Naruto: Rise from Iwagakure

Have you ever been a ninja? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The timeline is a mess

Your opinion represents your own. First of all, it is too low to carry the upper line in the village. At most, it's only at the film level, and it's even difficult to go beyond the film level. The high-level super shadow must be Uchiha Madara and Senju Hashirama. As a low-level super shadow, you can be as good as the 3rd generation Raikage. 1 Vs 10,000? Impossible. Right. The second is the magic board. That is the background introduction of pig's feet, past and present life. There is no need to force some. This is so stupid. Let's talk about Fei Lei Shen Niu. Of course, it's the same as if you've mastered the instant body technique. As for Hanzo, water teleportation is easier to use over a short distance than Flying Thunder God, right? This is where one person can see hope. Then the main story is all in Konoha. Right, you can do it even if you jump out. You can also have your own ideas. You can exchange for B-level ninjutsu and secret techniques on the black market. It's just about money. If you have the money, you can do a lot of things. For example, looking for Tsunade. At least it can be said to be true. Then there are three general plug-ins in the world of Naruto. There is no hope for you in the village. First, White Zetsu (White Zetsu's ability has high and low levels, the worst is genin and chunin level). Second, senjutsu (a weakened version of the curse seal, the curse seal is Jugo cells ➕ Orochimaru soul fragment ➕ sealing technique). Third, the tailed beast (the tailed beast does not need to be part of it. It can also be part of the material.) Only time can be saved by jumping out, such as Zabuza and Haku at the beginning. Can you please come down? While they and Kakashi were injured, you wiped out the underworld in the Land of Waves for him. Isn't it solved? Zabuza is a very pure ninja. If the employer doesn't have you spending money to hire them, it will be over. In the middle of Konoha, the country of Iron can learn swordsmanship, the country of craftsman can get a weapon, the country of bears can look at meteorites, and the country of Taki can look at it. Wait, then look for Monk Tulu. Their sealing skills are also very powerful. They are available in various countries. Wait until the time comes. The collapse of Konoha, isn't it an opportunity? Directly lead people to do Danzo. It's too easy to hit the Uchiha triple hook, don't do 1vs1. Bring a small psychic animal, a hamster🐹, or a squirrel🐿. You don't need to be too strong to solve the illusion. That's it. Grab a wave of roots. When the angle dies, the scorpion dies. Especially grab a wave when the scorpion dies. Pick up the leak. You can say whatever you want about the 4th scroll. Can't it be written as inheritance? Let's talk about 2 creations. What is good and reasonable. Reasonability is more important than anything else. For example, earth clone, water clone, and thunder clone. Can I be a fire clone or a wind clone? It's just not that stable and difficult, but it's achievable. For example, fire dragon bullets, water dragon bullets, earth dragon bullets, or thunder dragon bullets. Can. If there is an earth wall, can it be a fire wall? A thunder wall is an electric grid quilt. Reasonable 2 creations. Then there are materials that many fans ignore. Especially psychic beast materials. For example, if we want an invisibility cloak, can we go to the desert to find a lizard and use its skin to make one? For example, many chakra absorption techniques. Let's make one out of bat teeth. It's normal for the ninja world to have ninja beasts that absorb Chakara. Bats are an example. My personal suggestion is that you can do a lot by jumping out. Sound Ninja Village was very good but was wasted later.

Holy shit, the author is so impressed with himself that he keeps preaching and doesn't improve his strength. Damn it, he couldn't write this fanfic even after 10 years of cerebral thrombosis.

There are so many female characters in the original novel, does it have to be an original one?

The jinchuriki chakra is not afraid of the lack of blue in the unblooded transplanted sharingan eye. Sharingan plug and play

No, this portrayal of the Iwa Ninja Village is too weak. Even Orochimaru can cause trouble for the Iwa Ninja. This is not in Konoha. Orochimaru is familiar with the Great Barrier of Konoha, but the Iwa Ninja are not familiar with it. The writing is too funny. It's true that even cats and dogs can give Iwa Ninja a try.

It's chapter 40, and the protagonist doesn't know ninjutsu. Why don't you go into the factory?

If you're not a native ninja village and you can't even pass the political review, you're still a Tsuchikage. Are you dreaming?

What do you think the Kage level and the entire human village are? In the anime, the third generation turned all the ninjas against him, so no one helped him, and he waited until he was dead to do anything.

There is a lot of nonsense and the protagonist's strength has not increased much in Naruto World, only the strong are respected.

It's really nonsense, don't worry about it. You have given yourself so many dramas at just a few years old. Author, what do you think? Can you put yourself into each role to think about the problem? To write a good novel, you must first give each character soul and thinking. Forget it, I won't say more, author, your writing skills are pretty good, but the characters and plot of your novel are really like children's play house.

I have read about 10 chapters, and I feel that the protagonist's abilities are quite mediocre and not impressive.

Orochimaru makes a fuss about Iwa Ninja! He even ran away from the soil! Don't Iwa Ninja have any barriers?

The reason why so many people write about Konoha is because there is a wild dog on the roadside of Konoha. There are too many plots, and readers can only go to Danzo if they have any opinions. Why no one writes about Kumogakure Iwagakure? Because on the first day I became a shadow, and on the second day I was able to destroy Konoha and end it directly.

Dear adoptive fathers, don't miss it if you pass by it. If it's good to watch, collect it, recommend it, and give it a monthly pass. If it doesn't look good, just curse before leaving. Don't be idle 😡😡😡😡

Some of the writing and plots are very discouraging For example, Uzumaki Koso, and probably Uzumaki Nagato And a non-Iwagakure native, various actions to induce Iwagakure's senior officials, suppressing the descendants of high-ranking wealthy families (Kurotsuchi, Deidara) in terms of status, and forming gangs to find a group of teenagers from other villages to join forces to get to the top. What do the current Iwagakure senior circles think? There's something wrong with the logic, you're a good pigeon 😅

Didn't Danzo know that the protagonist was an experimental subject? This is too fake

The first is the origin of the protagonist. Although it is passable, it is actually too far-fetched. It is difficult for people to accept such a complicated identity. The second is ability. Although Naruto is called the Legend of the Eyes of the Five Villages, but since you chose the Earth Ninja Village, you have been given another With the ability of the earth, you can completely break away from the constraints of blood vessels and ninjutsu. Earth, water, fire, wind, and thunder make up the five elements of the world. Yin and yang combine to create all things. According to the writing method of fantasy novels, it is very good to start from the earth element and cultivate all things into six paths. The choice is to push the basic Naruto fanfics (Red Sand, Escape from Konoha) to the author. These two books neither follow the main line of narratives as most fanfics do, nor do they think of any writing that will cause the plot to collapse. The timeline is also very good. I also wrote about my own views on the anime Naruto. A thousand people have a thousand Hamlets. Novels without their own views will basically lose a large number of people at the charging stage.          ——Finally, I hope the author will work hard and make further progress.

Do you want to take photos of Meimei?

You are so moved that you have goosebumps.

It's a stallion novel again, with 8-9 out of 10 plots, I don't know what it's talking about. Apart from being the same as the original novel, there isn't much of an adaptation. I didn't see the protagonist's efforts, but I saw a lot of the women around me and I was convinced!

The author is a man who feels a bit like a woman 😐 It's all about self-impression, okay, it's okay to be moved, right? I want to ask where the process went? Naruto's mouth escapes, right? But people have a process, and a fight can be considered a process, 🙂 Invincible, brainless, and a millionaire, I can't see the front part of the back part, I really can't stand it,