The First Military Sage

Have you ever killed anyone? Some things, taken for granted

After reading ten chapters, old wine in new bottles is a collection of all kinds of vulgar clichés: the abandoned son with a jade pendant is suspected of having a background, the adoptive parents are old and forced, the thousand-year-old noble family ends up competing with the protagonist for a minor official...

This is an enjoyable article, which is worthy of recognition. The remaining problems are that the protagonist is born, the supporting characters have no IQ, the force value is unreasonable, the environment is unreasonable, and all kinds of unreasonable. To put it simply, it is just a random story that was written casually. The author has neither skill nor care.

Let me make it clear first that the setting writing of this book is actually still online. Book lovers who don't pay much attention to details and logic can read it. I have only read Chapter 11 so far, and I was poisoned by a bunch of little poisons. At the beginning, there were 500 young people in the county government who came to work as clerks and paid money to do odd jobs, and they could only stay for three years. With so many people from TM, are you a royal palace? 🤔🤔🤔 After that, he became a classic stiff and aloof 🥶 without talking, just a classic protagonist of a friend Then there is the villain. Among the famous families with thousands of years of inheritance and people in the capital, there is a powerful second generation who makes everyone of his peers not afraid. He and the protagonist compete for the position of a minor official, and the one they compete for is the executioner...😅😅😅 Then the protagonist is an orphan who was picked up, and he has a jade pendant but has lost it. Now there is a very interesting cult looking for this jade pendant, and some members have already found its location. It involves a cultist with high martial arts skills, a cult that looks quite powerful, and I don't know if it is the force hidden behind it that forces the protagonist to live among the people. Anyway, the protagonist, who has just been practicing martial arts for three days, bought the jade pendant...👏👏👏 Finally, the thousand-year-old noble family mentioned earlier is purchasing prescriptions from medical clinics, and it is also a very classic protagonist whose father happens to have a prescription that is a family heirloom. After the protagonist knows that the villain has the ability to get six generations of famous doctors for this plan, the nationally famous old doctor is forced to poison the whole city, create a plague, and then send him to prison to behead him. After knowing that his father has a strong temper and will never sell it, the other party may take some violent measures. The protagonist still expressed that he was not panicked at all. Not only did he not think about persuading his father or thinking of a solution or anything like that. I just feel that I will be able to become a clerk in three months, and then the other party will not dare to mess around... 🔨🔨🔨 (I don't know, I thought you could become a county magistrate 🤤) And when I returned home by chance, I happened to meet the other party leading someone to threaten my father. After the protagonist drove the person away, he ignored it and did not think of any follow-up response.

A remote county is so awesome! Can't other big cities be more awesome?

As a layman, I also know that you can't keep sharpening your knife.

The protagonist kills people without touching the body, and takes money and other things from the house?

You really should be nicer to your adoptive parents. The so-called innocent life experience is a drag. It is better to get the jade pendant by chance than the current arrangement.

The writing style is very familiar, but the thinking is not enough. The plot design is old-fashioned, seems boring, has no excitement, and no explosive points. The author can find someone with brains to collaborate on writing a book.

Logic cannot be self-consistent. His mother knew that he was a murderer when he was a child 😒. Man, what is the law of heaven?

This protagonist is really a wolf with a heart and a dog's lungs😦. If Fang gives him some sweetness, he will act like a dog and wish he was your father. Your adoptive parents love you wholeheartedly and eventually become an elderly person. How can you even say that you are your adoptive parents?

The defense was broken... A small local yamen officer thought it was Da Feng's rhythm of beating up the men... It turned out that Xiao Wu had such an awesome name, and it took him a long time to break the stone... It was too tiring, and it was better to practice skin and bone training. Qi and blood martial arts looked awesome, but they were not as good as the fighting ability of mortals cultivating immortals.

What a novice, the story line is too fluent, and it follows an old routine. The protagonist will not buy the jade he bought for five taels of silver, and the villain will have to kill the whole family.

The story has the feel of an ancient novel, and it's too watery.

After killing people, he didn't take any money. The protagonist is so poor, why do you want to pretend? No wonder not many people watch it.

One man becomes an army and becomes a soldier. How about we take a look at the introduction you wrote?

With poorly written plot points, blunt routines, and immature writing, this book is 90% eunuch-like.

I quit after one chapter. The author lived forever and ten years ago.

Generally speaking, there is no problem, but there are constant little poisons, such as killing a man named Wan without taking any property. Anyone who is not a fool knows that this is a vendetta. Is it difficult to find the protagonist? There is also a skill that goes beyond the limits. Do you think the creators of this skill are just like this? The main character is really big. It's really annoying to practice other people's skills and put on that pretense.

It was written by a studio, it doesn't make sense, just read it without thinking. The setting itself is weird. A yamen is written very well, an administrative government must exist, and there is no stronger and universal enemy force to set it off. The combat power of this background will definitely collapse.

If you don't dare to kill someone, what kind of killing plug-in should you use?

Trolls, this is an internet article, not the Four Great Classics! I'll give you a Dream of Red Mansions, can you understand it?

Forcing the setting is too conflicting. The protagonist has a house in the city and a medical clinic, and works as a slave in the Yamen A time-traveler with a trick ran to explore the dangerous life experience of his predecessor when he was a child The prescriptions of his own medical clinic are coveted, so just sell them. , You are invincible as long as you live, but you have to work as a master when you are weak The children of the thousand-year-old family also went to the Yamen to work as slaves. The head of the family dared to smash the table with the county magistrate, and the children of the family ran to grab the position of a swordsman. The key point is that you also said that most people may not like the swordsman.

It's really average, but the pressure is severe. First, kill high-level people. High-level martial arts cannot be transferred and inherited. Secondly, you can't kill more low-level people. If you kill too many people, you will easily go crazy. To put it simply, you have to kill people at a higher level and then inherit your own skills at the same level. It's really disgusting.

Many settings are the same as Yangshen, especially the protagonist's father Han Yi is the Prime Minister of Dayu, and there is also a plot of father and son antagonism. He has the same identity setting, personality and thoughts as Yangshen's Prime Minister Hong Xuanji. The difference is that the protagonist's mother is a Confucian sage, but she has a love brain. She blindly fell in love with a ruthless person like Han Yi, and killed her wife and abandoned her son for the sake of Taoism. I feel that the character of the Confucian saint like the protagonist's mother is not good enough. A leader of the Holy Land cannot see the changes in the current situation, has no plans for the future, and does not hesitate to die just for the eight hundred disciples of the Holy Land. It can only be said that she is stupid because of reading. As a saint, as long as she does not die, the court will let her disciples go. Finally, this book is also about abortion, and it is estimated that it took two or three years for the protagonist to become a saint.

A school palace, a holy land of martial arts, stretches for eight hundred miles. This must be four hundred kilometers. How big is this?

It is said to be a military strategist, but are you writing about a military strategist? Selling dog meat as a sheep's head, the more you write, the more outrageous it becomes

In fact, there is no need to worry about the county seat in the back. Heiyun Village, Luo Family, Mrs. Luo, etc. Are all just for the sake of killing. In fact, these characters can be written in a thick and focused way. There is no need to rush. The county seat can be written as 300,000 or even 1.2 Million. As long as the sense of gain is well written and the characters have been written

Cultivation of immortality and hundreds of arts, various numbers of water characters

Is this book unfinished? It's over in just over 1 million words.