Comprehensive Comic Kanji: at First I Thought It Was Azur Lane

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If you want to write about the appearance of FGO's characters, make it clear in the introduction. I didn't understand the meaning of the introduction at the beginning of the game. When I saw an FGO character suddenly appeared at the back, I realized what it meant. To be honest, I am only interested in watching the Kanji story, and I am not interested in the others. I just want to read Kanji stories. Forgive me, I cannot accept the sudden appearance of other game characters.

This kind of novel is the most taboo for original female protagonists. The protagonist also has a human female protagonist. Is the author trying to make up for his regret by throwing his own white moonlight into the novel?

I really found out that not many people who write about ship girls can write about single fingers, so I assigned you to live it up.

Aren't there three port areas? Gua! I want to see the big fight between the head maids and the ladies!

You wrote that the appearance of the same ship is different from the game. It doesn't matter if someone who is exactly the same as your wife is next to someone else.

Very good, except for that disgusting person named Xiao. It would be very careless if we didn't kill him later.

After reading Chapters 75 and 76, I stopped because I didn't know what to write about... I thought about it. I thought about it over and over again. You should divide it into volumes and then reflect the core of the volume in the names of the volumes. Otherwise, the readers will look a bit confused, like reading the beginning of a new book.

This is another kind of Kanniang article that wears the skin of ship B, but is actually ship R.

There are more than 500 ship girls in the port area, and it takes nearly two years to get one every day. You still have to torment the human harem?

There's a story about amnesia out of nowhere, and it doesn't follow the previous one at all. I don't know what I think about it.

Doesn't the author know that these three games all have a grudge against each other?

Human heroine? ! I'm wondering if this isn't a Kanniang story? ! Fall in love with a ship girl and have children with humans, right? !

What's the difference between your 75 chapters and me reading Mystery and letting me read Destiny? ? ? You are really seeking death. How brave do you have to write like this?

After reading more than twenty chapters, the human woman appeared in almost every chapter. I looked back and it was indeed a ship girl novel. So the question is, in a novel with the theme of ship girls, the role of human women is more important than that of ship girls. What is the reason?

What are you talking about? Changing the dungeon without excessiveness is as irresponsible as the ending of the dream.

The writing was obviously good at the beginning, but it changed after reading it. Starting from Shangba Island, the writing style became very strange, especially the few pictures on the shelves. They were too slow and had no explosive points. A rich second-generation yellow man took the lead for seven chapters. However, at the end, it was brushed off and even the pretense was boring. Have you ever thought that after a long period of pulling and suppressing, you need a breaking point for readers to vent? The venting here does not necessarily mean to do something to Huang Mao, but to let the progress of the plot have a breaking point that makes the readers happy. For example, when Lexington recognizes, reunites, and kisses the protagonist, let her activate the ship suit because she loses control of her emotions, and the energy stance bursts out instantly, covering the entire port, forming a stance energy pressure that suppresses all foreign ship girls in the port. Their spines buckled under the pressure, and their bodies were so heavy that they couldn't breathe. The rich second-generation Huang Mao nearby was directly forced to his knees by the pressure. His scalp exploded and his heart beat violently, making him realize what kind of monster he had been struggling with recently. And this monster is now lying in the protagonist's arms like a little girl, clinging to his arms. Let the rich second generation recognize the reality that they are ordinary people. At the same time, it can also be described from the side that the strong admiral and his shipgirl Tennessee were shocked by Lexington's strength. After Lexington recovers from the protagonist's arms, you can also find a reason to improve her strength. For example, because of her reunion with the protagonist, the emotional explosion that has been accumulated for a long time has sublimated her ship's energy position, just like giving out rings in the game can improve attributes. In this way, there are pretentious slaps in the face, beauties in the arms, clowns on their knees, shipgirls found, and her strength has been improved, making readers feel both refreshed and rewarded by watching it, just in time to vent all the previous drag and depression in one breath. Instead of ending the story in a dull way after retrieving Lexington, saving up for a long time, and not having a single explosive point, this will only make readers feel that there is no point in delaying it for so long, and you are just trying to count the words. In addition, today's dream plot is also a failure, because the pace of your writing is too slow, and the precursors you gave before entering the dream are not clear. If you don't read it carefully, you will just feel confused. I hope the problem of too slow pace can be solved later.

CRB mix? I can't write anything good if I don't understand the basic settings of each company.

There are too many things to add, including BRC and f go. Can you write it like this? , Especially the name of the ship girl, I can't tell which one is which? It is recommended to add a letter to the name of the ship girl, otherwise it will be impossible to tell which game you are writing about as a ship girl. I feel that f go can be completely removed, and it is impossible to write it at all. I want everything, but I can't write anything well 😅

There is no cause and effect, and the latest chapters made me feel like the protagonist had changed. It felt like the first few chapters of a new book. .

It's just been released. What's new in this update is inexplicable. It has nothing to do with the previous plot. It's like writing a new novel with another person. Damn it

This way of writing, the author's family needs to hire an expert.

To be honest, the front was fine, but there was one problem when adding humans. It was obviously a drag and a lack of development.

Everyone! I have only played Ship B, but not Ship C or Ship R. How about it? Is it fun? Can I still play?

The chapters about the nurse feel too disconnected and have no connection with the previous chapters. Looking for another book.

I would like to ask the author how much skipping can be used to skip the whole paragraph about the nurse's amnesia.