The Qinghe Coroner

I actually found a book of grain and grass, which is good.

It's so well written, but no one reads it?

1. I don't know if the author is a newbie, but this talent is obvious to all, and I really hope it won't be wasted 2. If you have anything to worry about, you can tell me in the comment area 3. Even if you are a real eunuch, you can give me some directions, I really want to read your book Tell me about my own feelings, and the author can listen to whatever he wants. I don't want to teach the author to write a book, I just share my opinions. If the author wants to continue writing, remember to make me transparent. Grateful. I just think why the front part looks so good, because the world picture in the front slowly unfolds, the protagonist is very realistic, and the author's writing style is excellent, so it looks extremely comfortable. The descriptions of various characters are very close to the characters themselves and have a sense of feeling. But it just lacks a hook. You can't hang people with a hook all the time. This is actually meaningless. Just like the Genius Club, the safe caught half a book and was sprayed to death. So it's actually a design issue. In fact, readers are still looking forward to your world slowly unfolding, so they dig it. In fact, I really like what the author writes. Let me just say that you can actually consider making the hierarchical order of the world more detailed in your heart. The first part is fun because the protagonist changes from not being a human being to being a human being, so how the protagonist should change later is a point. But now the protagonist has been a prisoner. There is just no hope of a breakthrough. In fact, the hope of this breakthrough can be generously given to readers. Actually, readers just want to see how the protagonist becomes awesome step by step if he becomes a co-author. Of course these are my family's opinions. I really want to read it, and I sincerely hope that the author will improve, otherwise this writing style would be a real pity. So I always emphasize that the author just reads it and finds it useful. It is an honor for me. If it is not useful, just treat me like a fart.