Naruto: the Copy I Designed Allowed the Entire Ninja World to Break Through Its Defenses

The general idea was right at the beginning, but the essence of the behind-the-scenes flow was not clearly written at all. The essence of this subject is to use a game to write a group portrait copy, but the author really treats it as a game. Take the first dungeon as an example. The outline should be to bring people into the dungeon and reveal the tragic life experience of Uchiha Sasuke. From here on, the author starts to write crookedly. Normally, it should be through Sasuke's perspective, first revealing the tragic night of the genocide. By the way, Sasuke can also write about the loneliness of Sasuke living alone in the huge Uchiha clan, and then other people's attitudes towards Uchiha Sasuke's experience. Especially when other people just sympathize with Sasuke, you can start writing the reactions of Naruto and Sakura, who have the deepest bond with Sasuke in the original work. For example, unlike others, Naruto can instantly sympathize with Sasuke and begin to understand Sasuke. It turns out that Sasuke, who is usually a bitch, once put a smile on his face... It turns out that Sasuke is alone like himself... It turns out that Sasuke also faces other people's strange looks every day... As for Sakura, that's it. As written, Sakura's love for Sasuke was originally very superficial. Like other little girls, she simply liked Sasuke's handsomeness and cold personality. When she knew that Sasuke's coldness and strength were all caused by witnessing the death of his clan members, unlike others who sympathized with Sasuke, Sakura felt sorry for Sasuke from the bottom of her heart and wanted to comfort and redeem Sasuke. However, this kind of behavior only irritated Sasuke even more, and Sasuke spoke harshly to Sakura. Then the author also has problems with the fun and interesting points. The author is too game-oriented. In essence, readers want to see different characters in this subject matter and make different choices when faced with the same thing. For example, as Naruto at that time, how will he break the situation, and the subsequent chain changes, as well as the important characters in the dungeon, and the attitude changes facing Naruto's version of Sasuke... Finally, the author's game design is quite average, too straightforward, let's take the first dungeon as an example. Logically speaking, this is a super large decryption dungeon game. At first, everyone probably thought that the boss was Uchiha Itachi, and the condition for clearing the level was to prevent Uchiha from being exterminated. Then everyone discovered that no matter how they played, they would eventually be beaten to death by Uchiha Itachi. They began to realize that Uchiha Itachi's strength was so abnormal, and found that this way of clearing the level was basically impossible. Success, everyone gradually came to their senses, the copy was a reappearance of the past, how could Sasuke survive, and with more and more contact with Uchiha Itachi before the genocide, everyone began to find that Uchiha Itachi was completely different from the rumors, and began to think about why Itachi wanted to genocide in the first place. It's better to write about the situation of the Uchiha clan at that time, the conflict between the police department and the villagers, the fighting faction headed by the elders, the dove faction headed by Fugaku, and the most special faction composed of Shisui and Itachi, the conflict between the three parties , the positions and demands of the three parties, etc... This routine can also be copied in the village, such as how the civilian class viewed Uchiha at that time, how the noble family class in particular viewed Uchiha, how the higher-ups viewed it, how the Hokage viewed it, etc... These can all be used as clues and paved the way bit by bit The most important thing is that the really important factor is not the information at that time, but can be regarded as a special scene in the dungeon. The player triggers specific conditions and triggers a special plot, such as piercing the root, meeting Danzo, and seeing Shisui's left eye transplanted on Danzo. Then the player regains the eye and can enter the special dungeon where Shisui died. Similarly, by obtaining Shisui's right eye from Itachi, the dungeon of Shisui and Itachi's relationship can be unlocked. You can also get the relics of the Uchiha mirror, and you can know the reasons why Uchiha is targeted by high-level officials. If you get the relics of Uchiha Madara, you can unlock the plot of Uchiha Madara leaving the village... Naruto and Sasuke can even unlock the origin of the Uchiha clan, and the founding of Konoha...

There is no defense at all. The darkest Kirigakure Village is engaged in blood mist. Other ninja villages put human experiments on the table. The nature of the ninja world is dark. According to the introduction, if it is placed in other ninja villages, it can only be said that it is worthy of Konoha, but it is still too shameful.

Behind the scenes, the protagonist will end up less often. The protagonist's end will be pure mechanical deity. The plot is fully understood. As long as someone joins the game, the power will continue to increase. You can also change the copy at will. You are pure and invincible.

Not bad, but the main character is currently awkward. Or completely downplay the protagonist. Make a group image viewing body. How about strengthening the role of the protagonist, whether behind the scenes or in front of people? Currently, there is no motivation for the protagonist to become stronger. The feedback from the rewards is not strong either. I get a bunch of rewards, but there is no specific concept of how much stronger I have become. Or you can go completely behind the scenes and pretend to be a game NPC to guide players through the levels. You can even put some hidden information. For example, in the first instance of regular clearance, Konoha ordered Itachi to prevent Uchiha from launching a coup. If you hide it, you can reveal more information. Otherwise, it's the same as in Sword, where you end up fighting, then enter the high-level view, and start to use the swirling flow, but this way you have to suppress the protagonist's combat power, otherwise there is no need to deal with the ants. In short, the rhythm is very suitable so far, and there is no OOC. It just doesn't feel like it's spread out yet.

But after writing it, Kishimoto couldn't hold himself back. Naruto is the only author in so many years who clearly found that he had failed to write and had to find a way to make up for it.

Just something to break the defenses of the whole world? Can't be broken at all...

Isn't this just setting a trap for the ninja world? What's the point?

To be honest, it was originally supposed to be a small climax. Naruto in Sage Mode during this period is not the hottest and most handsome in the early stage. Just letting others operate can't achieve that effect. Not only the combat power, but also the height of Naruto's thinking at this period can convince Pain to save people.

For now, it is a running account of the original plot. If there are no rewards and no gameplay in the game in the book, it doesn't matter if I don't play it after all. But what readers need is the plot of your game, which is the highlight of this book. However, I only saw the original plot, without any breakthrough, and it is not even as good as the original plot. I hope there will be improvements in the future, otherwise it will be nothing to read.

The protagonist won't be like the movie viewer who is only responsible for opening game tools, right?

Obito is just a joke, is he resurrected if he appears in a fantasy? So appearing in a hundred illusions is equivalent to being resurrected a hundred times?

Did the author underestimate the spies in various ninja villages? Does Orochimaru need to be informed about what happened in Konoha? That's not a day or two. Information can be spread through psychic beasts. 😅

You can write a little script about wild history, so that people in the ninja world can see what wild history is, and wild history is history 😁

It's too childish to break your defense just by doing these nonsense. .

The idea is quite good, but the writing style is poor. The excellent evaluation was given too casually, making the work seem a bit random.

The subject matter is good, but the constant use of large ink and conspiracy theories to describe Black Konoha, Black III, Black Hinata is basically aesthetic fatigue for me. I really feel that it is unnecessary and the viewing experience is not good. I feel that the author should focus on the copy and the protagonist. Let's just say that there are obviously many things that can be described in the dungeon, such as the mission to defeat Konoha. You can directly attack Naruto's partner and pressure him to let the Nine-Tails explode away. Then Konoha will be in chaos. Of course, the premise is that you don't get killed. The battle of ninjas will be in the later stage. The most critical thing before the numerical value is inflated is intelligence. The author can describe that many ninja villages arrange tasks for weak ninjas to collect intelligence information, such as maps and defense configuration executors, instead of clearing the dungeon. These can reveal information and even the most critical strength, expertise and weaknesses of other ninjas. You can even write hidden plots. For example, if you choose to use Naruto to beat Hyuga Neji with a verbal attack, and after both are injured, you can see Hinata apologize to Neji and then thank Naruto and get a reward after entering the hospital. You can also use Naruto to defeat Gaara to get a hidden reward, or even choose to use Uchiha Sasuke to surrender to Orochimaru in advance to change the mission and get a reward. Obviously there is a lot more to be written in the copy, but the author's focus is on describing the black leaves. So why don't I read a novel with more powerful black leaves? Another shortcoming is that although I know that the author wants to improve the combat effectiveness of specific characters, the reward pool given by the protagonist in terms of dungeon rewards has nothing to do with the half cent of the dungeon. The dungeon for the Uchiha genocide is given to the Uzumaki bloodline, and the Konoha Collapse plan is given to the Corpse Bloodline. Then the author asked the protagonist not to be a ninja because of the third generation's order. It is really not necessary to go black for the sake of black. In the current situation where Konoha's unilateral information is leaked to other ninja villages, what is most needed is to quickly increase the overall strength to prevent it. Others start a group in Konoha. In this case, the author also asked the third generation to reduce the number of Genin graduates who received the dungeon reward to 12. I can only say that it is too outrageous. The author has a little imagination. You can completely write that the protagonist himself said that he is not a ninja, and the protagonist must be a victim.

The reward should be that the first pass can get all the rewards, and the subsequent pass can only get a little, unless you are lucky enough to draw something good, this will be more reasonable. The author doesn't seem to explain this. If the rewards for clearing the level are the same, everyone will know the strategy for clearing the level later, and everyone will have all the bloodstains and ninjutsu. Then ordinary villagers in Konoha can also participate, then really, mass production →_→

The plot develops too fast. In just a few words, the third copy is almost over. Many player guide dungeons can also play different people, so the core attraction should be the various reactions of these players after being exposed to various information, such as the second dungeon, Xiao Li's battle, Orochimaru's information, Gaara and Naruto's relationship, etc., And the individual views and preparations of the ninja world, etc. A lot of content is skipped directly, so what is the difference between an individual falling from the sky and telling the ninja world that Orochimaru will kill the third generation in the future, and then the entire ninja world believes it and acts like nothing happened? You gave the ninja community the opportunity to get information that only they could know, and you also gave them the opportunity to see Naruto's famous scenes, but you never really gave it to them. You just let them stop on the side of the road to see the results and nothing happened. Isn't this the same as not having a copy and not having a live broadcast? After what happened, who in the ninja world didn't know that Orochimaru killed the third generation and that there were strange monsters appearing? At the beginning, I wrote about using Sasuke's body and using Sasuke's fighting methods, but then I didn't write anything at the end. There was nothing about who learned something from the dungeon characters, or about how so many people had been exposed to different systems of combat methods and how they had improved themselves. Even the common ninjutsu that are rewarded in the dungeon are so-called game skills that can only be used out of thin air and cannot be understood or parsed. So why are there rewards for completing the level and can be redeemed? It is impossible to describe the changes in the ninja world after individuals receive various ninjas, especially when they are not given ninjutsu at all. I mentioned a few words earlier about who got the reward, and then turned around and went to get three copies and it still feels like I didn't get it. That's not for nothing.

Thinking about the original work, looking at everything, only Tsunade Obito... Was broken. Therefore, it is quite difficult to break through the defense of a ninja, but it is also quite simple. All you need to do is destroy all the most important things in his heart one by one in front of his eyes. You're just having fun telling other people's stories. After all, your teammates may not be able to change their minds.

Thanks to your last book, I have completed the achievement of fully pre-ordering the first book from Qidian (the first chapter on the shelf is Eunuch). Now I am jumping to subscribe to this book and can barely read it. You are also Eunuch, and I will not read your book in the future.

Could it be that the author went to purify himself?

There are so few updates and I have to take a leave of absence. I can't read it. I'll give it a try for half a year. I hope I'll still be interested in this book by then.

I feel that the biggest problem is that the frequency of dungeons is too fast. Several dungeons have been released before the protagonist has started to grow. Although several dungeons are famous scenes, it is weird for little Naruto to fight against the Akatsuki organization. It would be nice if there were more other dungeons. It doesn't have to be Naruto's dungeon. For example, let the ninja world play a game of chicken, as long as it can get benefits.

The author's writing style is okay. As for the comment area, the various "shortcomings" raised by different readers... I personally think that they are not shortcomings. There are many books that have the same "shortcomings" but have been well received. Personally, I think the real shortcoming is that the plot is not explosive enough, that's all. As long as the plot is explosive, as long as the plot is good-looking, no matter how many poisonous points there are, it will not affect the sales of the novel.

The subject matter is actually pretty good, but the logic of the writing is poor. I feel like the writing is too friendly. You will get gold coins after clearing the level for the first time. 200 Gold coins can be exchanged for the ninjutsu of "Reincarnation in the Earth" and "turning around in one's own life". Isn't this outrageous?

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