Travel Through Time in Advance and Recruit a Villain, a Witch, as a Disciple

No, buddy, if you write about the empress, just write about the empress honestly. Why did you add lily into it? If you want to write about lily, then don't write about the harem. The wings are already knotted after only a few dozen chapters. If it really doesn't work, please avoid me in the introduction. Don't trick me into it.

Are you practicing the Dian Niang version of the fairy, or the moderator version of the fairy? ? 🥵🥵🥵

Is the author writing about an online game? Why does he explain so much?

Why is the harem written as lily?

Too many explanations, the old man said to himself

If you want to erase the edges, then erase them carefully. The writing is neither fish nor fowl.

It's so watery that it can be written into a chapter. Some things that can be mentioned in one sentence can be written into a chapter. When you read this book, you mainly want to read the plot with the heroine. Secondly, the plot, some settings that are not included, and the inner words of the water chapter can be less

Pure master and apprentice or transformed master and apprentice? When writing about love and development, you must pay attention to avoid poison. When writing about male videos, you should generally avoid all kinds of weird things such as the previous life's obscene mask, the clone of the male partner, and the ambiguity of the male partner. When writing about the development of a disciple, it is necessary to lay the groundwork in the previous article so that there can be no ambiguity. Here are some suggestions.

Damn, more than one hundred and twenty chapters are still in the middle of Qi training! Slipping away

It's a poison guide, the plot is good, food and grass, hold on

The writing is really long-winded, such as the latest 60 chapters.

There is too little dialogue, all inner thoughts

The resource pressure in the early stage was too heavy, and there were not many spirit stones even if we were fighting life or death.

It's a bit similar to the character setting in Dongfeng's book. More, but too little.

After reading about 30 chapters, I really don't feel that there is any explosive point or anything. I really cry out about lack of money every three chapters...

Although it's very watery, let's not talk about the free book. Even though it's very watery, I praise it for having enough soup.