Era: Time Trainer

The protagonist is too arrogant. It will be difficult to hide it from the people in the future time and space in the long run. After all, there are differences in clothing, cultural differences, and there is a strange conductor suddenly added. How is it possible to hide it? Then we will contact the officials there, and then...

For those who have followed the previous book, let me first talk about the previous book. The previous book was pretty good. Although there is nothing exciting about it, it is still relatively realistic as a historical novel, and there are no major poisonous points. As for the last dozen or so chapters, I couldn't stand it, so I stopped subscribing. Let's talk about this book again. As a period novel, people who read this kind of novel are generally older and pay more attention to family relationships, so the family relationship aspect still needs to be written well. As for the issue of plug-ins, this time the plug-ins are relatively large, much larger than the previous book. As a plug-in involving time and space, it can affect people around you at a small scale, and it can affect the entire country and the entire planet at a larger scale. If the protagonist's cheat comes into contact with too many people, sooner or later it will be impossible to keep it a secret. If he can keep it secret, what about other time and space? The author of this plug-in needs to think carefully about making an outline and how far he is going to write it. The above is just a personal suggestion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

What I'm talking about is daily life, but it turns out to be a mistake. Is it interesting? Do you think everyone around you is stupid?

Is this going to make the protagonist schizophrenic? Is it possible for a person in the 1960s not to tell others what he saw? The protagonist doesn't understand cheats in his consciousness. Who would use cheats nowadays when the period novel is really popular?

I hope the author will write well and the monthly ticket will not be less. Please keep it first

Don't repeat the poisonous points in the late stage of the previous book, support it first

Just one question: Will those who get off the bus erase their memories? The protagonist only travels through time and not through space. If you don't want to be a guinea pig, you'd better pay attention to this.

Come on, come on. The last book was good. Come on.

Recently, I am in a hurry to upgrade to L4 (I immediately gave up after updating the mechanism last year). The author's investment in the new book has reached 100 people and 1000 rewards, and the new book has been on the shelf for the first time, and the new book has been on the bestseller list/monthly ticket list for the first time. But I beg the author to write well. The standard between the beginning and the end of the previous book is too different... I welcome all book friends to supervise.

Is this two pounds? Are you changing your number now? I randomly found a book to listen to at night, and I heard it before even a chapter was out. Your writing style is so unique. It is estimated that there is no one in the whole starting point who writes like you. The chronology, characters, and locations remain basically unchanged. The starting point is relatively thin. It's just that the rhythm in the middle and late stages is not well controlled. Sometimes it flies up quickly. I feel like if I don't subscribe well, I'm going to finish it and start the next book right away.

The first two chapters were average, and the third chapter was a bit interesting. However, after the third chapter, the author was a bit hasty in writing, and many things were not written clearly, so he hurriedly ended the plot of the first space-time train. The subsequent connecting plots were also average. Maybe the author could refine it while the word count was still small.

The hook is too big, and it's hard to explain. The author himself doesn't understand how to set it up, and the logic doesn't make sense. I suggest you consider what the hook function is and how to use it.

I feel like the setting is quite new, but I can't see it anymore. I asked myself why I haven't seen the update. Should I publish the next book under this account?

From Two Catties of Noodles to Three Catties of Noodles, although the routines are the same, it is much more interesting than other books. I'm investing in it.

The subject matter is novel and the author's writing style is good

You can copy novels from future magazines, which travelers bring with them

It's a novel with a novel setting, a little bit of plot, and good period warmth. The only other novel with this level was my 1979.

Can provide a storage space, more hidden

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I invested, don't be a eunuch.

There has been no update for five days, so I don't dare to fall into the trap.

The emotional scenes in every book are bad, but this one is especially bad.