Perfect World: Start by Worshiping the Lord of the Bronze Coffin

Generally speaking, it is food. As a full order, so far, from beginning to end. This book has good points and bad points. Advantages: 1. Creativity, from the opening plug-in, the entry point, to the weapons the protagonist refines, all give people a refreshing feeling. 2. Updated. When it was released, I dared to do ten chapters without saving the manuscript, and I did what I said, and I had to finish it without sleeping. This kind of explosion is worth learning from some bad authors. The average daily updates are also around three. It seems to have potential for tentacle monsters, but I don't know why the rules haven't been updated. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. Some chapters have flaws, and some plots are unnecessary. Deleting them will add points and achieve better results. It's superfluous. 2. Rhythm, we should learn from great theologians like Tudou how to write rhythm more smoothly. Summary: From my personal point of view, if these two shortcomings can be overcome, this book is expected to be a high-quality book, and it will be upgraded from food to jelly. Remarks 1: I hope the author will start this book well and finish it well. As a reader, I can tolerate some of the shortcomings of the work. If you dare, I will give you bad reviews, switch to poisonous weeds, banish your soul to the Nine Netherworld, and teach you that you will never be reincarnated. Remarks 2: If you finish writing this book seriously. If the author of the next book opens a trilogy of fanfics, I hope you will learn from your lessons and use your strengths to avoid weaknesses. Once it's finished, I'll read it again.

I hope the author can stay steady and write better and better

1. The Qing Emperor was astonishingly wise, but before he could become an immortal, he entered the Immortal Realm of the Desolate Tower. 2. The Immortal King of the Six Paths of Reincarnation, the realm of the Immortal King, to evolve the outer reincarnation, the god within the god. Really two big sleeping dragons and phoenix chicks👍

In fact, in the original version of Perfect World, the upper realm preys on the lower realm, or is it done by Jiutian's side? If you look at it enlarged, it's the same on both sides. There is no distinction between good and evil. It's just a matter of camp.

Finally, there is a novel with a positive outlook on life, without the main character following Jiutianxiedi.

Have you traveled to foreign lands? Some things are written randomly, and I take it for granted! (🐶)

The original work of "The True Man Without Shang" directly breaks the story when faced with the desolation of becoming an emperor.

Before the Immortal Ancient War, foreign lands and Jiutian didn't have to be enemies to be honest. They came from the darkness without a watch, and they had to join the darkness. They could also transcend and form their own lineage. Just like the burial realm, the weird and unknown side had no future. The ten emperors and the ten ancestors were a carrot and a pit, and the weird clan was very pitiable. Is it possible to regard the darkness-infected ethnic groups like the foreign land as a truly strange tribe, and only regard them as cannon fodder and servants? The creatures eroded by darkness in the original novel are devouring each other. This is not treating the dark creatures as the same kind. It is recommended that the protagonist stand on his own in the darkness, just like the double undercover in the perfect world.

Since you are already in a foreign land, learn to double undercover, lead the foreign land to rise, and defeat the fairyland.

What are you writing about? They have become dark creatures and they go to the other party to take in their daughters. Get the fuck out of you

I couldn't stand it any longer, so I slipped away!

If you add the Iron Triangle, it will be immediately useless. Don't be embarrassed if you are a villain. Kill them

Anyone who has read the original work will understand that foreign lands are very united and can play in a group.

The first part before becoming an immortal was fine, but later on the characters changed, and the content of the plot of becoming an immortal queen was even more pure. Listen to people's advice, eat enough and don't waste money.

The plot about getting along with the two female void beasts seems a bit weird.

The latest two chapters gave me the feeling that my position is not firm, and I feel like it is going to ruin the character. In addition, the recent updates are unstable 😅

Blindly belittling the Perfect Supreme and the Supreme of the Holy Ruins, and infinitely exalting Emperor Zhetian, Heng Daoguo is actually comparable to the second generation Ye Fan, and he has become a piece of garbage.

If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, then don't write them. The descriptions of family, friendship, and love make people feel numb.

Regarding the latest setting chapter, I think it's well-founded and awesome. Why is it said that No. 10 And Ye Fan cannot be killed? Because they will be on the altar of sacrifice in the future, and many colleagues feel that they cannot be messed with. Brother, you are the protagonist in this fan, why are you better than these original protagonists? Besides, Shi Hao's strength is said to be on par with or even surpass the Bronze Coffin Master. How is that possible? If he surpasses the third level, can his appearance be changed by the owner of the bronze coffin? The strength of the three of them, if the master of the bronze coffin is the great emperor of the world, Shi Hao and the other three are the great saints. They are capable of fighting, but everyone knows that they are not his opponents.

Alas, let's talk about it after a while, I don't even know what I'm writing next!

After enduring the Immortal-breaking Curse and the Five Seals of Reincarnation, I met the Emperor of Flowers, and created the rudimentary method that made Emperor of Flowers nod and approve. At this time, the author said that he had reached the alternative enlightenment in Zhetianli. Even Zhechui did not dare to brag like this. The author just wrote it out.

This has been updated and I don't have much desire to read it anymore. I'll wait a month or two for it to be released and see what the reviews are like before I plan to read it.

I told you not to show off in those few pictures, don't show off, don't pretend to be cool, I suddenly put them on show, and now I can't write them better or worse.

I don't know what I'm writing when I become an immortal. It's just like chewing the beans and saying it's an assembly line.

I suspect that what I read is not a perfect fanfic. The time description of this novel is: tens of days, and the current longest time is a hundred years. What is enough for dozens of days? This is not to cover the sky, everyone is short of time and short of life. Slipping away

Why change the world? The original protagonists grew up in their own world and had to go to other worlds to find opportunities! If you want to write that the protagonist Invincible goes to other worlds to play, are you going to go to other worlds to raise the protagonist as a nanny?

The writing behind the protagonist, the Quasi-Immortal Emperor, is so speechless!

Why did you go to the Tomb of Gods world again?

Why is it suddenly a sacred tree? There was no sign at all. I saw you still had that Menghai, bounced it for a while, and then suddenly jumped to the sacred tree.

I just came to Qidian. I don't know some things and I haven't read the original work. I only know a little about it from tweets and other introductory videos. Looking at this book alone, I feel as if the author who did not become an emperor in the first part and who became a priest in the second part is not the same person. The story seems to be rigorous and compact, which is fine. But some of what I write after the Half-Step Sacrifice is the same as the AI ​​articles produced by the Zhetian Small Workshop of QQ Novels.