I Have a Problem with My Cavalry

You haven't written any of the topics at the end of the introduction. In the first three chapters, I didn't see what your main plot was. I have been struggling with the system, writing too many unnecessary descriptions. What readers want to see is how cool you are and what your main plot is. No one is interested in your self-pleasure settings. Even if you switch to it, you will be reborn in the horse-and-blade game starting from adding points. Traveling as an apprentice knight to obtain a bonus point system, the points you can write are much more than yours. There is no sense of crisis, no events, no sense of involvement of the protagonist, and no sense of expectation. I didn't expect that you would have 750 recommendation votes. If the monthly ticket is 0, you can see that no one is buying your book.

I will always come to help with the new book.

Basketball Gu Zun Kobe, Tiger Boy, Ultraman Cool, I Can't Do It (This big brother's name is full of ridicule and he is easily beaten. He doesn't care, the author can't handle it. I believe he can understand it if I change it to "I can't do it". Although the author is too timid to list your "real name", I still want to say thank you.)

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