Pushing the Heavens: Starting from Getting Xiao Li's Flying Knife

If you can't do it without fail, don't write about martial arts like Li Xunhuan's flying knife. Li Xunhuan has accumulated a prestige and invincible self-confidence that people dare not face directly. If the protagonist pulls his crotch, I will feel like I have seen a piece of shit.

In the first four chapters, he was poisoned and died. His internal energy was exhausted and he couldn't recover, so forget it. Xiao Li's flying knife couldn't kill Yu Canghai, so what did you do? Xiao Li's flying knives either don't make a move, but when he does, there are no misses. After finally killing Yu Canghai, I became a blank slate again, poisonous.

The storyline transition is too abrupt

We're about to get married, and we're about to have a little orgasm, so you run away to the Demon Cult. . . . . . Have you made an outline? The main line is so erratic. 😁 As soon as the protagonist changes sides, his character collapses. Yin Lin Pingzhi didn't write it clearly either. Forcibly add a little shrimp villain.

I don't know what to say. Anyway, this book is extremely poisonous.

The protagonist is too villainous and has no flavor of a hero

The practice of absorbing energy absorbs essence, energy, and spirit. Not just angry!

No, this protagonist is too damn double-standard.

Xiao Li, who was so cold, couldn't kill anyone with his flying knife.

1. The protagonist already has a golden finger, but he is still described as petty and petty. He does not waste time to improve his strength. He still wants to fall in love with Yue Lingshan. He does not have a good relationship with you. He feels cowardly after being forced into a corner. It is really poisonous. 2. It's not a genius setting in the first place. Isn't it enough for Xiao Li's Flying Knife➕Funzhenxinfa to make you stronger at the beginning? The two-realm crossing flow next door has already become an ascetic monk leveling up. If you become stronger, don't you have everything? 3. The author is really not good at writing characters' emotions. If you can't write well, don't forcefully write it, otherwise it will affect the plot of the original work too much. It will be very harmful to the original work. It is better to fill in some regrets of the original work, which is more appropriate. 4. With this infinite theme, if the protagonist's layout is not enlarged, it will not be fun, let alone have a sense of substitution. The higher the protagonist's ambition, the better. Otherwise, the map behind will be too big, and it will be difficult for you to write. In the early stage, the wretched and low-key character becomes stronger, and in the middle and later stages, the characters are strengthened, and the exciting plot is naturally inserted.

All dharmas are clear, it is not as good as one way to understand everything.

Will Xiao Li's flying knife be weaker than the Kung Fu from the Swordsman plane? If you have Xiao Li's skill of flying knives at the beginning, you can basically walk sideways in Swordsman.

This martial arts started from something, why don't you keep practicing that? Isn't Xiao Li's flying knife strong? You can lock the head at the beginning, lock the soul as you develop, and then directly cross time. Isn't space bad? Why do you still need to practice messy things?

Why not kill Linghu Chong and Hetian Boguang? One of these two is a real villain and the other is a fake villain. Moreover, the Yitian Sword contains the Nine Yin Manual and the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon.

I'm curious why Yue Lingshan helped the pig's trotters the first time she saw them. Lin Pingzhi felt guilty, but the pig's trotters were just a chance encounter. The second senior brother's quick wit in the forest scared Tong Baixiong away. It would make sense if it were a green forest peak. Although there is a threat, it still feels too far-fetched.

I don't feel comfortable reading the chapter names of this book.

It takes ten days and a half to restore one's internal strength. It's extremely poisonous.

Tai Xuan Jing, the martial arts practiced by Yuan Shisan, as well as Tian Can Gong, Demon Tian Can Gong, Ageless Changchun Kung, and many other interesting martial arts. You wouldn't think that this martial arts is very strong. It's just the nine yang and nine yin that are powerful. It's just that the nine yin and nine yang in gold are powerful.

Open a post. Sometimes there are many martial arts that I can't think of at the moment. Friends who have ideas can post them. It is better than Yi Jin Jing and Dugu Nine Swords. Earth level, heaven level, god level It is better to have a source and wait for introduction. Thank you!

He was able to kill Yu Canghai, but ended up going to apprentice with Yue Buqun? I'm really addicted to it, it's extremely poisonous

I can't tell 🤓

The writing is pretty good. Although there are some small flaws in the front, it gets better and better later on. It seems to be a great improvement. Keep it up.

Wang Yuyan

Qiao Feng, leader of the Beggar Clan

What about Ning Zhongze? Which chapter is dead?

It feels like the protagonist comes up with whatever he wants, and some places don't make sense.

Absolutely amazing, another eunuch book that just came out

Looks good

What is the significance of worshiping at Mount Huashan? ? ?