Traveling Through the Dou Qi Continent: I Start the Peak Fighting Saint

Go study, Ziyu. Stop writing books.

How to write a garbage system flow novel more than 10 years ago

Are you serious about daily reading? Just recommend this kind of shit in my recommendation column?

I read three chapters and it turned out to be rubbish.

It's hard People, you still have to listen to advice

I don't understand how this kind of garbage can be put on the shelves

Uh, let me comment on this. I haven't even finished the first chapter. Three poisonous points First of all, the system text, this thing also comes with punishment... It's like a puppet on a string. It's very poisonous, okay? The second one is not very good at creating things out of thin air. If there is no such thing as a source, to be honest, let Xiaobai take a look The third one comes up and robs the Yunlan Sect's residence... Is there any conflict? There is no conflict. As a Dou Sage, for no reason, you run to someone else to grab a small station... It is completely unnecessary. This Zhu Di meets the standards. Even if he meets the standards, he is a Dou Sage. You can open up a small space and rob Yunnan Zhong. This is really a loss of status.

Just change the name of Yunlan Sect, I thought we would start from scratch! I quit, I haven't even finished Chapter 1!

This novel is really too old. This is the starting point. You could still read it on other fan fiction websites in the early years. Now, it's a bit far behind (I've read less than 3 chapters).

I suggest that the author learn about this novel and some details, and then read other fan fiction to enrich his knowledge. To be honest, it's not very good when you write this. Unless some people who have never read the novel write it as a novel about the heart, it might be a little better, but fan fiction is really not very good.