
Battle Through the Heavens: I'm Actually the Xiao Clan's Ancestor!
斗破:原来我竟是萧家老祖!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 279k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
126Chapters
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Too abstract
3,,, 3,… And generally, when a person lives to 60 years old, his personality becomes much calmer. After living for 30,000 years, the protagonist is actually as if he has lived as a teenager 😅 Let me put it in one sentence, author, have you lived past 60 years old? Not to mention 30,000 years... Fan fiction generally only needs to grasp the setting, be appropriately refreshing, and have good writing. I never expected that I still have to pass the plot. The author taught me a lesson
I have some questions for the author
I just want to ask about what happened thousands of years ago. The original work describes Xiao Yan and his family as having no record at all. Even the most important thing about them is that they were one of the eight ancient clans. The original work describes that the Xiao Clan's own record is that they may have been very powerful in the past, but they fell into despair. They have no idea how powerful they are, where the clan is, and who are the strong people in the past... Or they have been killed to the point that they don't know. Xiao Yan's father actually used only one name to accurately deduce that the protagonist is an ancestor from 30,000 years ago, and led the whole family to kneel down immediately. The people next to him also believed it. I want to ask is this reasonable? When I read the first three chapters, the setting and writing style seemed a bit like something written by a junior high school student...
Let's give a brief explanation first😊
Only Xiao Zhan knows that there is such a person in his ancestors. The reason is because there are things related to Xiao Chen that have been passed down from generation to generation, and the clan leaders have passed it on orally. Because when Su Qingxue took Xiao Chen away, people in the Xiao clan knew that she was far superior to Dou Emperor, so they believed that this was a great opportunity for the Xiao clan, so they paid special attention to her. As for the history of thousands of years ago, it is not that all has been forgotten. Only the clan leader knows it and it is passed down by word of mouth. The original works in the following chapters are all from Xiao Yan's perspective. He knows nothing because Xiao Zhan didn't tell him. Xiao Zhan knows the history of the Xiao clan and he knows a lot of things.
After reading a few chapters, I was a bit dissuaded at the beginning. Why has the protagonist not returned to Dou Qi Continent for 30,000 years? Doesn't the protagonist have no feelings at all, no relatives or parents? It is purely for the sake of setting. It is set that the protagonist will not go home for 30,000 years because of the setting that the protagonist will not be able to practice for 30,000 years. And when the protagonist's master discovers that the protagonist cannot practice, why not find out the reason why the protagonist is so special in Dou Qi Continent? With just a quick scan, you can discover the secret that the protagonist cannot practice. The protagonist's master knows that someone in the protagonist's family is alive, so he paid attention to the protagonist's family, so why didn't he discover the secret that the protagonist cannot practice. Don't tell me that the protagonist's master doesn't have this ability, then the strength of the strong men in this novel is too low.
What is this book's attitude towards the ancient tribes?
A bit interesting
The protagonist's bad taste
About the protagonist's teacher Su Qingxue😊
The world view is not limited to the Great Thousand World, but all worlds including the Great Thousand World, including Zhou Yuan's world. The world view is so big that time is nothing. Su Qingxue is very powerful and can travel to all worlds. Even she can't solve it. This also shows that the protagonist is special and powerful. In Su Qingxue's eyes, the Great Thousand World is just a small place.
About the beginning and setting of this book
I saw feedback from readers that my book plagiarized a novel in which the protagonist has nine accompanying beads. I did read that book, probably in 2023. I seemed to have read twenty or thirty chapters at that time, and didn't read further. After that, I read some stories one after another about the master abandoning his apprentice and the protagonist "Thirty Years in Hedong, Thirty Years in Hexi", and finally I thought about writing one myself. The setting and plot direction of this book have little to do with that book. It's just that the protagonist's life experience follows this relatively classic template. The starting point of everything is to fight against the Sky and the Great Overlord. I just want to create a suitable identity to explore the Dou Qi Continent, the Great World and the wider world. The realm outside the world has been thought of for a long time, and the character settings are also ready. It will not take up a lot of space, and will be interspersed with foreshadowing in the early stage. However, I still thank the two elder brothers for their feedback ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა
Regarding Xiao Chen's cultivation and combat prowess
First of all, let me clarify that the 30,000-year-old elixir did not actually work. Xiao Chen's breakthrough to the one-star Dou Shi was by borrowing the Dou Qi he absorbed, and due to physical limitations, only part of the Dou Qi absorbed was used to improve his cultivation. Even so, he used all his strength to kill the Dou Wang. When the black and white beads were gathered together, it was the time to truly explode.
Today's chapter is a blast!
Xiao Chen is so handsome for the first time!