Fulian: Dominate Aura at the Beginning

First of all, it is recommended to change the name of the book. As a title of a fan fiction book, it should be strongly related to the main character of the original work to attract readers. Although the character "Aura" is out of the circle, readers like me who have only read the first episode only remember the plot of "there is a big demon who was accused by Fulian of Zisha", but if you just mention her name, I may not be able to tell who is this? It is recommended to add the protagonist "Fulillian" to the title of the book, such as "As a Great Demon, I am Fulian's Master". This may better reflect the highlights of the chapters that have been written. (Personal opinion from a reader's perspective, laymen don't know whether the author's perspective may be different) Then, the relationship between the protagonist and Volamei is really great. Especially in the interlude written in the middle, after Volamei passes away, the protagonist can only repeatedly taste the love that Volamei had for him that he could not understand in his memories, and then correspond to the previous scene where Volamei used his own company to deepen his memory for him. Hey, sorry for my lack of expression skills, I can't describe this feeling for a while. It's the same as what Simmel did for Fulian, but more intense and straightforward. Although the plot after Volamei's death was very tough, I really couldn't stop watching it. Finally, author, please update quickly! The writing, characters, and plot are all good, and this treasure fic is sure to be popular!

This taste is so authentic, with a hint of sadness in the beautiful warmth. The cute interactions between the protagonist, his late wife, and the little stool Fulian make people smile from time to time, and the protagonist has the same cool style as the original version. The most critical thing is that the regretful beauty of the Venus detached arm of Frillian in the original work was written. I know that the current plot is forging a knife, and I know that it will be stabbed in at some point in the future. I can't bear to part with the beautiful memories I've created now, but I'm also looking forward to the pleasure of the knife thrusting in. This thrill of struggle stimulates my nerves and is so exciting.

It's a very good pure love story, but I feel like the title is a bit unworthy of it.

Volamei, Volamei, when will my heroine come back 😭😭

I haven't watched it for three months, and I'm dying of it. Ever since I brought Fulian with me, it's not good to watch, and the plot of going back to the past is even more unattractive.

Have you ever been a demon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

What is outrageous and ironic is that the male protagonist of this book and the original demon king (the one Simmel killed) have been pursuing a lifelong relationship. Aura has it since she was born, but she has only just tasted it. The seeds of peace between humans and demons that were once in my heart when I was young were just buried seeds until Aura died. Whether it was heaven-defying magic or heaven-defying talents (emotions), they were all wasted by her.

It is a rare masterpiece. I personally think it is much better than the one next door. It has a very original feel Most of the Fulian fans are cheating, and then remove the regret of the lifespan theory, but in fact, the most profound thing about Fulian is the separation between the immortal and the mortal. The short time and the emotional memories are what make Fulian's works stand out At present, it seems that the protagonist will be like Fulilian in the later period. He will not really have feelings until his wife dies. The daily description is not like the new author, very smooth and gentle, so the final parting will be more reluctant, and what kind of story will follow will be even more interesting It is a pity that it is too short. It seems that we have to wait for a while.

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Switching to a full-time job just because of temporary results will lead to a dead end in the end.

Laohuo, the title of your book is really bad 🙂

Double pinch

Good looking

Have you ever been a demon? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

At first, I thought Prison Fire was slower because it didn't have an outline, or because I was anxious about the progress of the plot. But when diving in the group these days, it seems that Laohuo's state is not like this. Lao Huo has a basic outline and there is no obstacle in the plot, but the performance of this book makes Lao Huo very anxious. In the few days since it was put on the shelves, after the forced promotion, it has already collapsed before even turning the perspective. In addition, he became masculine not long after, and the dual pressure on his body and the background data made him extremely anxious. Yes, the first order has such good data, but it has only been on the shelves for two days, and the plot has collapsed immediately before there is any problem... If I were a prisoner, I would probably doubt my life. Looking at it this way, this book probably won't make much money. But according to Laohuo's self-reported savings... The money for writing a book was just like a play to him. He probably felt like this because he didn't get any feedback after writing for so long. Although I sympathize with Laohuo's experience, I still hope that Laohuo can persist. Don't be like Celie next door and stop updating immediately because of data collapse.

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In the first 20 chapters, I thought he was an extraterrestrial demon, but later I found out that he was just a pretty cool newcomer, and he probably didn't even have an outline. Le

To be honest, why don't you change the title 😂 I just read the introduction carefully. When the protagonist controlled Abra, it was already a thousand years after Volamei passed away. Why should the plot be so long? You can't just jump to a thousand years later, right?

When I first saw the name, I thought it was about a harem erotic novel. After a quick glance, I discovered that your boy wrote a pure love novel.

To be honest, I can write it well, but after more than 20 chapters, I still haven't written the title. I suggest changing the title to Marrying Flamel in the Beginning.

Hey, I want to watch Magical Deng as a substitute for the main character, and I find it is more delicious than the main meal I also want to watch Magical Deng and see Electra calling daddy and loving mommy at the same time. More importantly, let's watch the magic episode and see the daughter of Lao Deng and Xiao Deng pestering the protagonist to ask his father to tell stories 🙂

Have you ever been a demon? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The author's soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving a long whip and setting up six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul is back... Singing high and triumphant... We are all in the same robe... 𓀋𓀠𓀤 𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back.... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

Just give it a try, it seems that the appearance is not described in detail

But it's time to wake up from the dream... (AI pinched)

We have agreed with the neighbor to take turns to be the pigeon, right? If the neighbor is the pigeon, you will not be the pigeon. The neighbor will resurrect you and become invisible.

Like the title, I thought it was alive for a while, so I subscribed to the next one, but suddenly it died again 😭😭

He resurrected and collapsed again after two days ()

Why is it so similar?😭

It's not my brother, why does this book look so similar 😭