
We Agreed to Develop Xiaoxiaole, but What the Hell Is Going on in the Heavenly Palace?
说好开发消消乐,大闹天宫什么鬼
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The subject matter is good, it can be regarded as fast food.
You can't look at the details, you have to store your mind. The burrs are not polished, which affects the reading experience a bit.
I haven't started reading it yet, the word count is a bit short, so I'll give it a try first, but the introduction is quite funny, please keep writing well, author.
Does this book have anything to do with the game? It would be more reasonable for you to replace the game with a novel or movie. Passers-by are all shocked.
Xiaoxiaole?
There is one book in the modern area, one in the ancient area, and one in the mythology area. I wonder if there will be others later, and which one will make it to the end?
I wrote it at the beginning. The idea is very good, and I really want to see the follow-up. However, I personally feel that the writing is not strong enough. Many things are empty, and they are all supported by the jaws of passers-by. The players are all paper figures. They clicked on a few group portraits of people, but there was nothing heavy and colorful. They were all one-sentence descriptions of character and behavior. There is no serious fighting description, it is just dialogue all the way. The player's growth path, one sentence of full-level passage, equipment, level, skills, all are not described in detail, and there is no core idea. The Tiangang Earth Demon and the Dragon Palace magic weapon are written down as if they were not written at all. Everyone who is familiar with this routine should still remember that the sniper rifles, mechas, and compound bows in "Too Real" all have corresponding descriptions. For future development, such as dungeons, it is a game after all, and players are the protagonists. At present, everyone has gathered to negotiate with Tathagata. There is no exploration by players, and the map feels empty. The NPCs only have some dialogues, scenes, costumes and temperaments in the original text.
You already thought of bugs when you saw the beginning. Did you initially intend to create a black mythical version of the monkey? You are so open-minded, how will you be able to round things off later if you start a series? It was said earlier that all the Buddhas in the sky disappeared into thin air, but later they were trapped under the Wuzhi Mountain for five hundred years without even entering the Lingxiao Palace? And if it is a black myth version, there are bound to be many mythological stories that cannot be integrated into it. If you create that kind of dark and oppressive heaven, basically other stories except for the myths of Sun Wukong, Yang Jian, and Nezha that represent resistance will not be integrated into it, and the story will be very thin.
It's on the shelves. This one is not well kept. Earlier, Wukong went from Fangcun Mountain to the Hunshi Demon King and then to the Dragon Palace step by step to borrow treasures, draw a book of life and death, and steal the Peach Immortal Pill Players participated in every step. Everyone thought that Wukong walked to the opposite side of the Heaven step by step because the Bull Demon King suggested borrowing treasures, the players hooked the wrong soul, and Gang Leader Qiao suggested to Taishang Laojun that all kinds of coincidences led to the trouble in Heaven It not only highlights the charm of Wukong, but also highlights the freedom of the game world. Players can influence the direction of the entire world and the plot As a result, it was about to be released. Suddenly, Gang Leader Qiao revealed that everything was designed by designers. The plot will develop like this with or without their participation. This is the result Then he published the books Journey to the West and The Romance of the Gods I would like to ask the author, what do you think? It is good for the players to expand the world step by step and understand the magnificent mythical world, just like understanding how Wukong transformed from a stone monkey to the Monkey King bit by bit It is even better for players to become giants in the mythical world through various explorations and opportunities Or should I just publish a book Journey to the West and tell all players that the story is like this, you have to follow my plot and keep pretending. Just play a soy sauce role The level of Escape is too high. If there is the participation of players, the plot will still be exactly the same as the original one. Only the names of the people involved have been changed, which is too unflattering The beginning of the plot has the rhythm of becoming a god, but later it starts to put shackles on itself The above is purely personal advice, the author can write at his own pace.
Yes, although it is a popular theme recently, I have my own new ideas.
I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. I just hope it will be enough for now. But judging from the author's plan, it feels a bit difficult to surpass the World War II book. Come on.
First, focus on traveling to the west. Don't be like the guy next door who is giving you a hammer and a stick.
I remember, isn't this a highly realistic virtual game? Why do you still do film and television? Just make a version of the original character in the game and be done with it. Please ask a real person to act? Who can read it if the original version is available?
Ever since the one about World War II became popular, all kinds of video games and text-based movies have popped up. I don't understand, it's been 25 years. How come people still like movie movies?
This type of writing has a stinking problem. The plot of the game is good, but there are a lot of daily poisons.
Alas, the Heavenly Soldiers and Heavenly Generals are on the negotiating table when faced with little monsters that can only be infinitely resurrected. Super Shanghai only knows how to lock the progress.
So it's useless for you to write so many quotations from the biography of Wukong. When you originally wrote it, you just spliced it. If you haven't finished splicing it, forget it. After working on it for a long time, it's still the same old Journey to the West.
Instructions for reading this book
You don't have to read anything about reality. This does not affect the part of Journey to the West. The actual content is nothing more than common urban writing content, showing off and slapping people in the face + picking up girls. The old routines are nothing new, so just ignore them. When you see words like 'in reality', jump down until words like 'in the game' appear, which is the part of Journey to the West. In summary, only the journey to the west is interesting.
If you can't write realistic plots, can you write less?
Realistic writing is really rubbish. Can you write less? From the beginning to now, every time I see the real-life plot, I can't help but delete the book.
The few words passed by Wukong in the first few chapters are difficult to express
Inexplicably, I came up with a few awkward words from ancient second-story novels. Anyone who has read the back part can tell me if these words still appear in the back part.
Too fast
Games are made too fast, even if technology is advanced enough to generate all the required materials, dubbing, and code with one click. But the scene construction, the arrangement of flowers, plants and trees in famous mountains and rivers, the adaptation of character modeling, the action design of monster modeling, the action design of fighting, the lighting and cloud settings, can these be completed in less than a month?
For fast food, it is recommended to take a quick look at ten lines, which is fine. It is not recommended to read carefully, let alone listen to the book. If you listen, the plot will slow down and it will be easier to feel the flaws.
The World War II book is said to be a game, but in fact the core is war group portraits. It attracts the Anti-Japanese War type of people. There are not many such books. This one attracts fantasy and immortality. The threshold of people who read such books is very high.
Or
Are you two having a fight?
There is no need to mix them together to create a mythology. If you put Journey to the West, Fengshen, and folk mythology into one game, the logic will be full of loopholes. The number of gods in different myths is different. It is easy for a boss who was very good one second to be betrayed by Tiangang in the next story. Perhaps the character was a positive character in the previous plot, but becomes a villain in the next plot. To give a classic example, come to this section first, and then come to Fengshen Romance, or come to Fengshen first, and then come to this section↓ [After a while, the Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun and Shangqingling Bao Tianzun, Taiqing Daode Tianzun, Wu Qi Zhenjun, Wudou Xingjun, Three Officials and Four Saints, Jiuyao Zhenjun, Left Assistant and Right Bi, Heavenly King Nezha, Xuanxu Yiying is well-informed, facing the flags and flags, They all held pearls and rare treasures, longevity fruits and flowers, and bowed before the Buddha and said: "Thanks to the Tathagata's immeasurable magic power, we can subdue the monster monkeys. We are all here to thank the Great Heavenly Lord for hosting a banquet. How about asking the Tathagata to give this association a name?" The Tathagata received the entrustment from the gods and said: "To name it, we can hold an Antian Assembly." All the immortals and elders said in unison: "What a great Antian Assembly! What a great Antian Assembly!"]
The monkey is defeated in Journey to the West, and there is no solution (all the forces of the Provincial Three Purities + Heavenly Court + Buddhism + Earth Ancestor can't beat the monkey) To be honest, if the monkey can't beat Erlang Shen, what qualifications do you have to talk about causing trouble in the sky, and what qualifications do you have to be the Monkey King? I don't know why so many people think that Erlang Shen beat Sun Wukong. Sun Wukong can beat you with so many heavenly soldiers and generals, what? What about the Four Heavenly Kings, the Meishan Brothers, the Roaring Dog Erlang Shen, and the Supreme Laojun who is always throwing magic weapons. Are you telling me that Sun Wukong will lose to Erlang Shen? It must be 55 in two short periods of time, but if you keep beating Erlang Shen, you will lose. Sun Wukong vs. Furious Erlang Shen (the hymn says that Sun Wukong will win if the fight continues) Wukong vs. Erlang Shen's transformation (Er Lang Shen needs to put down his weapons) Wu Xin Lian Zhan Sun Wukong escapes vs. Er Lang Shen chases under the net of heaven and earth (Er Lang Shen cannot see through Sun Wukong's invisibility method and needs to ask for help from the King of Heaven) Sun Wukong vs. Er Lang Shen fights back to Huaguo Mountain (Er Lang Shen claims to have lost) With the support of brothers, the Six Saints panicked and came to fight in a group) Sun Wukong vs. Erlang Shen + Six Saints (there was no winner for a long time, and the Jade Emperor was all anxious) Sun Wukong vs. Erlang God + Six Saints + Laojun's sneak attack + Fine Dog's finishing blow (Sun Wukong is defeated) When we meet again later, Sun Wukong calls Erlang Shen the eldest brother, but Erlang Shen does not call Sun Wukong his sage brother in return, but only calls Sun Wukong the great sage with immeasurable magical power. [Doge] The level of force is consistent. From the number of rounds and results, no one can beat the other Changes, impossible to evaluate. As we all know, Counter takes the lead Moving speed, it seems that the monkey is stronger Physical ability, the monkey is almost infinite, Erlang Shen Unknown Defense: Monkey King Kong Iron Bone, Erlang Shen Unknown Based on the overall score, Monkey may be higher, but in terms of actual combat power, neither of them can defeat the other The two steel knives see the opportunity, and they go back and forth without any gaps. The Golden Cudgel is a treasure in the sea, it can change rapidly [can win]. ... Later Guanshiyin pursued Erlang Zhenjun with his sworn brothers. He was very changeable. [Kui Laojun] threw the gold steel and struck hard, but Erlang [Fang De] caught it. ———— Summary: The descriptions of weapons in the hymns of battle scenes in Journey to the West are all used to refer to the martial arts of the characters, for example: [The palladium is like a dragon stretching out its claws, and the stick is like a phoenix piercing a flower], [The wishful hook is as strong as scorpion poison, and the golden cudgel is as fierce as the top of a dragon], [This golden cudgel can be solved in a thousand ways; that square halberd is as magnificent as a hundred things] Do you want to say that these are just simple descriptions of weapons? Does the Golden Cudgel itself have many solutions? Of course not, weapons are used to represent the strength of characters. Therefore, when Erlang Shen fought against Sun Wukong, the description "The Golden Cudgel can win" also refers to Sun Wukong's ability to defeat Erlang Shen. [Transformation and flying] also describes the effect produced when wielding a weapon, for example: [a stick, black and long, flying with both hands], [the stick rises to scare gods and ghosts, and the ax and the knife fly in chaos]. Therefore, it means that Sun Wukong changes rapidly when he wields the golden cudgel, and can finally defeat Erlang Shen. And the book also emphasizes that without the help of Laojun, Erlang Shen + Meishan Six Saints and Seven Saints would not be able to defeat Sun Wukong at all. If Erlang Shen is really evenly matched with Sun Wukong, why can't Erlang Shen and the Six Saints of Meishan work together to defeat Sun Wukong? Look, you can't beat me. Don't tell me about capture. Capture is more difficult. Sun Wukong and Zhu Bajie defeated the Bull Demon King twice. Because the Bull Demon King ran fast, he could not capture it. However, Sun Wukong and Zhu Bajie actually defeated the Bull Demon King. And what about Erlang Shen + Meishan Six Saints? Seven against one can't defeat Sun Wukong, so he still wants to capture him? Dreaming! In the end, it was thanks to Laojun's sneak attack that Sun Wukong was defeated and captured. So, what qualifications does Erlang Shen have to compete with Sun Wukong? It is an obvious fact that Sun Wukong is more powerful than Erlang Shen. Only the descendants of Roaring Sky Dogs would brag about their masters without thinking!
I have rich experience. When I saw Journey to the West, I knew I wouldn't be able to write any more
I kind of don't understand. After the anchor has removed these broadcasts, is the game world still moving forward? Then are their anchor accounts archived or something? How to solve this?
What about Xiaoxiaole in the title of the book 🤔
Picture complaints!
The picture of "Mu Wanqing" that is the highlight of this book looks like a "nightclub heroine"! ! !
I have a suggestion. If you think it is useless, you can just ignore it.
I personally feel that the author's vision of the book is a bit too high. From the beginning to the present, it has been focused on familiar major events such as Journey to the West, Nezha, and Yang Jian. In fact, the author can regard these major events as the main line and important branch lines, and write more small branches in between, including Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio, Search for the Gods, and some well-known niche myths and legends. This way, it will have more space and attract more readers who are interested in mythological stories.
New book period, please read the data~
Well, as the title says, if you think this book is well written, please read it every day, and also ask for monthly votes, rewards, recommendations, haha, sorry for the trouble, thank you~
When writing this book, will the author include the plot of Living Buddha Jigong? After all, this is also one of the classics.