Talisman of Immortality: I Rely on Taoism to Cultivate Immortality

The protagonist has been practicing alone since he was six years old. . Too hasty

None of the 4 spiritual roots, the whole 4.5 Spiritual roots

How to say it? Well, the protagonist's cultivation of immortality is too difficult, and he has that golden finger. I feel like cultivating immortality is still more difficult than hell, well, how should I put it? For that reader, this is too difficult.

The age setting is not quite right! Children under 10 years old

In a poor novel, the protagonist and the protagonist's friends are all poor. The protagonist's friend asked the protagonist to borrow two broken spirit stones, but the protagonist couldn't get them! The word "poor" runs through the entire book. It's depressing to watch.

It's better to just start in the sect. You can't learn all the settings for mortals. After all, the pace is fast now.

The writing style is a bit verbose. It's good to want to explain the details clearly, but it should be clear and concise, and don't skimp on word count.

There are too few updates. I used to have two chapters a day.

Is Golden Finger a scroll or a seed?

I feel like the progress is a bit slow 🥱

The story of a modern man who travels to the world of cultivating immortals

If you start with a waste, your entire spiritual roots will die!

Fake dog, wandering around! ! If you have that talent, study your craft more!

The novel is good and suits my taste😋