If the Director Doesn't Speak, Don't Interrupt the Capital.

Don't write about Zhu Yawen. I think this person is very pretentious and hypocritical. Does anyone feel the same way?

I couldn't stand it until halfway through the first chapter. It was really written in such a literary way that I couldn't stand it even with the main character Sissi. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.

It's not just a pile of messy and meaningless words that is called Wenqing. If you don't have the writing skills, don't pretend to be a writer. People who read it will have a headache. I don't know what Wenqing is. I suggest you read the first few dozen chapters of "I Really Can't Act".

Such a cute little Liu

Beautiful photos

I haven't finished the first chapter yet, but there are too many adjectives. The author wishes he had to add some adjectives to every pair of shoes.

Ah! I can't stand it, my head hurts. It's not that I can't watch young people, but you are too messy. It feels like a lot of people are buzzing in their ears.

Alas, I have read almost 10 chapters. I also like to watch the heroine Lao Liu, but I can't stand it anymore. I feel so tired. First, there are too many dialogues and too many people interrupting. It feels chaotic and noisy. Third, I feel that Lao Liu in this period has not been well portrayed. He should be lively. He is written as a literary youth after being hacked. I really can't stand it now. Come on, let's go now. It's really hard to find a book.

What are you writing about? It's better to change its name to Zhumeng Entertainment Circle.

Dog licking article. . I really can't stand it

This writing technique is really annoying. If you follow the literary youth, don't make love progress so fast, pretend not to understand, and all kinds of messy things are really discouraging.

The biggest problem with this book is that it's too licky, even for a fairy! Such huge capital and relationships! So licking. It's a bit disgusting that the male protagonist becomes a tool

The plot is written in a mess, and there are also problems with the way it is written. It likes to be vague, there is no timeline, and the transitions are not written. It goes directly from one place to another, without a process.

A bunch of meaningless words and paragraphs, very contrived. I feel like it would be a plus if they were removed.

Lao Liu's system and the capital that dare to pursue it are basically all losses.

Writing a novel is inexplicable, I don't recommend reading it

Cut it off. There are more descriptions of the surrounding environment and objects than dialogues in the plot. You can make the protagonist a bit more literary and youthful, but you have to write a literary youth. Sometimes the dialogue is so confusing that it's really awkward.

This is the same as the science and technology book. That kind of writing will make people tired of aesthetics.

Da Liu's meal money is not so easy to earn haha

Where have I read your first chapter?

The plot is a bit messy, especially the super-body part. I couldn't help but complain after reading it. In addition, the protagonist is like a pure love warrior, and the literary youth is a bit artificial.

Your nonsense literature is amazing.

It's Liu Yahua again. I've seen so much that I'm not interested in reading it. In that book of yours, you said the heroine is Jing Tian. I'll give it a read.

I pick up money at every turn. How do I get entertainment articles nowadays? In China, I haven't even figured it out before I open a new copy~ I haven't gotten better yet, and it just came out.

Is the title of your novel spelled backwards?

The male protagonist is a bit girly and blushes at every turn.

To be honest, this novel was a bit uncomfortable for me to read. I felt that it was just a few words here and there, but it couldn't be connected at all. It was uglier than The Promise. It was the most incomprehensible of all the entertainment novels I have read. The author's private goods are much more private than those in Jiang Wen's movies.

The title of this book is a bit redundant. Isn't it a director's capital to be able to say such things?

After reading the first chapter, I feel that the author wants to express the feeling that the protagonist is awesome and takes the family to take off, but how can you feel awesome if you are reborn by luck and then cheat and copy the answers?