This Xiao Yan Has Seen Doupo

Huohuo is already going smoothly, but whether he reads or not, it's just pig's feet... How can you let people like Huang Tiandi and Feng Yun Wuji work hard to become enlightened...

I hope I can fight against the emperor when I am in my twenties, otherwise it will be no different from the original work

Not bad, very good. The character description of Xiao Yan is also very good. The timing was just right, as Xiao Yan had undergone three years of training and his character had become calm. I think excellent fan works not only describe the character's image and personality. It also injects more interest into the work. I cast a monthly vote and hope to support you.

There are so many problems in the book, and they are not rigorous at all. The comments will tell you that if you refuse to change them, it really affects people's senses!

Can any Shen Nong comment on the features of this book?

Since Xiao Yan has seen Doupo, he should know that the Xiao family may have come into the eyes of the Soul Palace, and it has nothing to do with the Shangyun Lan Sect, because the original Soul Destruction said that he gave the order, and the senior officials of the Ancient Clan knew the information about Xun'er and the Xiao family, and the senior officials of the Ancient Clan happened to have the Soul Clan undercover. , The intelligence system of the Ancient Clan was penetrated by the Soul Clan like a sieve. Any information the Ancient Clan possesses will probably be sent to the desk of Emperor Soul Heaven as soon as possible... So Xiao Yan must not naively think that without the Yunlan Sect, the Soul Palace will not be able to find the Xiao family, except for the blessing of the Ancient Clan. , It is difficult to save his father, because this is the order given by Hun Mie Sheng, and his subordinates can take advantage of his seclusion to be lazy, but if a key person cannot be caught, the outsourced people will report it layer by layer, and maybe someone will be difficult to deal with. It is useless to escape to Canaan Academy, only The ancient clan and the Danta have the ability to protect him (in the case of the Danta, there happens to be a Yao Lao lover. Xiao Yan had better contact Feng Zunzhao early to make him feel like going to Xuanyi). This is the best solution. Xiao Yan, a person who values his father, will definitely not be able to bear the pain of his father in the original work, otherwise It's just that the character design is broken. I estimate that with Xiao Yan's character, after reading the original work, he will definitely not follow the original route. There is a high probability that he will find the ancient tribe or Danta (the former uses Xun'er and Gu Yu, and the latter uses Xuan Yi). Those opportunities can be used with the ancient Bodhi tree, the pure lotus demon fire, and the alien. The pre-props related to fire are enough, and the rest does not matter, so I personally think it is a bit ridiculous for Xiao Yan to agree to Nalan's three-year appointment, because he should know that his father and the Xiao family are in trouble, and he has no time to play with the family. However, considering that Xiao Yan is still young, and the three of them are The annual appointment was just for Nalan to go find him (leave a soul communication method at the end (this is what Yao Lao Yaoren used in the original novel) to make it easier to find someone), and try to save time. Canaan College also uses important props such as Fallen Heart Flame and Sky Fire for the purpose, so don't treat yourself like a student. The mentality of playing house is gone. In short, when you write about Xiao Yan's behavior and psychology, you should pay attention to Xiao Yan's plan to quickly improve himself and keep his father's family after reading the original work. Highlight a purpose. Things like the three-year agreement are completely useless playing house.

Does the original work say where the old man Shennong got the fire of life? If you can get the flames of living beings, you don't have to worry about the medicinal materials of the treasure Dan Xuan Dan Golden Pill. You can go to the Sky Tomb to upgrade the alchemy. When the time comes, you will be promoted to the Eight Star Fighting Saint and the Emperor Soul. You can lurk in the Medicine Clan Grand Ceremony to refine the Void Swallowing Flame and advance to the top of the Emperor Soul Fighting Saint. Use the Alchemy Divine Art to get the Emperor Grade Young Pill, and then refine the entire Soul Clan to make the Soul Heaven Emperor Pill. The main body uses elixirs to advance to Dou Emperor, allowing Huoling Xiaoyi to accept the inheritance of Tuoshi Ancient Emperor and become Dou Emperor Fire Ling. The two Dou Emperor cultivations are merged, directly saving decades of hard training. If you ascend to the great world as soon as possible, you might be able to advance to dominate earlier than Muchen.

In the Sky Poison Prison Realm, there is radium radiation from the underworld, phantom poisonous smoke, continuous damage and abnormal status, continuous attacks with poisonous palms and stacked marks, and strange fire can also explode. Very suitable for poisoning, plotting, and sneak attacks. The complete release of the Poison Body of Eunnan should be able to strengthen the Nether Poison Fire to the point where it can rival the Burning Sky Flame of the Golden Emperor. The method of poisonous elixir collected by Yaochen should be the method of sanctifying the poisonous body of disaster. It is probably deduced from the combination of her mastery of the Nether Poison Fire and the Poisonous Body, and her mastery of two kinds of strange fires, the ninth-level Grandmaster Dou Sheng.

It's better to watch people fighting and become Xiao Yan

Jie Jie Jie, no one else cares, Medusa and the little witch from the Cao family must be there 😁

There is no need for this book. If you don't touch Xiao Yan, he is already destined to reach the top, and there are no regrets, so why bother? It's nothing more than a smoother journey, without the ups and downs of the original that's as attractive as the original. There is also Medusa, the relationship is completely based on the ticket that was first boarded and then replenished. Xiao Yan was reborn and had feelings, but you see that there was no interaction at all before Dou Po, and you didn't understand her at all. Now she is still the heroine. I doubt your character as Xiao Yan.

You can try to combine it with the author of Invincible from Genius and Dou Po

It's better to write a book Zhetian Yefan reads the script That way I feel more potential Zhetian has more regrets to change than Doupo If you don't count the detachment liquid

I don't know if there are any novels in which Xiao Yan was reborn from the Endless Fire Realm as a child. Although he was a child, he still had some power of the Heavenly Supreme Soul.

Are you just going to update this much when you put it on the shelves?

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