Global Cataclysm, My Items Can Be Upgraded

Just cut it, and the article will start flowing directly. In the era of fast food literature, who still reads Gou Daoliu? Even if I read it, I would wait until it reaches more than 500,000 words. Watching Gou Daozhui is not satisfying at all, and I am so angry that my blood pressure is high.

After reading the plot, I felt it was a bit familiar, and then I looked at the introduction and the author... I'm guessing, how many books have you read? I've read no fewer than five, six, or seventy-eight introductions to this golden-finger upgrade gun, and they all have various flaws. The combat power collapsed too quickly, and I brought along useless burdens, all kinds of NT supporting characters, and the Golden Finger Decathlon. I feel that my combat power has collapsed and I suppress it like crazy. I want to build a power but also want to be a lone wolf. I occasionally play a guest role as other people's nanny. I want to find a woman and want to be Liu Xiahui, and so on. I have worked hard to write dozens of chapters for each work. I cut it off soon after the results were not good on the shelves. I know you want to make money, but are you really not tired of repeating this routine over and over again? If you have time to write more public chapters, why not polish it? Polish the plot, read it for yourself, what is poisonous and what is pleasant, it is better than cutting those few leeks over and over again. When you are too self-motivated to write a book, it will be of no use even if you write ten books. The writing has not improved at all, and the plot is just flawed.

In fact, it mainly depends on the author's thoughts. If you think it is easy to write, then continue writing. But if it is uncomfortable to write, then it is better to cut the book quickly. After all, writing is uncomfortable. In the end, not only will it be uncomfortable for us to read, but you will also feel stuck.

This golden finger. It's too big and too complete. It can be strengthened and refined to turn waste into treasure. It can be used both offensively and defensively. It will easily collapse later. Then there are multiple functional spiritual objects that can be added to any situation. It seems that the author has a poor grasp of cheats and plot structure, and keeps adding new plug-ins to cheats to make up for the loopholes. There is no surprise or expectation for the new treasure. It will be better if you just look at it, but it will make you uncomfortable if you look at it all the time. Just cut it if you want.

How old is the author? Tai Shen, a man is not cool, his works are too unfinished, and he cannot insist on writing a novel worth two or three million yuan.

The protagonist takes the woman across mountains and rivers, but the author still does not tell the readers the reason for doing so!

Men are not cool and unrestrained, and their left ears listen to the sky. These two accounts have been disabled. It seems that they have to change their accounts again 😁

The official version of this novel feels so rubbish

The last book ended too early. I had just become invincible and was waiting to see the side-pushing map, but it ended suddenly. I hope this one will work better.

I don't know why it looks so awkward. It was pretty good up front, but it started to feel awkward after I kept up with the big group.

In fact, I don't think it's a question of Gou Daoliu or Wuwei Liu. The story is good and the writing is smooth. In fact, I like this story very much, but for some reason I have been thinking about whether to continue pursuing it. Until the author considered whether to continue writing, I started to think seriously. I think there are four reasons~ 1. The initial map change was too fast, resulting in an abrupt change in the story. 2. It may be because of Gou Daoliu that the equipment upgrades are delayed, which makes people uncomfortable. 3. You describe the landlord and the landlord's son as if they are intellectuals. 4. The description of the protagonist is really unlikable and makes people want to punch him twice. The above are personal thoughts~Please accept it I still like this story very much in the end, good luck to the author!

What is the protagonist's superpower? Little flames are spiritual creatures.

What kind of multiverse is this? I've seen several introductions about nail gun upgrades?

This author obviously likes wives and mature women

Come on, write well, take your time, it will definitely become a hit. I hope there will be some female characters of all kinds, wives, young wives, royal sisters 🙂🙂 Don't force things to happen, just let nature take its course. The ones that appear so far are very good. In some books, those who have been married for many years are still original, and they look particularly fragmented.

It was quite well written, but it's a pity that it was cut.

What do you think about this latest chapter? If you want to be a lone wolf, you have to fight to the end. If you want to gather everyone and become a god, then you should take advantage of the fire and say that there is not enough food, which is very coquettish. It's better to think carefully about what you want to write.

What the hell? This again?

It's very good. Why are you ready to cut it?

If the protagonist is so distrustful of others, then he should just recruit a monster brother. You have to enter the safe zone while wearing a baby outfit. If the person is written too well, the logic will fall apart. The more I read it now, the more frustrated I feel. You can add some genius land treasure designs. Otherwise, we would have to keep fighting with the people in the safe zone.

Can you please stop writing about this crappy gun?

If the protagonist encounters someone who is clamoring to kill the Virgin in the apocalypse, it is best to kill him first, otherwise when he is in trouble later, he will add insult to injury, or if he is unhappy or even greedy, he will secretly open the door and backstab, causing the destruction of the team.

Brother Hui is here for a visit

This is a one-time release of the archived manuscript. Are you ready to cut it?