Card Card Cultivation, from a Casual Cultivator to a Taoist King of Ten Thousand Methods

Don't read it, everyone. Goldfinger has almost no chance to exert its power. This book is destined to be a tragedy and is meaningless. This kind of Goldfinger only happens once every three years and gives the protagonist so many hardships. It is destined to be unsightly. Let's go!

The setting is interesting, but the plot is quite cliche and boring, and the sense of gain from the fun points is not enough. It takes so much effort to practice Qi from level 3 to level 6. It could have been a bit of a show, but it has to be so cliche.

I thought it would be such an adventure after I split half of it. It took me a long time to raise the Qi Refining Stage by two levels. What a garbage card.

It doesn't look good and doesn't feel good at all

Did you just fill in the numbers? As expected of a game developer, it is really difficult to level up only 3 levels in half. Sanlinggen has no shortage of resources and cannot break through the late stage of Qi training for three years. It also depends on the state of mind to loosen the bottleneck. How will you stack up if you become a genius in the future? I'm afraid that when a genius reaches the golden elixir realm, he will have to build a spiritual body and a Taoist body. According to your data, it's not that a single spiritual root can't even build a foundation. I only read Chapter 15 because I couldn't stand it anymore.

The half-part setting at the beginning is really bad. The worst thing is that it hasn't been set yet, and people are confused. The fairy appearance turns out to be Qi training, maybe to suppress the level. Then I set the card character's cultivation level to be unable to cross a large level, so I just slapped the head and set it casually.

Average. I think there are three main problems. Firstly, the character creation of the protagonist failed. He has no distinctive characteristics. Xu Qi'an is a flower-arranging and jade-producing person, the dictatorial Eternal Desolate Heavenly Emperor, and the cautious and suspicious Han Tianzun. The protagonist of this book is unremarkable and unattractive. Readers; The second is that the setting of the golden finger has flaws and is too random. Just think about it and come up with it. The author should specify a good framework for the golden finger of the card, such as training type, skill type, and combat type. Going deeper, the training type is divided into comprehension, spirit, and mana. Cultivation, etc. Are partial to blessing categories, direct promotion categories, etc., And then set the probability of card appearance at each level according to different cultivation levels, white, green, blue, purple and gold, and even combine low levels into high levels Third, the golden finger is not well integrated with the plot. It can be set to automatically generate cards through various behaviors in reality, such as reading all kinds of books in one day to get white comprehension cards, going through a battle to get combat experience cards, practicing alchemy to get alchemist proficiency cards, breaking through realms and experiencing major events to get card drawing opportunities. Writing this way will be more interesting, less boring, and have more room for development. The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. This book is okay and the author is good. I hope the author writes better and better.

The first two chapters are well written. Seeing the appearance of Xianzi in Chapter 4, eh? ? Then Chapters 6, 78 were about other people's affairs, and the protagonist didn't appear at all. After Chapter 10, I skipped a beat. It is obvious that the author did not plan well and did not describe it well.

First of all, the title of your book is already screening readers. If you directly go to the Qi Training Peak, Foundation Building, or Golden Elixir for the first two cards, you can understand it. If you don't understand, you can upgrade two levels of Qi Training with half the cultivation level. Those who can read your book are all here for Shuangwen. With this kind of beginning, no one will watch it. You should pounce.

The logical relationships in the story are well written, and the excitement is also on point. After all, the most difficult thing about a novel is to justify it, and the author writes it in great detail. After reading other comments, they said that it is not enough for fun, so I can't give you the Holy Body of Laoshizi at the beginning. For the time being, his background is that he is considered a strong person in the late stage of Qi training. From this point of view, the cool points are already in place. Some people say that the plug-in once every three years is too long. In the book, the life expectancy is 300 years in the later stage of Qi training and 800 years in the foundation building. It should be said that the plug-in is completely sufficient. Overall it's good

This is not a cool article, it's too procrastinating, I still need to practice

The plot is so poorly written, with a hammer in one thing and a stick in the other, and some inexplicably written things that are semi-inappropriate.

In fact, the writing is much better than the average author, and it gets better and better in the future👀👀

It's already 120 chapters and it's not on the shelves yet

The beginning was not well written and I was a little confused. But it got better later 🙂 I feel that the more I write, the more proficient I become, and the more I write, the better. Come on, author, please update quickly.

It took more than 300 chapters to reach the later stage of foundation building. In the later stage, Golden Finger spends most of his time in Shenyin and cannot dig holes.

After all, he might as well be next door, Hex. He writes cards to cultivate immortality. He thought he was using the various characteristics of the cards to play tricks. However, after he got divorced and divided his cultivation level at the beginning, he started to draw talismans again and went back to the old path of cultivating immortality with proficiency.

Goldfinger is good, but the plot is not good