
Ultraman: My Sister Megumi
奥特曼:我的姐姐居间惠
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 135k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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0Monthly votes
484Recommends
1.1kFans
63Chapters
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Why do you have to write the male protagonist in the early stage when writing novels now? It's lazy. Then later. Highlight his power. Is it fun to show off like this?
All light novels - fan derivatives - the most monthly votes - updated within three days - less than 300,000 words, why does this book appear in the fifth place?
A little suggestion
The author has too little preliminary preparation and insufficient portrayal of the protagonist. As a result, it is difficult for readers to take this setting of not wanting or accepting responsibility. After all, the protagonist is not an extremely skinny person, nor has he lost confidence in life, so why is he always doubting himself and choosing to escape. It is understandable that I want to depict the growth of the protagonist, the sublimation of the soul, and the shaping of heroism and divinity, but the current feeling is too awkward. It is better to set a person as cynical. He does things casually because he is too talented. He plays with everything and makes mistakes carelessly. Only when he regrets the mistakes he made will he truly wake up (here you can create a supporting character to interpret a story, which can also reflect the author's writing power). In this way, the description will be simpler, the plot will be easier, and you will understand the weight of responsibility as you grow up.
Are the end of Chapter 4 and the beginning of Chapter 5 repeated?