Wanfa Dao Lord: Starting from Shuixiang Yalang

Boss Yu said in Bihu that writing can enlighten people, but why are the articles he writes so boring? I forced myself to listen to more than a dozen chapters, but I couldn't hold on anymore. I'm wondering if Boss Yu and the author of this article are the same person!

Book quality: gray. It's written in a literate manner, but at first glance, it turns out that it's an old trick. If you don't use the golden finger, something will happen at the beginning.

The author seems to be quite filial, and there is nothing wrong with that, but there is one thing. You can't be foolishly filial, and you don't want to take care of the alcoholic father who eats everything when you have money. I'm not saying that you should be unfilial, but there must be a limit. In a family like this, even if the character of the protagonist is out of control A phoenix can make a laggard become a sparrow. I still remember the one who asked his parents to rent a house after buying a house in Beijing. In the end, his heart was broken, so he could only say goodbye because he couldn't see the possibility that the protagonist could succeed. After all, the golden finger needs to be used by others.

It's too literary, and the pace is not very fast. The second and third chapters talk about one thing, but I don't know why I felt dizzy while reading it (the plot). Maybe the characters are too complicated. Some of them are just passers-by and I have to write a middle section. The psychology and actions of each character are very heavy.

It's inexplicable. I don't know what I'm doing day by day. I'm showing off my writing skills, but my writing makes no sense.

The writing is so messy, complicated for the sake of being complicated. I feel so tired reading it.

Putting the cart before the horse and making trouble all the time, Goldfinger doesn't care

After reading Chapter 3, I have a question for the author. How did the author come up with the price of hundreds or even thousands of taels of silver per acre of land? Is it hundreds or thousands of articles? Or does the author have a misunderstanding about the price of land?

I feel a little awkward for no reason, it would be better if it was smoother

I saw the author's post on Zhihu. The author's social details are very good, but I feel that the story is insufficient. There is a track that is very suitable for you, and that is writing historical novels. If it can be rigorously researched and combined with the social details that you are good at, readers will definitely like it.

Not until the end of the Qing Dynasty was this exploitative

I saw it on Zhihu, why don't you write novels the same way you wrote on Zhihu, hahaha

It could be a bit clearer, but it's a bit tiring to read.

Coming from Zhihu, I don't know what the boss's ID was before, but it seems like many people know him. The writing style is quite good, the paragraphs can be shorter, sometimes it seems a bit uncomfortable to read a large piece at once.

The writing is good, but the priorities are reversed. In addition, the protagonist's occupation is a tooth man, and the narrative characters are many and the plot is cumbersome. However, these messy trivial matters are very boring for readers. Readers should read Goldfinger. What a pity this writing~

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This book is not very "Internet-reading". I don't use the Internet very much, but the writing is quite literary. But it would be great if I can sign a contract for the first book. Is there any emotional line? There are too few books with good female protagonists from Qidian.

The author's writing style is excellent, and various descriptions are delicate. The protagonist is not like a modern time-traveler, but a hard-working native. The protagonist should focus on the development of Golden Finger to become stronger as soon as possible.

I won't talk about the plot because I can't stand it. It's either a typo or a bad sentence.

It's uncomfortable to read the writing.

I'm still teaching people how to write books on Zhihu

Who is the author? @_@