Fight to Break: Burning Qiong Jiuyou

My dear friends, please keep updating, you will die if you keep books! Tears (´；ω；`) Anger_sense of presence! (ง •̀_•́)ง

The introduction seems okay, keep up the good work 🤭

The introduction is okay. I feel like reading it. I don't know when the heroine will regain her memory. Please update it. I have voted for recommendation.

Author, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

Emperor Yan also eats everything. This is the second book with a female protagonist besides the Holy Clan. By the way, I want to ask the author whether this is a change or a normal female protagonist. The harem is still 1v1.

Come on, author, it must be 1v1. I'm tired of seeing the harem after marriage 😐

I also like to watch movies with multiple female protagonists, especially those that persecute Ms. Gu.

The pure heroine came to fight against the daughter of a wealthy family who had amnesia. I was so moved that Xiao Yan had broken it. The three-year contract has not ended yet, and they are already a newlywed couple. How much food has Lao Hai been fed 🤭. The heroine of this book and Xiao Yan have done everything they should do except for being husband and wife.

The author, the heroine Little Doctor Fairy and Cai Lin

What's happened to Emperor Yan lately😂 The food is so good too

Isn't it a mess if I don't update it? I haven't updated it for half a month.

Is the heroine's arrival in the world faster than the anti-inflammatory upgrade? This will not reduce the inflammation of the Dou Emperor. The heroine is just a low star Dou Sheng.

There is really a lot of original text. There is no heroine in Mountain of Warcraft for more than thirty chapters, and the perspective is always on Xiao Yan. It is better to read the original work. After the encounter, the heroine's experience during this period is directly told in one paragraph, which puts the cart before the horse. The back is pretty much the same. The relationship between the heroine and Xiao Yan is established very early, which is an advantage, but it is too early, with little foreshadowing, and not so easy to beat. Most of the sweets are cooked by Xiao Yan. There are really many descriptions of eating in the original plot. That's it for now, let's eat first. Xiao Yan is a bit fragmented. The original part is as handsome as the original work. The original part is a love brain who has a daughter-in-law. He is a cook and takes care of the heroine's food, drink, clothing, housing and transportation. He is already the heroine's full-time nanny. He has no practice at all. He has to describe in detail how Xiao Yan went to pick wild vegetables, fruits and mushrooms, hunt, cook on the fire, set up pots, camp, and eat. It can fill up to a thousand words. The elixir is also used to make beauty and moisturizing elixirs for the heroine, as well as breast enlargement elixirs. It feels like the three-year appointment was written by the author like a sightseeing trip to a scenic spot. Leaving Xiao Yan, the heroine's own plot is pitiful. It feels like the heroine is like a robot. When she is with Xiao Yan, she is affectionate and affectionate. When Xiao Yan doesn't take her with her in the original plot, she just waits in the corner. The author rarely cuts to the heroine's perspective to talk about her, and there is very little psychological activity. Plus the heroine has amnesia, it becomes more like this. The original plot of Hai Lao Leaving is to eat dog food. Eat it today and eat it tomorrow. Because of the help of the heroine, Yao Lao did not fall into a deep sleep because of the Buddha's Angry Fire Lotus, but because he wanted to follow the original text, Yao Lao also, well, didn't even say a word. The strength of the heroine is a bit mismatched. It has been written many times that other people were surprised about the background of the heroine and thought she was a big boss. Even Hai Lao thought she was unfathomable. But the heroine is just a fighting master. There is nothing except the fire. Even if the fire can make the heroine leapfrog, it is impossible for her to be a talented fighter to defeat the Dou Emperor or the great Dou Zong, right? No way, right? Another point is that I don't know how the author can write so that the later heroine can keep up with Xiao Yan's rocket-like promotion speed. After all, the current heroine's level is only a few levels higher than Xiao Yan, who has been at the third level of Dou Qi for three years. Could it be that just one special fire power was worth all the opportunities Xiao Yan would have in the future? You won't skip it like they did in the Warcraft Mountains, and just let the male and female protagonists separate. When they meet again, the female protagonist has already caught up with Xiao Yan. .

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​Mb way out out of mind. Yao Wan's three-year contract is a fighting spirit battle, and Hun Ruoruo's fighting spirit is a bit tricky, but it can be regarded as the weakest fighting spirit level. And they all have backup plans. You don't have any backup plans when facing a situation like Yunshan Yunlan Sect. As for the protagonist who has no resources, the protagonist is a murderer who absorbs cultivation. If you let her go out and develop some copies on her own, I am afraid she will be able to have a fighting spirit or even a fighting king level. If she restores some memories and uses some secret techniques, she may be able to have a fighting emperor level combat power. Some special secret techniques may be able to kill this or compete with the little fighting sect in Yunshan who has just been promoted and is not stable. There is also a perspective that is always on Xiao Yan. Is the protagonist Jiuyou or Xiao Yan? What I'm talking about is not the difference between male and female protagonists, but the problem of the protagonist. And Xiao Yan has almost become a female love brain. The protagonist doesn't care about the battlefield when something happens, so the teacher rushes to save him or takes out the elixir and takes it quickly. In this world where the extraordinary world is unstable, you can care after a little fight or injury, but you can't show concern before the fight is over. It really makes people feel like they have a brain hemorrhage. There are also times when the protagonist and Xiao Yan feel like they are holding each other back. As a result, the speed of cultivation cannot be improved. Originally, Xiao Yan's cultivation level was one star within three years. You helped divide the cultivation level of Killer Suction into two stars, which also caused your own upgrade to be slow. There is also the protagonist, who has no backup plan, and then shows up in front of a group of fighting kings and kings every day, and shows some abilities unabashedly. He is really brave. Especially for the Yunlan Sect, I remember that there should be a Soul Palace protector. If there is no author's mastery, one is accidentally discovered or reported, and the reports are reported layer by layer and the Soul Emperor knows it. After all, this is a kind of flame that perfectly meets his requirements. It seems that the upgrade of killing people, absorbing souls and absorbing energy has no side effects. Some of my current feelings, or some minor issues that I feel are not very good, have been turned into short essays 😅 I am not simply saying that my writing is not good, but I hope that I can write better in the future.