Cultivation of Immortality Starts with the Invincible Sword Intention

The name of this novel is very extreme. "The Sword is Invincible" means that the protagonist of the novel, Lu Han, has an extremely bloody and cruel destiny. Lu Han's blacksmith master blindly guessed that the protagonist would walk in blood as the saying "iron has to see blood to strike". The protagonist appears as an orphan, which makes his identity full of suspense and conjecture. The awakening of bloodline memories makes people feel a very special life experience and background. The remnant soul of the sword named "Poliu" is even more extraordinary. , Full of suspense and murderous intent, the protagonist Lu Han will fight back and become a god! {"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Masterpiece Assembly"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New inspiration for the plot"}

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Masterpiece Collection"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","To picName":"New Plot Inspiration"} The following content all focuses on the shortcomings of the novel, because I believe that no author does not want his work to become better, especially for works that have obvious room for improvement, it is crucial to find the direction for modification. The writing is too colloquial and the writing style is white. An important reason for this phenomenon is the use of words. The author especially likes to use words such as "that", "those", "what", "ye" and "special". These words can reflect a certain rural flavor when used in character dialogue, but they are not suitable for use in full text descriptions. The same problem exists with the use of words such as "dragon's cry". It is hoped that the author will try to use less sentence patterns ending in "" when describing, which can also alleviate the colloquial expression to a certain extent. There are also some issues that are difficult to summarize that I and other book friends have raised sporadically in the chapters, so I won't repeat them here. The plot lacks character development. The confrontation between the senior brothers and the appearance and help of Li Qingge are all abrupt, lacking emotional conflict and foreshadowing. There is also too much ink on unimportant descriptions, which makes the plot seem dragging even if it is moving steadily along the bright lines. The most unacceptable plot at the beginning is the blacksmith's "resistance to death". The villain sect of the Netherworld Sect can't kill even an ordinary person with its strange poison and punctured internal organs? According to Elder Li, the blacksmith could even stay up until the next night. The author repeatedly described how serious the blacksmith's injuries were and how badly he bled, but the more he repeated it, the more obvious the sense of inconsistency became.

The work belongs to the theme of fairy tales and revolves around the practice of swordsmanship. The protagonist Lu Han, the protagonist of the novel, picked up black iron from a mass grave due to his master, Blacksmith Wang. When he crafted it into a sword embryo, he awakened the remnant soul of the sword spirit and embarked on a journey to prove the Tao with the sword. It is speculated that the main theme of the plot is invincible swordsmanship, gratification, and decisive killing, supplemented by love and hatred, interweaving a heart-stirring story in the world. In addition, the author has done a good job in characterization, and the three-dimensional character creation is shown through the details of the interaction between the protagonist and the master. Master's love and care for Lu Han at the expense of his own life was deeply touching. At present, the main plot is advancing as the master and apprentice face a life and death crisis. The compact plot development is worth looking forward to. {"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Masterpiece Collection"}{"TopicId":"604299270245515264","TopicName":"515 Activity"}{"TopicId":"586286831142961152","TopicName":"Book Recommendation"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Inspiration for the Plot"}

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Inspiration for the Plot"}    The beginning has a traditional martial arts style, which made me, who like to watch traditional fairy tales, feel particularly moved, as if I had witnessed Han Li's experience in the world and his journey to the Qixuanmen. The difference is that Han Li has a master who has all kinds of tricks and evil intentions, while Lu Han has a master who is self-sacrificing and teaches with integrity.        "，，，""，，，"，， I'm glad that Lu Han has such a good master. Perhaps the greatest achievement of Blacksmith Wang's life is not to create a peerless sword, but to refine Lu Han, a peerless embryo. Lu Han is like the peerless sword embryo in the hands of Blacksmith Wang. When he was born, the sword chilled the world and pierced the sky. People can't help but feel excited along with the plot and can't help themselves! Of course, this book still has some shortcomings, such as the wording is a bit colloquial, and some details are not handled properly, but the flaws are not hidden. After reading the entire book, I realized that the most powerful sword is invincible. It can be said that it is the most powerful sword that Lu Han combines with the sword's will. It can be said that it is the sword of Lu Han's strong and unyielding will. It can be said that it is the sword of perfect kindness that Lu Han has great love in his heart! As I write this, I suddenly thought of the words of Mr. Jin Yong, "A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people." I look forward to Lu Han killing all the demons and demons in this world, and quelling the injustices in the world, just like the name of Sword Killer and Taichu, using the sword in his hand to bring peace to the world!

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Inspiration for the Plot"} I have been reading this book for so long, and there are many book friends who have praised it, so I won't add icing on the cake. I have always liked chapter reviews but rarely write book reviews. Let me give you some suggestions.         ，，😁         ，，，，，…        Furthermore, I feel that there are too many descriptions of the anvil and the jade jue, which sometimes glow and sometimes crack... And there are a little bit of fighting scenes, actions and plots, as if the protagonists are not people but these two objects...

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Masterpiece Collection"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New plot Inspiration"} Although it is only a short dozen chapters, there are still quite a lot of characters and forces on the scene. I feel pretty good after reading it, especially the foreshadowing of the protagonist Lu Han's life experience. I am quite looking forward to it. Although there is only a description of the Broken Sword, there is Taichu Sword Intent in the Broken Sword. Is this related to Xuantian Sect? Are Lu Han's parents also high-level immortal cultivators?

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Inspiration for the Plot"} It can be seen that the author is a new author, and the wording and sentence making are still impressive It's relatively immature, but the whole story is quite good to read. It's very imaginative, and the plot rhythm is tense, with climaxes and ups and downs. From the beginning to the present, Lu Han has been walking on the edge of life and death. In order to survive, to save the king's blacksmith, he fights with the demon sect, his senior brother, and himself, and he gets a chance to breathe. The tense plot tightly grasps the readers' minds, and they are quite looking forward to the follow-up plot.

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Inspiration for the Plot"}  It took me about 30 minutes to read the current updated content. This novel belongs to the common fairy tale type. I will briefly talk about my thoughts on the current updated content. If there is any inappropriateness, please correct me. 1. Plot advancement The current plot mainly revolves around Lu Han. He is an unknown young man in the blacksmith shop. He gained sword power due to the awakening of the remnant soul of the ancient sword spirit. Therefore, he was hunted by the Netherworld Sect. His master, Blacksmith Wang, was also seriously injured as a result. Lu Han took Blacksmith Wang to Xuantian while avoiding the pursuit of the Netherworld Sect. Zong Xuan's life, the rhythm of the plot is relatively tense and exciting, and the right conflicts reasonably promote the development of the plot, such as the conflict between the Netherworld Sect and the protagonist, the conflict between the protagonist and Brother Zhang of the Xuantian Sect, etc., Which makes the plot advance relatively smoothly. The fascinating plot is the highlight of the book, attracting readers to continue reading. 2. Character creation First, there is the protagonist Lu Han, whose characterization is very distinctive, and the image of a determined and honest young man is vivid on the page; secondly, there is Blacksmith Wang, who is the image of a loving master who sacrifices his own life to protect his apprentices; then Senior Brother Zhang, who portrays a mean and jealous negative image, and finally Qing Ge and Su Li, who appear briefly and have few words. From the few words, it can be seen that these are two kind-hearted girls who have helped the protagonist. 3. Problem Suggestions First, the problem of insufficient presentation of the world view. For example, there are insufficient basic settings such as a brief description of this world and an introduction to the cultivation system. Currently, it is only mentioned through fragmented dialogues and lacks systematic development. For example, the article mentions the Netherworld Sect and the Xuantian Sect, but there is no other sect information, and no decent and villains are set; for another example, the cultivation system currently only mentions Qi refining and foundation building, which is a bit confusing to readers. The second is the weakness of the emotional line. The character of Li Qingge appears very suddenly, helping the protagonist out of nowhere, lacking any deep emotional conflict or foreshadowing. Third, some of the settings feel a bit confusing, such as the initial destruction, the later demon slaying, and the current Taichu. It is a bit confusing. It is recommended that they be unified. 4. Follow-up conjecture According to the current plot, the protagonist should start practicing in the Xuantian Sect from the outer sect, all the way to the inner sect, and then to the direct disciple. Wang Blacksmith is also saved because of this, and the Netherworld Sect has been secretly against the protagonist. Even the Xuantian Sect has an inner ghost of the Netherworld Sect, and even the status For example, for example, the elders. After the protagonist solves the hidden dangers of the Netherworld Sect, he goes out to experience the sect, leads to a new map, and gradually expands the world line. Su Li should be the confidante in the growth process of the protagonist. I hope he can make a breakthrough in the emotional line.

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Plot Spirit Sense"} I haven't seen this kind of opening for a long time. The protagonist is in crisis at the beginning, which leads to the setting of the sword spirit, which should be able to add sword talent. The protagonist now needs to develop and increase his cultivation level and repair the sword. Later, he can arrange the inheritance of the master of the divine sword or the sect. This foreshadowing can still be buried.

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Masterpiece Collection"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName" : "New inspiration for the plot"} Overall, the plot of this article is reasonable and the characters are full-bodied, especially the beginning of the plot is fascinating. The three golden chapters are well-deserved. This is probably the reason why this book can be signed quickly, but there are also some small problems during the reading process, which affect the reading experience. For example, in terms of settings, there is no previous foreshadowing. As a result, one is breaking the illusion, the other is killing demons, and the other is Taichu. I don't know how to set them up. Are these the same thing or different things? For another example, the confrontation between Senior Brother Zhang and the protagonist feels quite abrupt, and Liu Qingge, who appears later, is even more abrupt. It is recommended that the author can sort out the plot and characters again, and if necessary, open a single chapter to briefly introduce the settings, so that readers can understand smoothly when reading the book.

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Plot Inspiration"} It is said that the "three golden chapters" of novels determine life and death, and the first chapter of "The Invincible Sword" is an example. The first chapter opens with a sudden change in the sword embryo in the blacksmith shop. The blue light and strange fluctuations instantly caught my eye and successfully aroused my curiosity. The master-disciple relationship between Wang Tiejiang and Lu Han is vividly depicted, with the master risking his life to protect each other in critical moments. This not only makes the characters stand out, but also lays the emotional foreshadowing for Lu Han's subsequent growth. The forces of the Netherworld Sect are on the scene, and the suspense of ancient swordsmanship is thrown out. In just one chapter, the initial reveal of the world view, the setting of conflicts and the protagonist's character are completed. The first of the three golden chapters fully plays the key role of attracting readers, building expectations, and setting the tone. People can't wait to follow it. Attached is a picture.

At least it's much better than novels written using those templates. Writing using templates is worse than writing fan fiction.

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A bunch of people encouraged me, and I didn't mention any problems in the book. I skipped over how to join the sect. Why did the villain target the protagonist inexplicably? He didn't even show the scene of practicing the martial arts. There was no reason why he learned the evil martial arts. There was no reason why the blacksmith didn't finish his ink for a long time, and he was inexplicably showing off.

I stared at the new chapter on the screen, "The Boss Bidong and the Heroine's 360-degree Whirlwind Kiss," and the wolfberry and chrysanthemum tea in my hand spilled all over the floor. Three full-screen video windows suddenly popped up at the workstation at the same time: On the left, Hengxian Qitian opened champagne on the helicopter, and the propeller blew away the report I handed in yesterday: "The thirteenth rewrite! I want to see the male protagonist drown his love rival's Maserati with red wine!" The little lolita in the middle is holding a Pikachu doll and sipping milk tea, behind her The LCD screen scrolled and played "On the Self-cultivation of Salted Fish" that I wrote when I was fishing: "Look, brother! I made your diary into an AI voice package~" The lady on the right is applying a gold mask in the open-air hot spring, and the drone hangs a bird's nest in my window: "Xiaoqi, I just asked my assistant to acquire 51% of the shares of your company - now I can call you my exclusive editor. " "Three aunts!" I scratched the crack of the fire escape door and wailed, "The editor of the next door team got tenosynovitis because of too many revisions yesterday..." Three high-heeled shoes came from different directions, and Hengxian Qitian's crocodile leather handbag hit my newly planted hairline: "Next week's group building will be changed to Paris Fashion Week, you are responsible for it. I'm responsible for picking out a suit for my CEO Wen. " "But it's a company policy..." Little Loli suddenly raised her cell phone that was broadcasting: "Brother, look! Fans have said they want to see you and Sister Qi Tian acting as stand-ins~" When the barrage flashed "It's done!", Sister Yu's Rolls-Royce walked directly into the company lobby. She took off her sunglasses and chuckled: "I just renewed the VIP subscription for the website for ten years - now, immediately, follow me to the Civil Affairs Bureau for filming." The financial director poked his head out from behind the potted plant: "Xiao Nao, why don't you reimburse the company's team building expenses by the way?" At twelve o'clock in the night, with dark circles under my eyes, I typed out the 108th edition of "Life Surrounded by Rich Women" in the document, and a strange noise suddenly came from the tea room. Three spotlights hit me at the same time: Hengxian Qitian held up a diamond-encrusted USB flash drive: "Outline of the new article." Little Lolita shook the light stick: "Good night song." Sister Yu jumped over the wall with an 82-year-old Buddha: "More midnight snacks." I touched my resignation letter tremblingly, and my phone suddenly vibrated - Silver The credit prompt was followed by three messages: "Go to the Burj Khalifa to write about chasing your wife in the desert next time?" "I'll help you pay off your brother's credit card~" "I just bought an island to build a fishing villa for you." At the end of the corridor, three aunts smiled brightly while holding a banner that read "100,000 a day or else the women's photos will be released." I silently folded my resignation letter into a paper airplane and threw it out the window. Where the sun was rising in the distance, I could vaguely see that the "Fupo League's Exclusive Salted Fish Breeding Guide" was being automatically generated... (End)

When reading novels now, I still like to read characters with online logical intelligence. The actions of the characters have certain logical support. I am currently reading Chapter 11, and the characters in it do not show brainless behavior. Each character also fits their personal image. I hope the author can write about Lu Han's growth and persistence, and the supporting characters can also have a very outstanding image. Come on, come early Thousands of orders per day{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New Inspiration for the Plot"}

Sister Hengwu's Nine Lives

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Masterpiece Collection"}{"TopicId":"113201285670882 5088","TopicName":"New Plot Inspiration"} When I saw this title, I thought it was a relatively light-hearted fairy tale. Unexpectedly, I was deeply attracted after reading the first chapter. The author's writing is simple and full of emotions. The deep teacher-student relationship between Lu Han and Wang Tiejiang is very touchingly portrayed by the author. The plot is smooth and the plot advances in one go. There are many famous scenes, and the ability to create jokes is also good. The sentence "I have been practicing for three years... You just practiced... How is it possible" has brought us readers a lot of unhappiness and desire to talk about it. There are more than 100 articles about this sentence. Come on, the author. From my perspective of reading countless books, this book has the potential to be a big hit! Good reviews for grass jelly!

Lu Han used force with his knuckles to crush the opponent's wrist bones, but he saw three bone-penetrating nails suddenly coming out of the man in black clothes' sleeves. He turned around to avoid it, and the sword edge drew a half-circle of cold moon in the moonlight. There were three crisp sounds, and all the hidden weapons were nailed into the old locust tree behind him, and the bark of the tree instantly turned a strange indigo color. "Tempered the peacock's gallbladder?" Lu Han's sword tip opened the opponent's front, and a gold-plated tiger charm was stuck between the gears of the mechanism. Black water seeped out from between the lines of the tiger talisman, corroding the fine iron gears until they sizzled. The night owl cries again, this time close at hand. Suddenly, the jade tablet slipped from Xuanyi's arms, knocking out Qingyue Long Yin on the bluestone. Lu Han's pupils suddenly shrank - from the crack on the card, cinnabar-colored lines that were exactly the same as the scar on the master's heart were seeping out.

There is an operating officer in such a small number of words. Does it feel like he is an experienced author? You should be able to write long ones, right? Speaking of the novel, the writing style is very good, but the plot feels a bit bland. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a lot, but the writing was average and did not raise expectations.

He took out the half piece of bronze fragment, which resonated with the sword intention of the Consciousness Sea and trembled, with a bit of burning pain at the moment. Ingeniously combining physical properties with spiritual consciousness, the resonance between the bronze fragments and the sea of ​​consciousness sword not only strengthens the sense of mystery, but the "tremors" and "burning pain" also give the cold metal a sense of life. In just two sentences, the mysterious realm of "things and self-reflection" is constructed, which not only hints at the extraordinary origin of the fragments, but also makes the illusory sword intention concrete through the description of body perception, laying the groundwork for the subsequent plot. The calligraphy is refined and the artistic conception is profound.

{"TopicId":"1132012856708825088","TopicName":"New inspiration for the plot"}{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"The collection of masterpieces"} Overall, the writing is smooth. The description of details is also very good. The author probably wanted to foreshadow the story, and described many details very carefully. However, because the description is too detailed, there are some contradictions in the book, making it difficult to tell whether it is a foreshadowing or whether the author has forgotten the previous text and made a mistake. The novel has just begun, there is no need to bury so many foreshadowings. Furthermore, this novel is a fairy tale novel and does not need to be described in very detailed details like a suspense mystery novel. If it is not necessary, many details can be mentioned in one stroke, so as to avoid small flaws of inconsistent descriptions.

{"TopicId":"1134915900106801152","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}{"TopicId":"1132012856708 825088","TopicName":"New inspiration for the plot"} The protagonist's sword intention can affect the protagonist, allowing the protagonist to have a clearer perception of emotional fluctuations So, can the protagonist be in this situation? Process, learn to have a certain degree of emotion/crisis perception towards other people/things/things, this is the sword's heart transparency Will it be possible to evolve to the point where the protagonist acquires a skill, and his sword intention can affect other people/things/things' perceptions/feelings towards others? Emotion/Thinking Logic This is the art of Kenshin's Dust The ultimate in Kenshin's transparency is to predict a certain future The ultimate in Kenshin's Dust is to manipulate the development of events The two merge into one to create a world line with one sword

Lu Han used force with his knuckles to crush the opponent's wrist bones, but he saw three bone-penetrating nails suddenly coming out of the man in black clothes' sleeves. He turned around to avoid it, and the sword edge drew a half-circle of cold moon in the moonlight. There were three crisp sounds, and all the hidden weapons were nailed into the old locust tree behind him, and the bark of the tree instantly turned a strange indigo color. The description is very graphic, and the actions and details complement each other. The ruthlessness of "strengthening the knuckles" and "crushing wrist bones", the swiftness of "turning to avoid", and the grace of the sword cutting out "half a cold moon" vividly portray Lu Han's martial arts and determination. The sneak attack of three bone-penetrating nails, combined with the onomatopoeia of "ding ding ding", has a tight rhythm and a sudden increase in the sense of crisis. The "indigo" color of the tree bark not only hints at the poisonous nature of hidden weapons, but also adds a touch of spooky color visually, making the scene more impactful. In just a few words, the ferocity of the fight and the dangers of the world are vividly displayed on the page.

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