This Emperor of Heaven Comes from China

If you want to excel, delete your Internet jargon from your mind, otherwise you will end up like this. The writing and ideas are all right.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them, it's too awkward. Why write a female protagonist who is on the same level as the male protagonist if she doesn't have that strength. The first impression was pretty good, but after the heroine came out, the impression dropped a lot.

What's interesting is that the summoned characters can maintain their own personalities and memories. I've seen many summoning streams where the summons just have a name. Changing the summoned name to someone like Zhang San or Li Si doesn't have any impact. I have no desire to read it. However, the number of words in this book is too small. I will add it to the bookshelf first and then read it later when it is fuller.

This type of novel that summons people to flow is actually very difficult to be outstanding. Firstly, few of the summoned characters can write out the characters' original personalities and characteristics. The strategies of wise men and the clash of force between generals require high writing skills. If the performance is worse than the original character, it will not attract many people. The second is the adaptability of the world view of the summoned character. The fundamental lies in whether the character from the original low-martial or non-martial world adapts to the world view described by the author after being summoned. For example, the strange world summoned by the character from the world without martial arts is not suitable and it is difficult to survive. If the summoning is transcendent or deified, it may deviate from the characteristics of the original character, leaving logical loopholes and poisonous points when writing. Third, it is difficult to control the number of character summons. If there are too few summoned characters, there will inevitably be too much description in other parts of the book. Short stories may not have any problem, but long stories may be written off-center. If there are too many summoned characters, the characters who were written well in the early stage may disappear in the later stage. Why? Because the plot is developing and the world view is progressing, the characters in the early stage may no longer be applicable, and new characters must be summoned. During this period, if the writing does not meet the readers' expectations, it is easy to lose readers, and the plot will feel old-fashioned and aesthetic fatigue. Fourth, this type of novel is relatively niche, and there are many eunuchs. It requires a lot of perseverance and dedication from the author to finish writing it. Writing is not easy, but persistence is important. Come on

In terms of power, the writing is good so far, but in terms of personal realm, it's a bit rough.

Watch the Ming Dynasty a few more times, maybe you can get some inspiration.

Have you never seen my Chinese ancestors?

Chapter 1 If you don't change, you will never achieve anything in your life.

What about the eunuch? 😴

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What is the name of a fantasy novel that is also summoned and placed in various positions?

The first place in the cloud world strength ranking: Nuwa The second place: The Great Sun Tathagata The third place: Half God The fourth place: Amaterasu The fifth place: Liancheng Zhi The sixth place: Bu Jingyun The seventh place: Nie Feng The eighth place: Jian Yue's complete body The ninth place: Mo Kui's complete body The tenth place: Xiao Wu The eleventh place Name: Xiao Sanxiao No. 12: Daytime version of the Great Demon God No. 13: Big Master No. 14: Bai Suzhen No. 15: God of Immortality No. 16: Wu Wudi No. 17: Emperor Wenlong No. 18: Dragon Yuan version of Duanlang No. 19: Sword Master Long Er is No. 20: Emperor Shitian

The writing is very good. There are really not many books of this type. Come on.