
Tokyo: I Just Covet Their Talents!
东京:我只是贪图她们的天赋!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 103k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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48Chapters
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Summary of the first book and personal views on the positioning of the book
I don't quite understand the author's thinking. Is there a need for grades? The previous book did make a lot of mistakes, but this one is okay. At least it weakens the sense of existence of Soul Penetration, which I think is okay. Also, I think the shining point of the first book is the freedom of the male protagonist to focus on his own growth among many women, instead of circling around women. Therefore, many people say that the male protagonist has changed after getting together with the future. A male protagonist who is not bound by love is more in line with the logic and feelings at the beginning. As for the storyline, I think internal friction among the female characters may be a more appropriate direction. At first, everyone wanted to compete to be the only main harem. Later, they found that the male protagonist did not want to hurt everyone and would rather choose no one. Then he gave up the fight and turned to the mentality of "it doesn't matter if you can be with the male protagonist, even if you have a harem". I feel that this can prevent the plot from reaching a boring point, that is, the male protagonist should be passive in emotional choices. It is good to have you, but it doesn't matter if you don't. In this way, I think it can create a very good flavor.
Not bad
But the male protagonist is a bit too emotionless. The former was a violent second-generation rich man who loved fighting. After traveling through time, he became like an emotionless robot. Is it true that no one questions or wonders, especially the family members who usually live together? From an irritable little brother to a cold and ruthless handsome guy, this is true. . . . . . Some places really shouldn't be thought about carefully.
Although I have already said it in the previous book, but since the previous book is gone, let me say it again, damn, it's too early 😆
So who is the other one among the four equal parts? Housekeeper?
The meaning of the three letters. The first letter explains that the protagonist is the son-in-law and adopted son. The meaning of the second letter is that if the three girls don't want to join, they can try the second one. The third letter means that if the protagonist wants to be independent, he must earn 100 million yen and then obtain a surname.
I found that every time you publish a new book, the book will be cut soon after I vote for it. So the monthly vote is poisonous, right? I can't resist the new book. I'd better wait until it's on the shelves next time before voting.
If opening (if there is any similarity, the author will count as copying mine)
Doubtful point 1: The protagonist describes what he is wearing, but his appearance is no different from the original one, otherwise something is wrong at a glance Doubtful point 2: The protagonist also describes what he is wearing, but after seamlessly replacing the original identity, there is not much separation between the protagonist and the original owner's family. It seems that he has the memory of his original body (at least he knows the basic relationship, which face belongs to him) The if line of this post is based on the above two points Then the story begins It's another new day, Natsume Yuji frowned from sleep He woke up from a dream. He had another dream last night. He dreamed that he was an ordinary person in a western country (Note 1). His brain was so swollen that he always felt that he didn't get enough sleep. There was also a lingering loading progress bar in front of him, indicating that he needed krypton gold. Completed loading I casually added some pocket money into it, and the progress bar disappeared (Note 2) The brows were filled with irritation (Note 3). After quickly washing up and finishing meals with his sisters, Natsume Yuji came to school. He walked into the school gate, turning a deaf ear to the glances from his classmates. He only listened to the occasional discussion voices, "Yuji's appearance is as good as his sister's, and he deserves to be a brother and sister." "But there is such a big gap in their grades. They are obviously brothers and sisters. This is so different." Ben's frown deepened. Natsume Yuji walked silently towards the classroom. At the end of those dreams, there was actually a lingering image in his mind - in the hazy world, a pair of hands placed him next to a baby and took away the baby who was originally in this position. ... Night came, Natsume Yuji returned home after dinner and returned to his room. Looking at the progress bar that was about to be loaded, he asked the system, "As long as I activate you, can I walk side by side with them?" (Note 4) After a few breaths of silence, a line of words "Yes." Appeared below the progress bar. His eyes flickered with confusion. However, "But I will also recall everything in my previous life. Will I still regard them as my family at that time?" Subtitles emerge "After the system is loaded, the host will completely recall everything in the previous life, but the emotional anchor point of this life will not be affected. Only the personality will be changed due to the memory of the previous life. However, the memory during the system loading period may be affected by the infiltration of the memory of the previous life. There were some missing parts, leading to the misconception that he had just time-traveled rather than time-traveled as a baby." Natsume Yuji took a long breath when he saw the reply, "It's okay, they don't like Natsume Yuji who is irritable and wastes money anyway. If the character changes, just change it. If the memory is missing, let it be missing. As long as that, I will treat them as family." "About loading. "Finish, please relax the host and complete the final memory awakening in bed." Natsume Yuji looked around his room for the last time and stared at the photo of Natsume's family on his desk. On it, Ichika stood next to his father and hugged Yuji and Misaki when they were young. Misaki also held one of Yuji's arms, and Yuji when she was young was holding Yotsuba with one arm. In the photo, they had bright smiles. The real Natsume Yuji showed a smile, closed his eyes and lay on the bed, recalling everything in his previous life. ... Natsume Yuuji woke up, looked at himself in the mirror and muttered to himself, "Have I traveled through time?" . . . Note 1: Although the article mentions that the protagonist was stable and doing well before time traveling, judging from the fact that the pocket money Natsume's family gave him casually was millions of yen. , His life before time travel seems to be an ordinary person at best, because he can't imagine how poorer people can be Note 2: The loading of the system set in this extra chapter also requires money. The reason why the protagonist spends so much is because of charging the system, and it is not really a waste of money Note Three: The process of awakening memory is not very painful, but it will still make the protagonist feel that his brain is swollen. At the same time, his mental state is equivalent to that of a person who is in an insomnia state. It is normal to be irritable Note 4: In this extra chapter, he has been aware of the fact that he has no blood relationship with his sister. He is afraid that one day this matter will be exposed. He is afraid. At that time, he will be kicked out of Natsume's house. Sister Ichika will no longer smile at each other, Sister Misaki will completely ignore him, and Sister Yotsuba will no longer invite him to play games, but will treat him as a stranger. This is why he chose the awakening system. He hopes that even if they are not related by blood, he can stand side by side with them and become a real family with them.
It's very well written, don't give up!
I deleted the previous one directly. If I hadn't remembered your name, I wouldn't have been able to catch up.
There are no more quarters, so it seems: we need more female protagonists. I hope the author can stop shouting, come on
The power of the housekeeper is not that great. This kind of thing is usually managed by close relatives. This is still in Japan.
Well! Another missing book to read📕, the starting point is getting more and more rubbish
Alas, it collapsed again
This book was quite well written, but why did it fall apart? .