
Dragon Ball: Gambit Refuses to Return to Planet Vegeta
龙珠:开局拒绝返回贝吉塔星
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1 Gohan is not the protagonist in the future time and space, Sun Wukong is the eternal protagonist. As long as Sun Wukong is there, no matter what kind of difficulties or powerful enemies, they will eventually be solved. Because of this, Bulma will build a time machine to let Trunks go back to the past. There is only one purpose: to send special medicine to Sun Wukong to prevent Sun Wukong from dying of heart disease. In the original future time and space, Sun Wuhan was killed by Androids 17 and 18, so Sun Wuhan is not the protagonist. , At the same time, the Z warriors in the future time and space do not have the God's perspective of the traveler protagonist. Except for the Earth Dragon and Borunga, they have no means of resurrection and cannot resurrect Sun Wukong who died naturally due to heart disease. 2. The true nature of a man. Basically all time-travelers will build a large harem, so that they can be worthy of the rare time-traveling opportunity. At the same time, almost all readers must also hope that the protagonist will accept more women, so can the protagonist be allowed to have more women? Are Ma, Taisi, the genius thief Hao Siqi, Lan Qi, Princess Meisha, the guardian of the gate of the devil Meira, the snake princess on the snake path of the underworld, No. 18, Zanjia, No. 21, Bados, Kesi, and Markarita included in the harem? 3. It would be too wasteful for the protagonist not to absorb others. Firstly, those enemies are not only powerful, but also have many special powerful skills and abilities. Some of them are even not possessed by the protagonist. Since they have to be eliminated, it is better to use them as waste, squeeze out their value, absorb them, and make them part of the protagonist's strength. Secondly, even if some enemies are eliminated, their souls still exist. Even in the original work, those who became spirits after death The enemies of the soul have caused a lot of trouble. For example, Dr. Gero and Dr. Myuu, who turned into souls after death and went to hell in Dragon Ball GT, created Hell 17 and merged Hell 17 with Cell 17 to form Super 17. The villain Hatz in Dragon Ball Heroes, who turned into a soul after death, also caused great harm. At the same time, someone may resurrect those villains again for some purpose. Wasn't Frieza resurrected by Sorbei using the Earth Dragon Balls? But if the protagonist absorbs them, it is equivalent to preventing them from causing trouble again or being resurrected by others after they become souls after death. Therefore, the protagonist can use the Qi Forced Absorption Technique to absorb the enemy, thereby gaining everything good about the enemy including memory, mind, wisdom, strength, skills, abilities, etc., But will not inherit any bad aspects of the enemy, and the protagonist's appearance and appearance will not change in any way, okay? Author! 4. The protagonist has already learned the Adrat clone technique. At the same time, Tianjin Fan has the Four Body Fist, Piccolo has the Namek clone technique, and Krillin has the Kiyuan Slash clone technique. So can the protagonist use these four clone techniques to study the multi-shadow clone technique in Naruto? Kokaku can also use the multiple shadow clone technique to do many things at the same time, such as some clone training, some clone research and creation of skills, abilities and moves, and some clone learning and research of technology. The side effect of the multiple shadow clone technique is that it will make the protagonist tired when the clone is released, but the protagonist can let all the clones rest while working, and can also specially set aside a part of the clone to rest)? 5. The protagonist's understanding is so strong, and he knows so many skills and moves. The protagonist should be allowed to create skills and moves that are far more powerful than the original Qigong Cannon and the Ten Times Kaio Fist Turtle Style Qigong Wave: Vegetto's Final Turtle Style Qigong, Gogeta's Star Explosion, Super Large Turtle Style Qigong, Punishment Punisher Shield, Star Destroyer, Meteor Explosion, the Ultimate Turtle Style Qigong that is even more powerful than the super-large Turtle Style Qigong, and Star Explosion to defeat the Evil Thought Wave, so can the protagonist create these skills and moves, and can he even use these skills and moves in several times the Kaio-ken state? 6. Can I send a picture of the protagonist's hairstyle as an Easter egg chapter in a novel and the chapter name is "Protagonist's Hairstyle"? Could you please help the author read these six messages?
The number of hair determines strength, so Bald Klin has always been the loser. Super race hair transformation is getting more and more.
Here I will start to give the author a suggested analysis of the strongest players in Dragon Ball. The No. 1 All-King. This guy is introduced at the beginning as the biggest god in the universe. Remember, he is the greatest god in the universe, and there is no one else. This means that he has the highest status, and no one is equal to him. He seems innocent, but in fact he is very thoughtful. Even Beerus may not have noticed that when King Quan said that he should replace the God of Destruction, and then said it as a joke, it meant that King Quan was not an idiot who didn't understand anything. He had an IQ, and it was very high, otherwise he would not have changed the God of Destruction easily, because he knew that the God of Destruction was the cornerstone of maintaining the universe. , And the reason why he wiped out 6 universes is unknown, but from the fact that the high priests did not object, we can imagine that there must be something wrong with it. Otherwise, Quan Wang, who likes to have fun, would not do that, because too few universes would be boring, so don't treat this guy as a fool who doesn't understand anything, because an idiot cannot be the Quan King. Second, the Great Priest, his description is the most powerful person in the universe. Note that he is the most powerful person, and Quan Wang is the greatest god. The difference is one word. If the comic author did not create any suspense, it means that Quan Wang must be stronger than the Great Priest, but this is just a guess. Test, there is too little information to analyze, but what can be analyzed is that he created the ultimate freedom. After Sun Wukong learned it, his hair color and personality will also change. I kind of guess whether the great priest has the responsibility of cultivating angels. Otherwise, what is his purpose in creating the ultimate freedom? Moreover, although the high priest has an easy-going personality, he also has his own needs, which is the prosperity of angels. When the apprentice angel Mels disappeared, the high priest's eyes and tone changed, saying that he could no longer lose any angels. One can imagine the fate of the angels in the six universes that Quan Wang had previously erased. From this, it can be seen that the high priest is not a person without desires, he also has needs. Third, angels, to be honest, I don't want to analyze this thing. The reason is that they are very complex and changeable. They not only follow the rules (if they don't follow them, they will be erased), but they also want to test the bottom line of the rules. Anyway, they repeatedly jump between the two lines of rules and irregularities. You can say that they remain neutral! He is indeed neutral, but it doesn't matter if you say that he didn't help. People taught you to improve your strength without personally interfering with the order of the universe. You can't say that he did it. Anyway, I won't do what the rules don't allow me to do, but I want to do what the rules don't prohibit. It's called an angel who jumps repeatedly. His bottom line is super fickle. Fourth, Gods of Destruction. Although they are gods, they are gods in the universe. Unlike angels, they are sent by the King. Even if the angels of the universe are wiped out, it will be no big deal. The main character is a poor god who can only walk sideways in the universe and kneel down in the universe. He is most afraid of upsetting the King that day and will be wiped out or replaced. The God of Destruction will be miserable. The most pitiful thing is that there is a life limit, and angels, The reason is that no one knows how many Gods of Destruction there were before Beerus, and the angel Whis said that after Beerus died, Sun Wukong would be the God of Destruction, with a relaxed tone. This kind of tone would only happen when there are no restrictions on himself, so I speculate that there is a high probability that angels have no life limit, otherwise there would not be only a dozen in the universe. Fifth, Dragon God Salama, this guy is the background, but from the fact that he can make super dragon balls, it can be seen that his strength is definitely not inferior to the great priest. The reason is that the dragon balls he makes can restore the universe that has been wiped out by the king. Here I want to say that if the strength of the dragon ball maker is too low, the wish of the other party that exceeds the maker's wish cannot be fulfilled. This setting is from the beginning of Dragon Ball, so you can see from this that the comic author gave a hint That's it, I'm too tired.
Does the heroine have a number 18? If you don't reply, there will be pitfalls by default.
I haven't read it yet, so Tiha suggested to go to the earth and use the Immortal Bean Dragon Ball (and then create a gravity chamber, it is not necessary. The divine power or magic of the gods can also have this effect). As for learning qi, it is best to find a god and then teach it with bobo, and the theological meditation method.
Just write like this, don't do anything like that. The harem is disgusting and off-putting. There are 100 Dragon Ball fanfics that are all harem. The more you read them, the more disgusting you get. The more you read the back, the more annoying you become, the less you want to read them, and then you give them up. Don't you read Dragon Ball fanfics with passion?
There is only one female protagonist, Ella.
If I had read the comments earlier, I wouldn't have even decided which chapters would be on the shelves. Goodbye.
Later, it is recommended not to include descriptions of combat power, because by the world view of Dragon Ball Super, combat power has collapsed. By Super Saiyan God, the ghost knows how much combat power Sun Wukong has. Therefore, it is recommended that the author not emphasize the combat power and calculate it in terms of magnitude again! Those with the first-level strength of the God of Destruction are 1, and those with the second-level strength are 2. That's enough. The combat power has collapsed. Tens of billions and hundreds of billions of combat power are very impressive. After all, who still remembers when Kame Sennin destroyed the moon with more than 100 combat power.
The time Frieza spent in Heaven actually had an impact on him, such as his strength, and then his world view. If Frieza had been under normal circumstances, he would have killed Goku and Vegeta long ago. However, when Frieza could turn into black gold, he not only helped to deal with Goku and Vegeta's enemies, but also just knocked Goku and Vegeta to the ground without killing them. It can be seen that the influence of Heaven has changed Frieza too much, so the author needs to carefully observe the impact.
Your Majin Buu is too powerful. The God of Destruction cannot be compared with simple combat power. The angel Whis even said that Beerus' training time is measured in hundreds of millions of years. That means Beerus trained for at least 100 million years before he became the God of Destruction. All become the God of Destruction. Son Goku, Vegeta, Broly, and Majin Buu want to achieve the normal combat power of the God of Destruction Beerus simply by transforming. That is a dream. Even if Beerus is a pig, for hundreds of millions of years, he will be stronger than Son Goku even if he only practices for a few days every year. Can the author be more serious?
Frieza is too much of a supermodel. If Frieza also practices, it will be useless for the protagonist no matter how much he practices.
Protagonist's hairstyle
When I was a child, refer to 😁
It's better to become King Quan's bodyguard than to be more cost-effective. There is a high priest, King Quan is the boss, and you can ask questions at any time. Except for the possibility of being wiped out when King Quan is unhappy, but in general the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Being a candidate for the God of Destruction is too rubbish.
The author really likes the basic button's body switching skill. If this skill is so awesome, why doesn't he switch to Frieza's? Don't tell me that he doesn't want to, so since it's drawn like this in the comics, there must be limits to the representation. Otherwise, if I learn this and deliberately provoke the God of Destruction or the Angel, wouldn't I be invincible? So please don't deliberately raise this skill
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Fan novels should have multiple female protagonists. Many fan novels focus on beautiful women.
I don't know what the purpose of bringing an extra female Saiyan is.
Dragon Ball Super's Broly is the most unsolvable. He is simply born to be a God of Destruction. Son Goku and Vegeta took decades and under the guidance of the angel Weiss to reach the realm of Super Sailor God. But what about Broly? He has no one to guide him in his cultivation. He only eats and sleeps every day. Doesn't this mean that he is a person with 0 combat experience? Not to mention training, this alone can defeat Son Goku, Vegeta, and Frieza decades later. I don't even know what to say. I can only say that Chuan Chao Zhen is worthy of being a master who only takes 1,000 years to produce.
Why don't the protagonist consider becoming King Quan's bodyguard? Although it is boring, the protagonist can at least learn a lot of skills and knowledge. After all, Quan Wang is not an idiot who knows nothing! The high priest is watching from the side, and he can ask for advice at any time. He doesn't have to worry about being wiped out of the universe like the God of Destruction and will be destroyed. People who are not yet in danger dare to come up to challenge the king, so he is completely safe.
The protagonist is about to start thinking about becoming a god, because his strength is beginning to approach the normal strength of the God of Destruction, and representing the god is also starting to be put on the agenda. Why do you say this? Because strength comes with status, rather than status with strength. The protagonist's strength has proven that he cannot be an unknown person in the universe, so the author, are you ready?
There is a big problem with this combat power. Bulma's father, who has five points of combat power, is really speechless. A man from Earth with a gun has two points of combat power. Is it possible for a little old doctor to have such a high combat power? Sun Wukong's combat power at the beginning was no more than ten points, and Yamcha's and the others were no more than ten. You came up with five combat power points, which made me laugh. Also, the seven-year-old's two thousand combat power was also outrageous. It's normal for some of them to be so high, but what do you think of a random teammate with such a high power? Where did you put Nabal and the others? Did Nabal live more than ten years as a dog? Also, the fact that you become stronger when you are about to die depends on the individual, right? Some people add more combat power and some people add less. You come up and add hundreds of combat power to a nobody. If it were really that good, the Saiyans as a whole would be more than that weak. They would be able to compete with Frieza long ago. It's impossible for King Vegeta to have only 10,000 fighting power.
It is impossible for a Saiyan who has traveled through time to be stronger than Son Goku and Vegeta. They are already at the extremes of the loser style and the genius style. It is impossible to surpass them both in the loser style or the genius style. Only the naturally powerful Broly can surpass them both.
There are so many forms of Saiyans in the original book that are not enough for you to play with. What kind of messy evolution techniques and fusion techniques are there to do? It's very confusing.
The combat power has long since collapsed
I have always believed that Frieza's combat power has collapsed since he came out. If Frieza's full combat power was originally set at seven or eight million, and Super Saiyan 1 was set at close to 10 million, I think it is reasonable. In this case, Super Saiyan 2 and 3 will increase by tens of millions, up to 4000+ million. The powerful demon Puu is set at around 50 million. I don't like Dragon Ball Super either, but I can't say anything since it's already released. The God of Destruction is set at a minimum combat power of 100 million, and is as powerful as close to 150 or even 180 million. This not only reflects the ultimate crushing in the face of Super Saiyan 3, but also does not reach a situation that cannot be described with data.
Personally, I am disgusted with the infinite development design of Dragon Ball Super. The main character settings are also different from Dragon Ball Z. The changes are very abrupt and the game has always been mindless. After searching, I found that Akira Toriyama was not named. Although the official company recognized it, Akira Toriyama did not. It seems that he only participated in the outline design, and then he was ignored in the subsequent development (lack of creative control, conflict of ideas). On the contrary, Dragon Ball Daima (Dragon Ball Daima) faithfully followed Akira Toriyama's ideas and all designs, and Toriyama took the initiative to use Dragon Ball GT elements in the script without hiding it. The development of Daima's story follows the Majin Buu chapter, and the character and story style are the same as before. It is obvious at a glance which one is the orthodox continuation. There is a reason why I liked watching "Dragon Ball" and "Dragon Ball Z" when I was a kid. Uncle Psy's style is the soul.
No joy, no sadness, no emotions, just an ideal protagonist
This book is a big one, but its downfall is that you lead a girl at the beginning. It's okay to lead a girl, but the girl needs to be eye-catching, but this woman often throws her face away, so who is going to pick on you? I feel like the male protagonist is a dog licker. I feel like the author wanted to write about Goku and Vegeta but couldn't write that feeling.
The current Dragon Ball novel should consider changing its routine.
It feels like there is no need to be Saiyans under Frieza. For example, the Saiyans split when they joined Frieza. Some Saiyans left the Northern Galaxy and developed in other places. They encountered different enemies and had different growth. In the early stage, the original plot can be interspersed in the background. For example, Planet Vegeta exploded and Frieza's army was hunting down the missing Saiyans. This way It can be connected to the main plot, during which Frieza and Kvira have a private conflict. The Kurdish King has taken a back seat due to the relationship between his two sons, and his territory is shrinking. The protagonist can create freely in the early stage. In the early stage, he can fight small bosses, such as Slug. In the middle stage, he can return to the North Galaxy to participate in the story of Namek, or bully the Kurdish King, who is the worst among the frozen demons, and work together to fight the boss in the later stage. However, writing this way may cause collapse, and Dragon Ball fans may not accept it.