Do You Know My Little Uncle?

Emmm It's a bit too hellish for the protagonist to fall in love with the seven or eight year old Minglan. Be careful, the book is gone. I remember that in ancient times, you have to be sixteen to write about love, otherwise you will still be blocked.

A strange novel, obeying everything, submissive, and basically unchanged. If there is any change, it is similar to changing the morning bowel movement to the afternoon bowel movement, which is insignificant.

Qi Heng actually has a hard time controlling his own life. Although his father has a high title but no real power, and he has a strong mother in the family, I think Minglan is difficult to handle. And Qi Heng, if you talk about talent, learning, ability and personality, he is actually very similar to Jia Baoyu, but Minglan is not Lin Daiyu. She is a young and forbearing person who bears the blood feud of her mother. Force, I think the possibility of getting together is too low. After choosing Qi Heng as the protagonist, you are outstanding in literary talent and noble, but the big heads of the court still don't think that you have the same interests as them, let alone the power to control the military. The identity of the son of the Duke of Qi and the princess is so sensitive. How can the emperor control a lot of military power? So if Wen can't become Wu, how can he protect Minglan? , I think there is a problem with the casting. Your choice of Minglan's blind date, Mr. He, will never be better than this one.

Qi Heng marries Minglan? This kind of operation can only appear in TV dramas and YY novels!

The author has formed a path dependence. He doesn't like anyone except Minglan, and he is still annoyed. I don't know what he is annoyed about. I think about falling in love with Minglan every day, but I just don't act and insist on following the plot in the book 😥

The writing is okay, but it doesn't feel too exciting. It also chases the heroine, which doesn't suit me. Looking forward to the next one!

The more I watched, the more speechless I became. Too bad.

Did you know that most fanfics have not made it clear that it was really difficult for men to participate in the plot (in the backyard) in ancient times? Even the emperor could only have indirect influence on the harem, let alone ordinary people.

This guy's last book had 6.66 Million words, and only 3 people read it. This one is almost the same as yours, and only has 500 collections. 18 Chapters of monthly tickets, 4 follow-up reads Others can read millions of words in a single machine.

It seems okay from the beginning. The protagonist is young and has no choice but to be restrained by his strong mother. Although this is reasonable, it still makes people feel a little frustrated. I don't know how I will deal with it in the future. If the protagonist is still so aggrieved when he gets older, it will be a bit ugly. With such a strong character like the princess, as long as the protagonist is not weak, there will definitely be disputes in the future. I am not trying to make the protagonist regard her as an enemy, but the protagonist must take back control. A weak protagonist will definitely not be likeable.

Do you know that I am in charge of the world? I wrote later than you, with fewer words than you, and my grades are much better than you. Why don't you reflect on it?

You have 500,000 words, 3,000 collections, and 200 monthly votes. The response from the book review section is not positive He is a new author with 230,000 words, 10,000 collections, and 3,200 monthly votes. The response from the book review section is positive Compared with the results, aren't you ashamed? This is the difference between a mediocre person and a talented person. You are not suitable for writing novels

The feeling of déjà vu for the male protagonist in the female video is just that there is less writing about the female character.

I want to see rivers of blood🤓

The writing is becoming more and more general, and almost no one reads it. If the author is not good enough, cut it out and replace it with a new book.

Delete the comments. To be honest, I really don't recommend reading them. They are all written by YY,

Are you a eunuch? No update for two days

When he was only 10 years old, he wanted to invent pinyin to help the prince read. I was afraid of being too ostentatious, so I brought a group of people to do it. . . All kinds of embarrassing symptoms occurred.

The supporting role has more roles than the protagonist. If you don't show off, who will take the role and write the novel into a history book? You are really a talent. It is not readable at all. You are afraid that you have forgotten the meaning of the novel. Everything revolves around the protagonist. According to this law, Zhao You is a tool and has more roles than the protagonist.

I was speechless in the first part. When writing history, do you need to catch up on some common sense in advance? Will the queen be deposed if she cannot give birth to an heir? Lord, not to mention that the queen was basically chosen by the late emperor. Her dethronement will affect the country. Your emperor will be sprayed to death if he just opens his mouth. Why do you think the emperor wanted three palaces and six courtyards? Just adopt it directly to the queen. In addition to giving birth to children, the mother of the country also has great political significance.

I've read a lot of doujinshi novels recently, and this one is very average. The writing of the prince is okay, but the character creation is too poor and stiff. In the later stage, I completely rely on the prince. It might be better to give some reasons why the prince is not dead in the early stage. For a normal time traveler, it's hard to like Minglan as much as Qi Heng. I don't deny its excellence, but this is a male video. You can write about love, but it's hard to do it without much writing, and Princess Pingning is difficult to handle. This line is considered a failure. The salt tax investigation is good. The original work is not expanded on, but the original writing is okay. Among the Zhifu fanfics I read recently, there was one that started out as a poor peasant, orphaned and widowed, and then went to school. There was basically no interaction with the characters in the early stage, but I was able to read it because it created a sense of expectation. There is also a book about Sun Zhigao who traveled through the same period. He was spotted by a small landlord because of his talent, and then married the landlord's youngest daughter. An original character. Can make people laugh. Don't ask for masterpieces, but ask for no shit

The emotional line passes through the character of Qi Heng. The most attractive point is definitely Qi Heng Minglan's CP. As a result, you are studying in the Sheng family, and there is no detailed description of your relationship with Minglan. You only write broad words like "I will tease Minglan on the road." The rise of cultural exchanges must be slow. In order to spread culture and ideas, how many people did Confucius teach, how many places he traveled, how many people he communicated and collided with, and how many years of inheritance and development it took before he could be accepted. It does not mean that correct things will be accepted immediately. Cultural acceptance also takes many years of fermentation and is slowly accepted. It does not mean that if you invent it, everyone will worship it and recognize it all at once. Pinyin is very poisonous