Tokyo Bubble Era: My Kyudo Counterattack Life

How does this kind of full pressure flow out? The pressure is so full that the reader is pressured away

As a light novel, the background of parents committing irresponsible suicide and being chased by violent gangs is too depressing. I am talking about the word "depression", maybe because I have seen gangs before, and I know how innate these things are. He can do things like playing with women, violently oppressing them, forcing good girls into prostitution, and raping female students. Those obedience tests make people look like dogs. In recent years, gangs have been glorified in TV series and movies, but in fact, in novels, the protagonist has no way to survive. I personally think the best way is to see if the childhood sweetheart family has the rights. Maybe the protagonist will be wiser and sell the shop at a better price. There are too many gangster plots in this novel that are unreasonable.

It's okay for a man to sell himself, but it's better for my sister not to jump off the building

What the hell is this setting about selling oneself?

The book he wrote is not that bad. But he's not that good either. A book can be poorly written, but it cannot be poorly written. Ah, although these two sentences are nonsense, what I want to say is that you can watch it if you have nothing to do to kill time. But if you think about what the author wrote so well and so attractive, I would not recommend it. Of course, the main problem is that there are only more than 20 pictures now, and there are no hairs at all. Is it okay to take at least 40 pictures to read a book clearly?

I think he came in as a footpath. Is there any hope?

The introduction is just a piece of cake, now the pressure of starting in Tokyo will be full.

Give you a one-month pass and I'll run away. Your book is only suitable for part-time work. If you do it full-time, you will probably die miserably.

The shortcomings are not without 1. The rhythm is not well grasped, and the incoherent feeling will reduce the enjoyment a lot. At this stage, there are too few scenes to show the saints in front of people (it doesn't have to be too strong, but it is more or less) 2. The update speed needs to be faster. This book currently seems to be a steady and slow hit. But when the protagonist's strength is accumulated in the early stage, the update speed is not fast enough and it is difficult to retain readers. (It's not that it doesn't look good. I personally like it, but it's just too solid and boring to retain readers. However, the accumulation of strength in the early stage is also very important and indispensable. So the author can only work harder and become stronger by one level as soon as possible. (Written first cumulatively) 3. The theme is Kyudo, which is actually a bit eccentric. It is not a mainstream popular "weapon", but it is handled well so far. I hope more skills with bow elements will be added as soon as possible 4. The protagonist is mature and steady but not a super-high IQ type. This is the current character design The establishment is good, but it can be more stable and focused, and the methods are better. After all, the protagonist is really too weak in the early stage. When encountering the early gangsters, the methods are not enough, and it is easy to have logical problems (such as the inexplicable enemy's intelligence, the inexplicable protagonist's luck, inexplicable encounters with noble people, etc.)

Author Eunuch, re-open a book

The way Xiaobenzi talks is so long-winded and makes me feel tired.

Let me, a Shennong, come over and try it. Old rule, if you don't reply for three days, you will die.

I think there is no problem at all As for the girl: ... My sister is very warm (shouldn't be orthopedic). In addition to the lubrication of family affection, she is also a strong driver. She just doesn't want to bear the burden regardless of herself, but also trusts the other person. Trust is also growth The long-distance running sister in the strong wind is a bit abrupt, probably to change the map or the expenditure line, but it is very refreshing The singer sister is very sassy, but fortunately she is not a tough guy, and the branch line with the club feels that the plot will be more involved. Although the tank is annoying, it can be regarded as a recommendation The tool that drives the plot The rich girl of the Kyudo Club is currently relatively flat, but it is estimated that the class jump will help more in the future Support multiple female protagonists, hope not to have orthopedics Ramen, the father and son, and the underworld are both very rich..., Including the middle-aged man The police are also very rich All the characters contribute a lot to the plot, and the three-dimensional effect is very powerful The protagonist is very cold, this is the best, I hope to continue writing, he is a very mature author... :) Thank you.

It is best not to use steel balls. It will cause serious physical damage. The skin will be smashed and the eyes will explode. It is best to use needles. Wear medical gloves. No matter who you are.

When I saw the title of the book, I suddenly thought of this

It's a bit mediocre and slow-paced, but it's okay if you watch it.

Driving so fast? It's so touching. Are you just laying the groundwork in the first 300,000 words?

Come on, it looks pretty good so far.

I don't have any other ideas, the music girl is a good woman, you must catch her! Hurry up and put it on the shelves, I really want to see more 😭

So far, I have only read one book with the spirit of Big Brother at this starting point. If someone like Kasuga Ichiban is a gangster, he probably won't be able to collect the money, so he should go make some money himself!

I've been getting more and more confused lately😐.

It's hard to find a book that I can read. Come on, keep up the standards, and don't be a eunuch.

He has seen it a long time ago. He already knew it when he was cooking. Just don't treat others as fools. So even if your soul circle is actually not good, at least your soul circle method is not good. Your direct reincarnation method is better, or wearing it, wearing it is not good. In fact, it can only be another method of wedding announcement and reincarnation, starting directly from children.

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A very good book, with a relatively strong sense of reality, and it even feels like the author has studied or lived in Japan, or the background research is more serious. The writing is smooth and the story is strong. If you can persevere, you may not need to look for a second job. The shortcomings are also obvious. It is not focused enough, the fun is not coherent enough, and the storyline is too scattered. It just starts when you go to college. I hope to see the follow-up development.

Like the title, how about the article? Can Shen Nong tell me? Thank you.