Fairy-Tale Magic at Hogwarts

I feel that the setting of Avalon and the existence of twelve magics in both worlds have somewhat lowered the B level. Originally, the dream world, or the fairy tale world at the beginning, I think is on the same level as the Hogwarts world or even stronger. After the dream world and waking world are set, all the fairy tale worlds combined are on the same level as the original Harry Potter world. Then after it became Avalon, it suddenly became low again and limited itself to the UK. From the multiverse to the single world to a sacred place in British mythology. And the fact that the twelve magics are present in both worlds actually lowers the b-level of both parties. The characters in the original work have special magic to reach this level of emotion, and the special magic plus the original genius in the original work push people to this level of strength. And it's a little less exciting. Originally, the protagonist was a unique heir of multiple twelve magics. However, in reality, the magic of the dragon is not just bad, but it is also a practice. Just ask the teacher. Moreover, there is a high probability that the Death Magic is in the hands of Voldemort, and there is a high probability that he will receive a wave of reinforcements, but Lao Deng also has magic and you may not be able to strengthen him.

There are too many articles about heroines Hermione and Luna.

It was very interesting at the beginning, but after Avalon + 13 Magic + Council came out, the interest level decreased. You can still watch it, but the feeling is not that amazing.

The setting is great, and the collision between the fairy tale world and the Harry Potter world is also a great point. But the reading feeling is not very good, which may be due to the author's writing habits. The overall reading feels like a person is rambling, it is very messy, and it is difficult to grasp the point that I want to express. In short, it has a very fragmented feeling. The reading is not very smooth, making it difficult to grasp the context of the story.

As the protagonist becomes stronger, the fairy tale feeling becomes less and less. Can we focus less on the pursuit of power and write more about the collision of fairy tales and magic? The dreamy feeling has not been obvious since the Halloween story.

I don't know if it's just me, but I always feel that the author's protagonists and fairy tales are not integrated with the main storyline of HP. I always feel that there is a sense of contradiction. It is a bit awkward to open such a plug-in and follow the main line of HP savior from the first grade. Referring to the words of Dumbledore and the Savior of the Descendants of Merlin, I feel that the latter is more harmonious.

I think it's okay to have a female protagonist fall in love, but at least don't do it in the first grade, it's too inconsistent. Just like some entertainment industry articles, the male and female protagonists are as pure as jade, as if they have never taken a biology class or watched a movie since childhood 😅. It's the same for Hogwarts fans. Falling in love in the lower grades is like playing house, and they haven't even grown hair yet.

A certain wizard's parents: If you are crying, if you are crying you will be caught by those 'Muggles' and burned on the 'burning rack'.

I feel that the original magic that the author gave to the protagonist may have this tendency. While he wanted to write an original protagonist, he was also afraid of losing control of the plot, so he created a magic that modifies reality and predicts the future. Then he had to appear to analyze it but actually elaborate on the plot. It may make the plot lose its twists and expectations. A future without twists and turns is very boring. Then add the explanations that sometimes ramble on. . .

The writing is great, and I have a suggestion that I hope you can consider. Hermione describes so much, and the interaction with the protagonist is also great. Since so much pen and ink has been spent on describing it, how about just positioning her as the heroine?