Naruto Starts with Indra Template

Suppressing fighting power (holding the Indra template as a dog for Konoha) The writing is average Poisonous (I don't understand why there are always people who are keen on whitewashing the old monkey ←_←, isn't it his responsibility that the village has become like that in his hands)

This book is not that good. The main character looks like a native and is very intellectual.

Indra. JPG (HD version)

To whitewash the Sandai novel, all bad things were done by Danzo. The Sandai was just incompetent. He couldn't do anything. He was not a bad person. If you accept it, you can continue to watch it. However, if he was incompetent, he should be a puppet. How could he suppress Danzo? He suppressed Danmo. How could he know nothing about the bad things Danzo did? The logic doesn't make sense

It's not as good as the popular world-destroying flow that suppresses combat power. It's also better than the indiscriminate killing flow that doesn't suppress combat power.

The heroine·Uchiha Hikaru. JPG

It would be funny if Indra's template kaleidoscope still caused vision loss. Indra is probably the talent ceiling in the ninja world.

Ruo Zhiwen, there is nothing exciting... Even the logic is a bit baffling

Average, the idea is right, but the writing is too poor. Please read more books! The writing is illogical. Sometimes I don't know what you want to say after reading half a chapter? Practice your grammar! You won't get ahead if you do this

This book is so rubbish, 100% unfinished

Or the three colors of black, white and red·Indra's pictures are beautiful

It's boring. The opening timeline is so much earlier than Narusa's. There are too many Naruto stories of this kind, and they're all over the top. If you write an opening like this again, you'll basically know what plot you're going to write just by looking at the introduction and chapter names! It is impossible to retain old readers with such a start and your introduction. I really hope that authors like you who write about Naruto can write some fresh and interesting plots instead of writing these seriously homogeneous plots.

How can we not unify and destroy the daimyo nobles, but still continue to play house? …

What the hell are you writing? It doesn't make sense.

The classic pressure suppressor has done nothing for two years, and his bloodline has not increased at all. It is just a piece of cake. The Otsutsuki bloodline next door is much stronger than this thing. At least he will not randomly suppress his combat strength.

There are too many Uchiha time travellers, and every writing method and route has been tried. How can I write something new?

Just think of this as the protagonist's adult state

After reading twenty chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The writing is quite strong, but if you use a lot of tricks, you can't grasp the plot, and you can only suppress the combat power. The bloodline progress in that system is also outrageous, and the various ratios are very unbalanced. Chapter 20 introduces Hikaru Uchiha, and then it becomes weird to read, and the character of the protagonist has changed.

It won't be based on the defense, but there is still some confusion. If you write Uchiha or Iron Eagle, then F4 will all die. This is a matter of where to sit, unless you take Shisui's line.