Fairy, Why Is This Happening?

Not to mention the beginning of this book, the first few chapters of your book are always quite amazing, but the current 70,000 words have made great progress in terms of interest, fluency and readability. It can be said that it beats all your previous books. I think this one is really interesting, but how could I have thought of Tou Xian Xia? With all due respect, readers of the Xianxia category may not be used to this second-dimensional flavor.

If you have time, change it. How can anyone see if the details are not handled well👀 I think people who are not blind should know that the protagonist is Xu Qing Is this the impure clown with this surname🤡? It also needs to be analyzed. The other two people are also selectively deaf 😥

Open a small account to write? What to do with those two at home?

Brother, your first priority is to find a class. You and Arnold can stand together. Arnold seems more logical than you

👀: This is history 🤓: I have made my own decision! 😋: So naked! 👀: Why don't you avoid it even if you know it's a stone? 🤓: After one escape, it has become two escapes! So why avoid it? 👇🏻This button can summon me back to continue Akaishi

From "The Brave Man" to now, when can I finish writing a book completely?

Nm, a fifth-level player was washed into a ninth-level, but after a fw nine-level fight, it was not clean at all. Your level is very weak, especially the book also said that the seventh-level is to practice Qi, build foundation, and the golden elixir is equal to the golden elixir. Your combat power must be polished and polished. The book is interesting, but the upper limit of the combat power system will be like that.

You are right, but this is Immortal Master Wushuang. The ninth level is equivalent to refining qi, the seventh level is equivalent to golden elixir, and the fifth level is equivalent to transforming into a god. Then the fifth level was framed by the seventh level on the battlefield and the foundation was damaged. The ninth level is unable to practice; You are right, but this It is the Guanyi Sect, a sect whose sect leader is only at the sixth level of strength. The son of the sect leader of the seventh level of strength caused the sect's genius of the fifth level to fall to the ninth level of strength without any punishment or even any protection, causing the original genius to be harassed by the disciples of the ninth level. To be the concubine of an elder who is a generation older than her, she doesn't care about the reputation of the sect, she is purely just a side chick; You are right, but this is Fei Xueyao's adoptive mother and master, she just comes here and does nothing to gain the strength of the sect's honorary elder, and just sits back and watches her adopted daughter being raped. Framed, humiliated, forced, after the adopted daughter's foundation was damaged, she did not come forward, take care of, or protect her, did not help her to restore her foundation, did not seek compensation for her, and allowed the elders of the adopted daughter's generation to force her to become a concubine. Instead, she stopped her when she planned to take revenge.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but later on in the Tower of Mystery (around Chapter 40), the design was very unreasonable and forced to reduce intelligence and brainlessness. I just forced myself to follow other people's scripts, but the script is really a piece of shit. The first secret realm has given a mask to prevent others from knowing the true identity. But do you know how Mo Laoqi discovered the protagonist group? By voice and dress! In addition, the other party is afraid of being discovered in the dark jungle, aren't you afraid of being discovered? Mo Laoqi directly revealed his identity and went to test it in person! There are so many ways, Mo Laoqi just chooses the one that is easiest to die. From his perspective, the enemy is in the dark and we are in the dark! Generally speaking, the author wants to do a good job and make the novel enjoyable and logical, but his skills are insufficient and he is self-defeating. Also, it has nothing to do with normal Xianxia. Xianxia is just a small background. There are only immortals but no heroes, so we fall in love in the context of immortals and heroes.

This is cut, it is indeed Midnight Kui

You're not going to cut it, are you? I feel like the pace of this book is okay

Maybe it's because I've become more poisoned by the idea of ​​locking my heart and never falling in love. I've written a bunch of poorly written books that are awkward and embarrassing. Now I'm scared to see books like this.

The talent is only activated after the first copy and I haven't seen it activated. It's like nothing.

The ideas are good, but the writing needs to be improved. The plot is a bit difficult to read, and some of the arrangements are too deliberate to stand out. If I continue writing, I should make great progress.

At first glance, it looks like Lao Deng, the writing is really good 🙂

Okay, I have a lot of imagination and food.

Isn't this about giving the same doll of the heroine to someone else? Why did he die 😜

It was very beautiful. Why did it suddenly disappear?

Come here to take a look at gg

? ? ? Isn't that outrageous? Why can't I delete this book? I deleted it several times. I read it the next day and found it was still on the bookshelf.

It's really just the simulation doll Na Lei, gone, gone

Kui Kui Kui AOI Shark Kui Ye Ban Kui I have already found three accounts of this person. It's really gb abstract 😅. Come on, do you have any more? Let me add it.

So how many heroines are there?

It's pretty, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch