Douluo: the Martial Soul Ascends the Dragon Sword and Summons the Dragon God!

I have only read the first 40 chapters so far, and I feel that this one may be 60-70 thousand words long and it will be difficult to continue writing. The hook is too big, the articles are cool, but they are all hard to cool. There is no foreshadowing and progression in the relationship between the characters, all the settings are unreasonable, and it feels like the supporting characters are just NPCs appearing just for the sake of appearing.

A bunch of second designs... But not limited to Wuhun Palace. They know that whale gum can improve physical fitness. The equipment built by Lou Gao can burst out at speeds exceeding level ten. Wuhun Palace has equipment that can easily break through the Soul King's defense. The second designs are not what you wrote.

Do you think it is poisonous or not? Anyway, I have no intention of reading any more.

It's already been chapter 25, and I haven't even obtained the first soul ring yet. Good ink.

What a stupid thing, the Ice and Fire Eyes were all obtained by the protagonist, but as a result, there was no defense at all, and Tang San and the others were forced to run in and finish gathering the herbs. What a mentally retarded setting.

It was poisoned at the beginning. It was too poisonous. After just one awakening ceremony, I was made things difficult for everyone. And I had conflicts with people at the beginning. It can be seen that the author's subsequent plot and protagonist's character are all based on the same template process, which makes people uncomfortable to watch.

The more I read Douluo Shasan's novels, the more boring they become. No matter how many tricks the protagonist plays, Tang San can live until he becomes a god. Although it is understandable, I am already tired of aesthetics.

To be honest, since the martial spirit is set to be a sword, we should start from the "sword" itself and maximize the characteristics of the "sword". Instead of using the name "Sword", the "Sword" itself became a prop used to summon the "Dragon God". It would be better to directly set the "Dragon God" as a martial spirit.

Hahahahahaha, I haven't seen such ancient shit in a long time. It's so funny to me. The first few chapters made me unbearable. Get out of my reading list!

It's not interesting. It's this kind of plot at the beginning. It's probably not going to be that good in the end either. It slips away.

No, who taught you to add two spaces before each paragraph?

Not as good as the Digimon, Taichi, Soul Agumon, Awa, Soul Gabumon, Souna, Soul Bhikkhumon, Meimei, Soul Balurumon, Koushiro, Soul Beetlemon, A Zhang, Soul Gomamon, Awu, Soul Patamon, Jiaer, Soul Dilumon. Normal development, no big problems

I don't even need to watch the plot. I just don't want to watch this part.

1. Outside the site, more than twenty chapters are on the shelves 2. There are too many two settings, and a fight of whale glue is an aphrodisiac 3. Self-created soul skills, soul bone fusion skills, ice and fire tornado

It's a mess, no matter it's the writing, the plot, or the characters, I can't read it. If you look at the author, who is a junior high school student, I suggest you just read hard.

One water is half a month, right? Has the protagonist changed to Tang San during this half month?

It feels very strange. Logically speaking, people who have watched Dragon God are at least in their 20s. Overall, the writing looks like a mindless work, which gives me a feeling of immaturity.

The name is a little more sinister. Just call Du Xiaodu. When I was translating, I remembered this. Maybe I remembered it wrong. Secondly, the writing style is not good at all.

Just a lump. Fortunately, I didn't subscribe. Can't walk when I see a woman? There are so many chapters in one sentence, and I am amazed at every turn.

I guess I know why there are a million words. It's only ten chapters to awaken a martial spirit. I felt drowsy after reading it.

Are you having a problem with your AI writing? Each symbol has its own line break?

I dare not read your profile. Anyone who has seen it can tell me whether the four women in the profile are the heroines.

The subject matter is okay, but the author's writing level is not worthy of the subject matter.

Recommend a new Dou Yi book "Douluo Wuhun Essence, I am the Master". The protagonist Tang Shan studies and practices, and is a pseudo-academic master.

It's like a short play, with a high-IQ setting, but if your plot doesn't show high IQ, then you won't be disappointed. The main plot is broken, and there's no need to read the rest. A novel is not a short play.