Kamen Rider: Starting from Dragon Black Swan Port

Have you ever been a mixed race? Just write it like this, take it for granted😡

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The audience of Dragon Clan fandom is all old poppies, don't they know the plot of Throne of Ice and Sea? I took a look at Chapter 11 of the table of contents before I transformed, and I still relied on the system's cheat finger to complete the novice tutorial. Dragon Clan fandom has always been slow to catch on. Nine out of ten books have been about Entering the Palace and one is about Escape. How could the audience expect it when it was written so bloodthirsty from the beginning?

It's new and good. It's a rare Dragon Clan fic. The plot can be said to be unique. It's different from the Dragon Clan fics I've seen before. I stayed up late to catch up on the latest. It feels like it's at the top level among the new batch of Dragon Clan fics from Qidian. The main plot is good. It's the first time I've seen a plot starting from Black Swan Port using the Dragon Clan setting in the New Testament. The setting of Kamen Rider is a bit weird, but the integration of the world view is pretty good. The emotional line is well written, and the interaction with Renata is very sweet. What feels more abrupt at the moment is that it jumps ten years and takes Su Enxi directly, without any foreshadowing. Renata and the male protagonist lived and died together in the first place, and then they lived together for so many years. Needless to say, they have a deep relationship. The potato chip girl, they started to get to know each other. She was only eight years old when she was born, so the lack of writing in the middle caused the relationship to be too vague. I don't know how it became a deep relationship between family members. Unless you tell me that it is not a harem, otherwise I feel that the emotional line is less interesting than Renata's companionship and smoothness. I don't know how to close it later. The appearance of the character Reggie Leif is quite surprising. I have never seen a fan writing about her before. I feel that the character creation is quite good so far. It's a pity that I discovered this book too late, and all the monthly votes have been cast. I can only verbally support the author first, hoping that he can continue to finish it.

Here is a record post. If you see something that makes you unhappy, please remember to tell me that the author will change it 🙂

The system cheapens words. Even if you have the Knight Belt or the card given to you by Shirou, it will be better than this start. To be honest, it's too embarrassing to have a strange word spirit and being unable to fight without a dragon. The characters have no three-dimensionality and cannot be reminded of the consciousness of "Kamen Rider". To be honest, if you rely on the system, it doesn't matter if you are a knight, right? Besides, Dragon Rider is not suitable for this environment. As the first Heisei Knight to start the era of great chaos, its appearance should be a diversified group portrait rather than a one-man show. The mirror world is the main body, and the knight's survival and fighting are the foundation of the Dragon Knight story. Obtaining the power of a knight is a process of being recognized by the belt and the knight. Not everyone can fight as a "weird hero" like Kamen Rider. This is also the starting point for many knight stories such as Kai Dou, Kuuga and even Zongzi. They have obvious growth and are closely related to the protagonist's experience. The Dragon Knight numerical monster, a guy who can equal or even slightly outperform other PVP players by just relying on the jungle mirror world, is not suitable for starting the game. Let's talk about the writing style. To be honest, the writing style is obviously 50% borrowed from the original work. Coupled with the long and useless systematic copywriting, the content of characterization is too little for a knight's story. I can't say it's naive, but it's tasteless. I hope other elements of knights can be added (it doesn't mean that as long as you have a belt, you are a knight!), Anyway, the dragon knight at the beginning is really not that good.

I've read a few fanfics about Dragon Race Kamen Rider before, and I'm used to it, so I didn't have high expectations for this one, but I just finished reading it, and surprisingly it was pretty good. Regardless of other things, the single lines of writing do have a Jiangnan flavor. For example, the three memory chapters from 22 to 24 have a very cliched plot. I originally wanted to jump to it, but the writing style and diction are simply too orthodox. The writing is very fluent, and the logic is smooth, if not rigorous. This Su Jiu is not like the protagonist in some books, who boasts that he is very powerful, but in the end, during the conversation, he speaks like a giant baby, and does not show any timidity when facing Number Zero. However, I still have to say that the core of this book is actually the dragon family, not the Kamen Rider. The Kamen Rider currently only represents a manifestation of power in this book. The protagonist sits there and thinks about the system and actually says that he has thought up two so-called codes of chivalry. It is true that the protagonist has no chivalry spirit so far, and the knight system does only represent strength. At the same time, the protagonist completes the task system and directly rewards the belts and abilities of other main knights. I think the author said that they will be distributed. To be honest, I am quite happy to distribute the knight's power, but the main knight is different. The contract cards and belts in your storyboard world are fine, but I just feel that those people are not worthy of the main knight's belt and it seems too cheap. But after all, there is such a heaven-defying thing as time vent. You can follow up by saying that the system is created by the omniscient and omnipotent book. You can even say that Black Swan Port was built by the protagonist to complete his own plan. The setting is arbitrary. Of course. These are all minor issues, and it would be a bit of a pity to abandon this book because of these settings that I personally think are innocuous.

Seeing that the author is asking for further reading, I would like to make some comments. You can write original plots, but you also write original plots and original characters. This leads to the fact that most people who come for the Dragon Clan will not chase after them. After all, they are fellow Dragon Clan members. Also, what we want to see is the protagonist showing off and making up for his regrets. Although this is very straightforward, it is indeed a major goal for us to read dragon fan fiction. Otherwise, we can go directly to the original work. In your original plot, you skipped the process of the protagonist killing everyone, and only wrote that the protagonist appeared and saved people. The main character's battle was not exciting, after all, this is still a Tokusatsu Tongpachi. Combat is the most critical part of special photography, and you skipped it. Try to go through these completely new original plots as quickly as possible, and go to the original plots where the protagonist kills everyone in the original plot.

In fact, I feel that Dragon Clan in Qidian should be a better title than Kamen Rider🔥

Dragon Clan + Kamen Rider, can this book be finished?

If you have never watched Dragon Clan Runs Against Kamen Rider, can you watch it?

The author must kidnap Nono back while he is still young. Nono's childhood was quite miserable.

Abstract, chapter 111, and I haven't entered the main plot yet. I'm still talking about love and sex. It's too difficult.

Have you ever been a Kamen Rider? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted

It's rare. It's really good. It's not like the Dragon Clan where Lu Mingfei is the protagonist. It's written a little differently.

By the way, does anyone know how to use Ai to run pictures? I want to put together a few pictures＼(`Δ')／

There is too much written about Black Swan Harbor. I haven't gone out after listening to the book all morning.

Chapter fifty-six is ​​really a bit embarrassing.

I shouldn't have licked Lu Mingfei this time, right?

The last few chapters are quite interesting, and the emotional lines are also good. I hope to see Khorkina and Renata accept them 🌹

When will the Wushuang Dragon be summoned to roam around and fly into the sky on a dragon?

Why does the word spirit turn into a deadpool if used too much? Does the original work have this setting? I don't think I've seen it before.

Is this a eunuch? No update for several days

I think Nono is pretty good too. Can you accept it? 🙂🙂🙂

I thought it was fun to fight, why do I keep falling in love? . .

Can the author be brought into the group 🙂