Traveling and Lurking, I Am Really Not Mount Emei

First Secretary Hong, now Ma Kui, will someone write another book about traveling through Luqiao Mountain, and then Li Ya, another one about the webmaster?

Isn't the logic wrong? Ma Kui and Wu Jingzhong have no teacher-student relationship, and they are not Wu Jingzhong's people. How dare Wu Jingzhong accept Ma Kui's things?

There's something wrong with Ma Kui's dick, why are you traveling through him?

1. Why did you choose Ma Kui as the male protagonist? Wasn't he abolished? The starting timeline is before the assassination of Lu Zongfang, and the male protagonist has never been tortured. And the original drama did not clearly show that Ma Kui was inhumane. The only sentence was Zhou Gendi's sentence [Old Ma is not in good health]. Concerning this point, all fanfics are basically second-generation processing. Whether it really doesn't work depends on how the author writes it. 2. Comment question Currently there is no comment threshold, everyone can speak freely. There are even comments in the comment area such as [Maybe the author has a common language with him] and [Being the first eunuch in New China]. Whether they are ridiculing or have other ideas, they have not been deleted. (Some words involving sensitive words should have been deleted by the system, and the author has not touched them) Reiterate: I have never used a trumpet to speak, and I have never spoken to anyone in the comment area! ! ! Everyone is free to discuss the plot. However, there are some negative reviews, saying that the character of the book is wrong, the intention is wrong, and your book is too biased and unreadable. Especially some nonsensical negative reviews, or direct Shennong poison. There was a negative review before, and I debated for two days whether to delete it. But on the day I deleted it, I immediately stopped deleting it... So if you see comments like the above, you will definitely delete them. The author also needs to eat, and no one can resist generating electricity for love for free. After working so hard on typing, other readers clicked in and were dissuaded by these negative reviews before even taking a look at the book. This is the biggest headache for all authors. Many experts in the comment area also have reasonable opinions on teaching people how to write books, or they criticize them for no reason. I can only say that it is difficult to agree with others. But street writers can't compete with great masters! It doesn't matter if the master doesn't care, but the readership of the small author is so small, and he was even persuaded to quit... The review threshold will be opened in the later stage of the publication, and those who read seriously will also admit the negative reviews. New writers do have shortcomings. But the bad reviews that come out during the free period are really terrible, and they are bleeding. Just a bad review, and the author will update it in vain for a few days. Up to now, the Communist Party of China has only deleted three or two articles, because there are not many comments in the first place... What is written is for people to read. Not a glass-hearted person, accept normal comments from everyone, no matter good or bad. That's about it, thank you for your support, and welcome your criticisms and corrections. The code is gone, try to put it on the shelves and it will be updated for two days~

I just wanted to watch these 100 Mrs. Ma fall into the trap, and it made me feel lonely.

I've been following Secretary Hong's book for a long time, it's really well written! I accidentally found this book and kept it.

In fact, what I am most interested in is who wrote the time-traveling book Xie Ruolin, that would probably be too interesting

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces.

Although the Kuomintang was defeated in Taiwan, they are still very powerful in Hong Kong. Why does Ma Kui think that he can sit back and relax after going to Hong Kong?

I find it disgusting to read novels. Suddenly, multiple new names appear in one chapter (perhaps the characters have high official positions), but they become useless after a few chapters. If you must introduce a new character, you don't have to arrange a name, just use appearance, occupation, and clothing. Does not interfere with the reader's cognitive load and sense of substitution, and also interrupts reading fluency. . When I read the novel, I still have to think about who this guy is and what he is doing here. . Then it was hard to understand. Within a few chapters (or even just one) the character disappeared again, and the emotions we invested were in vain. It was very annoying.

Ma Kui was arrested while performing a mission in the Japanese-Puppet Zone before. He never resisted torture and kept a lot of secrets. Yu Zecheng was the recorder. If this incident was revealed, ten Ma Kui should have been shot.

After subscribing to more than 200 chapters, I no longer have the desire to read it. The domestic plot feels too delayed. When will it be developed in Hong Kong and Southeast Asia? Open new map

I subscribed to more than half of them, and finally couldn't stand it anymore. I feel that the biggest problem with your book is that the underground party is forced to die. The reason why the Communist Party is great lies in the underground party's fearless spirit whether it was the Anti-Japanese War or the Liberation War. Scenes of heroic sacrifice often resonate the most with people. Especially the section on the Tianjin Police Station, where in order to ensure the survival of those communists, they forcibly dehumanize the people around them, the description is inconsistent. Those two people knew that they had been exposed, whether they escaped by force or committed suicide, I can understand it, but they didn't make any reaction, and nothing happened in the end. I can accept the part about the police chief, but I really can't accept the latter part. If I were the police chief, I would forcibly protect them and then arrange for them to go on missions to passively serve the party and the country.

Agent, or agent of the League of Losers, still thinking about retirement? I'm afraid that I won't be regarded as a step up to the next level.

The plot idea is quite good, but there are some loopholes due to lack of experience and lack of careful research on the information.

Can Ma Kui be cleared in the end? This guy can become an operations captain, and he has a lot of lawsuits involving human lives!

I don't recommend the author to write about finance, it's very embarrassing

I'm good, I've removed it from the bookshelf, you come up with another extra chapter, okay, you're in trouble again 🤫

As for the new book, it's time to publish it to Liu Fa!

From the time it is released to the time it is completed, it often takes 2-3 days to read it after it is updated. I wonder if I have contributed to the author's first and follow-up orders. The book is a good book, and the crispness with which the author ends the last ten chapters shows that he pays attention to quality. Otherwise, the plot development in the last few chapters could be delayed for dozens of chapters, but it would be boring to read. The mountains are high and the rivers are long. See you all in the next book! The author can take a longer time to conceive a new book next time. The first few carefully crafted stories are really exciting, and the later ones are also good but ultimately not interesting 😆

You Weijin In those years, I was probably a waste or cannon fodder. Most of them were wiped out in the first chapter.

The writing is okay, but it feels watery