered a large number of weapons, and separated from the heroine, he should have become mature and experienced. As the second-in-command of the Eagle Group, he almost died because of impulsiveness and led his teammates to take risks. I can't say whether it was because of too little spiritual improvement, or because the protagonist's nature was too childish. The growth and progress of the protagonist is necessary, and the immature start is reasonable, but now this situation has somewhat affected the reader's perception.

The author has been immersed in his own art and cannot extricate himself. If you can, run away as quickly as possible. This kind of author who works behind closed doors can easily give you a poison that will disgust you to death.

The writing feels solid, but the plot is a bit cliche. With the protagonist's out-of-control and stupid setting and his ability to clean up key points, it's hard for people to like it Every time, the protagonist is stupid → Disaster strikes and he is beaten to pieces → Reinforcements, isn't this a pure shock wave? Come on, I hope I can really see the protagonist grow up, otherwise he will still grow up later and clear the troops quickly, and the key group is still beaten by the blood mother, then your novel will not survive

The author's writing style is very good, but the setting of some modern memories is not good, or does not reflect it, because some of the protagonist's behaviors, especially the behavior that caused the hunter to go offline, are only suitable for a fledgling teenager, and have a huge logical conflict with the behavior of adults, which will give you the illusion that your IQ is being rubbed against the ground.

The best ending

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It's over. Congratulations to the author for getting rid of the deus ex machina. I have no desire to watch the final battle before the last chapter.

Xiaozhong's favorite dry toilet is comparable to that given by Laoba and Ollie

The real protagonist of this book, Griffith, is actually defeated. Does the author want to change the book into a story about abuse?

I admire the author for not only being able to follow the original work but also creating original content that makes sense. I didn't expect to see a possible awakening ending of Da Jian here! Is this reasonable? Miura said it's okay! 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭👍👍👍👍

RT, I really can't stand sharing my body with other people, so I'm going to kick my ass after this trouble 😁

It is a very good fanfic, and the plot of the novel is also very reasonable. The last fanfic that I thought was good was Harry Potter: I Am Legend. I hope that the follow-up novels will maintain the current level 👍

Finished with flowers

The writing was really good in the early stage, but it was much worse when I joined the group in the middle stage.