Dragon Clan: Huh? Are They Not Fantasies?

Have you ever been a little Chunan? Just write it randomly, trying to be ran

Have you ever been a mixed race? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Kids, I'm going to save Super Shanghai

You really love Jiangnan, even the fortress of Shanghai is sewn up 🙂

Nono is so disgusting to me, my sister-in-law doesn't want it.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I am being unreasonable, after all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the indirect and character columns, I couldn't help but sigh: You imagine someone loves you, and then you start a harem, right? This isn't a lack of love, it's a sexual repression

It's pretty smooth except for the continuation of the first chapter, come on.

The writing is okay, but the plot is too confusing. I feel like I wanted to write one thing at a time, and then it is a bit indifferent. The branch lines are too long and the readability is very poor. Before Xia Mi appeared, I thought he would be an immortal, but I couldn't watch it after that.

When I saw that there wasn't even a chapter name, I knew something was wrong, and I just ran away after being completely confused.

The author became an old fan of Jiangnan and stitched together Kyushu's Sunflower Assassin Dynasty and Shanghai Fortress. Is it because of character conflict that Yu Ran doesn't join Piaomiaolu (?)

Turtle traveling through the world of turtles is too...

The characters were also confusing, and suddenly a bunch of people popped up and came up to explain. Please, I came to see the Dragon Clan, not the Jiangnan Literature Collection. Do other books written by Jiangnan have anything to do with me? How many of you who have watched Dragon Ball have watched Gangnam's other works? Is there 1/10? I don't think it's even 1%. Let's see when it returns to the Dragon Clan.

Can Susie, Aki Shutori, Kogure Sakurai, Su Xiaoqiang, and Liu Miaomiao be accepted?

Sewing Jiangnan's books... Won't have the poisonous points and quirks in his books...

You can tell at a glance that she is a eunuch. This kind of novel randomly adds a heroine. If you say there is a heroine with a branch line, you dare to add a heroine without a branch line. It is weird to add a heroine who is not a super eunuch. Either the plot is seriously broken, or the characters are seriously OOC. The level of the plot and characters of the fan authors is the same. It is weird to add a chicken or not.

Don't be like it. Author: One update a day is too little. I'll take care of myself a little bit. Promise me not to secretly like it behind my back, okay? 😭

There are too many meaningless narrations, and it's very tiring to read.

Why don't you write the title? Since the title was removed, the quality of each chapter has dropped significantly. There are many typos and the plot is weak. It feels like running an errand or a studio article.

There hasn't been a single serious battle since it was released, it doesn't look like a love affair, and the plot is as bland as water. The writing was obviously very good at first, but when Xia Mi appeared on the scene, it was inexplicable. Halfway through the plot, there was an inexplicable amount of space describing other worlds of memories. The little goddess is listed as the heroine, but as a result, there are basically not many related scenes. It doesn't look like a romantic comedy in daily life, and it doesn't look like the Dragon Clan in other aspects. There is no psychological growth and changes of Lu Mingfei, just some bland plots without explosive points, which left me confused.

It's a bit hard to look at the front. The Dragon Clan in 2007 had tiles, right?

As far as the character performance is different, I can think of it as the author patching it up, but a character hasn't changed anything. It's hard to be upset when the name suddenly changes 😥. Then someone reported in the comment area that the author didn't reply or make changes. I don't know what they were doing?

I think it's a good idea to write dragon characters in the background of Shanghai Fortress.

How should I put it? There is still huge room for improvement in writing.

Are there any versions of Lu Mingfei?

Why is it that the main character in Dragon Clan fandom is basically Lu Mingfei? Damn it, I have a dog that will bark even if I don't bite him when it's in danger.

A newcomer has written a Dragon Clan fanfic, but no one is reading it. Please save the children! I want to sign a contract. Click on my avatar to help, please 😭😭😭😭 "What are you doing here?" Lu Mingfei lowered his voice and shouted to the two brothers Xu Yanyan and Xu Miaomiao beside him. He had already prepared everything and wanted to express his love to Chen Wenwen, whom he had liked for three years, here. What? Today Zhao Menghua, the eldest son of Zhao, also wanted to confess his love to Cheng Wenwen, and Chen Wenwen agreed. Lu Mingfei, who awakened the ability to modify entries, was furious from the bottom of his heart—— No, he is not allowed to confess!

Someone on Zhihu made an in-depth analysis of the characters and action logic of Nono and Lu Mingfei, and suggested that the author take a look at it, hoping it would be helpful to the author in writing better works.