Wizard: the Archmage's Staff Craftsmanship

Have you ever made a magic wand? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The protagonist is a bit stupid, why did he explode when someone exploded him? Others say the great magician is not him, can't he be the teacher? As for what people would ask him later, he would just say that I had just entered school and was just here to watch the show.

It was well written, but I couldn't understand the plot. The characters coming and going always feel like passers-by skipped in the movie, which seems not three-dimensional enough.

It's pretty good. Although there are fights, it's not the kind of Khorne-style adventure where you kill your teammates at every turn and just attack a new monster when you see one. There are too many starting points.

The setting is very good, the story is average, but the first few chapters are full of little bits and pieces one after another.

Is the author new? The description is too detailed, and it feels like everything needs to be explained clearly, which makes it look too dry.

The writing is quite good, with quite classical and old-school plot content and character settings. There is no trace of the crazy condition that is now rampant on the Internet. It's a pity that I'm so ill here that I can no longer see these things.

It's best to change those things that we're looking at. It's really interesting. It suddenly jumps out from the perspective of the protagonist. The description of the two thieves feels a bit chaotic. I don't know when it will appear. There is also the description of the orc's tail. I don't understand what it looks like. I'm a little confused whether it is a wolf tail, a dog tail, or a cat tail. The subject matter and creativity are still very good.

You can try Noita's staff as a reference.

A very good idea, but in terms of appearance, there is a clear sense of discontinuity. The author probably doesn't have an outline. He thinks about it as it comes out, and has to re-conceive it every time it is continued, which creates this kind of perception among readers.

What do the two pictures about the count and the coachman express? Are you trying to say that the earl is ruthless or something? Although it can be seen from these pictures that this count is a guy with two faces, and what kind of character the author wants to write him into, this person has only been foreshadowed in two chapters, and it is still a big chapter of 4,000 words. It must have some special purpose.

Do you have a group? I think you, the author, are quite interesting and you are very cute.

I just read a few chapters, doesn't the magic wand have entry data?!

Cut? I still want to save up four or five hundred chapters to read it... It seems that I have no luck, and I still think the subject matter is good.

The writing is not very smooth, and the reading is confusing.