The End of the Threshold Realm

Couldn't this plot world be written by the author asking AI?

Have you ever played Infinity Games? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

As a newbie, you can say that your writing is very good, but considering that the person you are imitating is too awesome, it seems that you are a bit mediocre) In general, In terms of writing style, when making complaints, avoid embarrassing and forced comments, and do not force jokes at inappropriate times; In terms of plot, the first few scripts are a bit bland, and practical The setting of the game world was not well developed; In terms of characters, I feel that it is okay now. At least the protagonist and his childhood image are well portrayed. However, the characters in the scripts are generally a bit too hasty, which is also closely related to the plot. Let's strengthen this point as much as possible Well, that's about it, just add some oil.

It's a bit like three days and two nights of sleep, to be precise, it's like "Thriller Paradise" For now, the world view and characters are okay But the unit story design is not interesting enough, and the male protagonist's ability to complain is not enough

Too early, too little. The following are all personal opinions So far, it is generally good. What others said in the comment area is like Thriller Paradise, which is somewhat true, but I hope the author will be more innovative. The settings have been thrown out a lot, so it is not a mess. What is certain is that the game is in a world, and regional forces can respond to it. What I value most is that Guolai's skills in the Philadelphia chapter were also developed by the Monroe Group in the game, which means that the skills the characters draw may be items in the world. This alone can extend a lot of interesting designs The plot is quite satisfactory. In retrospect, the world was released a little early without any notice, and it was a personal discovery of non-protagonists. It was forced to advance the plot by external factors, which was a bit fragmented. At least for the state apparatus there is no reason to go straight to the protagonist. It's nonsense that no one knows how to play the game. There's no good reason for the population ratio to be there, and the protagonist's world view analysis leads to reaching the top. It's reasonable but not a reason to be noticed by the country. I can only say that it's a bit pricey. Looking for civilians is never the first choice. Whether the relevant confidentiality requirements are very deterrent, in the final analysis, it is too early to give up. If the protagonist can find some clues about the other world, it will be smoother for others to find him. And there are other people looking for the inner world. Does this mean that existences like No. 8 Will also have other people and players competing for pass qualifications? Other aspects are the same as what a brother said in the comment area. The plot is not ups and downs enough. The delivery chapter is the most obvious. The brothers and the sirens are the most obvious, but the emotional impact is not strong enough. It feels like you will die just to recommend the plot. The writing is relatively dull Overall, it is good. I hope there will be more, come on

It's a good novel. It's a very potential novel. But please don't write the name of the real country. You can change it to Daxia or something like that. I don't want to see this beautiful book die young.

The protagonist has a casual personality, has no clear plans for the future, and the game style is not outstanding. It does seem like it was written by a newcomer.

"Thriller Paradise": Those who learn from me will live, and those who are like me will die.

I am looking forward to the future of this book and hope the author can write better and better. Here are some of my opinions: 1. Some dungeon settings are amazing, but the story is not worthy of it. The conflicts in the copy are all specific to a certain good guy and bad guy, and there is a lack of decryption of the environment and thinking about the rules. A story with a general setting would be very boring Take the copy of The Liver Seller as an example: the setting of this story is very amazing. Under such conditions, conflicts such as illegal liver trading are inevitable. It is a pity that the focus of this story finally fell back on a specific "villain" character. It's really a waste of the setting. The same goes for the Australian Beasts chapter, but because its specific villains represent an extreme minority, the perception has been improved. 2. Try to minimize the use of psychological description to endorse the rationality of the character's behavior. One trick is to use the protagonist's mouth to show the reader the logic of the character's behavior in the story from the protagonist's perspective. 3. There are too many foreshadowings, and almost every copy is following the main line, and the rhythm is not very good. The first very simple secret room mystery dungeon contacted the big boss, and the subsequent Australian Animals dug a big hole, and the later 12 Angry Men dug it, and also threw out a new dungeon setting. Almost every dungeon will have a strong or weak connection with the main plot. It is recommended to write some interesting unit sketches to intersperse them. Isn't this game a copy generated by AI? Some copies can be made by AI to train players, instead of every copy being a real world. In this way, puzzles can be made for the sake of puzzles, and some interesting settings can be added simply to test players, without considering whether they fit in with the main world view. 4. Some stories have a small amount of content and simple conflicts. Just because the story takes place in several days and has many chapters (yes, I am talking about the sea ship chapter) seems watery and boring. I wish this work will be a hit, and I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.

It's hard to imagine that in chapter 170, the protagonist doesn't have serious skills and equipment, and the only one has a limit on the number of times. Since this genre is gone, comparisons with horror parks are inevitable. For example, the author can't seem to create the seemingly funny but rule-based skill of the naughty child's whip kick. I don't know if he is playing with abstraction or deliberately suppressing the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist has two weapons, a table leg and a throw. The stone sling is rarely used and has almost no performance. The dungeon relies entirely on the brain, and since this book does not have a data panel, and the weapons have no attack power, so the sling mentioned above has no idea how powerful it is except for an unlimited ammunition, and the player does not know how much power has been added when upgrading, etc., Which makes me feel that the protagonist is still standing still in the first dungeon. Second point, although the title of the book is Infinite, most of the dungeons that the protagonist enters in the plot belong to the same world view. Except for those levels that are not enabled, the infinite flow is more like an adventure in another world, and this world view is original. In fact, I don't recommend that novices create original world views. , Just follow the traditional unlimited streaming, each copy is a movie or something, and none of the copies makes me feel interesting or impressive, and because it is the same world view, it lacks a sense of novelty. If you are looking for a meal replacement in Thriller Paradise, this book is not a good choice.

It looks good, it has a horror paradise feel to it, but it's not overpowering. I also like the writing style.

Your data is a bit poor. The first order is only 34. You have to promote it, otherwise it will be difficult to write down.

I hope it will be changed to 4,000 words per chapter after it is released 😍😍 and then updated twice a day (dreaming 😢😢)

It felt like part of the plot was pushed too quickly and ended before it was fully developed. Everything else is pretty good, come on

What a strong sense of déjà vu in a horror paradise

Come on, author

The more I watch, the more addictive I become I beg for a hundred chapters to be updated every day🧎

There is something, a classic puzzle suspense, the copy is a virtual game (not a pure game, more or less extraordinary) The writing style is very comfortable, the intelligence of the puzzle plot is also online, and the rhythm control is relatively mediocre, but not bad. Taking it all together, at least the food and grass can be expected in the future The first copy is short, you can taste it before cutting it off

There is an implicit sense of déjà vu, with simpler information and more blank space. It comes from your understanding of similar works of the story. Maybe there is reference, maybe not, but the image will be associated with it.

I have been keeping books for so long, and I am finally ready to start writing. I am also very happy that the author can keep writing.

When did you put it on the shelves?

The book seemed okay, but the title was too distracting, so I had no desire to read it. I came in to take a look because I was really short of books.

Recommended to give it a try There are no fake and touching plots, the distribution of reality and games is also very reasonable, and the short plots are very enjoyable to watch, at least the quality is above that of food and grass!

The ideas are good, but sometimes the expressions are not clear, or they are simply decorated for the sake of gorgeous words, but it hinders readers from understanding the content.

A book that can be read is already very good. Come on, the author.

How did I rise to the third place in the book friends list 🤔 Come on, author!

I haven't read it for a long time and it's finally finished. I've ordered it all. Although there are still more than a hundred pictures left to read, it looks very good at the beginning. I don't know why there are so few people. Looking forward to the author's next work!

After procrastinating for almost half a year, I finally finished reading the book, so I will write a book review as usual. I think this book is worth reading. The author has done a good job in retracting various foreshadowings, and used many older classic works. These old things may not be able to find a second one at the starting point 🤓 In terms of characters, although the author said there is a lack of highlights, I feel that every character basically "acts like that character should be", and also, How can there be so much sparkle in life? Everyone is trying to live. After talking about the advantages, let me briefly mention the disadvantages. The first point is that the combat power has collapsed. Because it is a game, the combat power is numerical, but the actual performance is like a Western fantasy novel in which the protagonist who saves the world can be shot to death by a group of soldiers. The Grand Prix is the best portrayal of the collapse of combat power. How come players can suddenly challenge the supreme being? However, it seems that this can only be solved by extending the player's growth time, and the effect is not necessarily good. The second problem is the separation between the "game" and the world view. I stopped around the time of the Grand Prix, and came back half a year later to watch the rest. The result was that it had no impact at all, because there were a lot of explanatory plots in the back, and not watching the previous ones did not affect the perception of the rest. The attribute of the game was almost completely invisible after the Grand Prix, and the descendants suddenly appeared and died suddenly. In summary, the foreshadowing recovery is done well, but I feel that the connection between playing the game and saving the world can be done better. Finally, the author said that the next book will challenge group portraits, and I wish the author all the best 🙂

The book was finished suddenly. Normally I would write a book review, but I still have more than a hundred chapters to finish. Please wait a little longer 😜