Detective Conan: The Comments Say I'm Comic Relief

The writing is good, but due to some interludes, switching of main perspectives, flashbacks, and even occasionally breaking the fourth wall, some of the content is a bit unclear. If possible, it is best to explain the time. Don't pursue a sense of literature and art too much.

Have you traveled through Conan? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The writing is quite good. The red restoration after the beginning made the perspective change a bit abrupt, and the overall look and feel is rough. But the writing gets better and better later on, and the multi-perspective part is also quite readable. Come on.

A little recommendation. Xiao Ai is a single female protagonist, the emotional drama is very delicate, and the character of the heroine and male protagonist is also very well controlled. It can be said that it almost perfectly restores the image of Xiao Ai and Miyano Shiho in my mind. Some of the author's foreshadowings are pretty good, and some of the plots are quite imaginative, having the feeling of early Conan. There is no excessive use of supporting characters to add drama to the protagonist. Each character has its own shining point and highlight moment. The portrayal of the protagonist is also quite good. He prefers the mysterious British gentleman + the rational researcher, creating a very reliable image of Black Butler. In short, I recommend this book. The above only represents my personal views. If you have different views, please feel free to post them for discussion, but please don't curse, thank you.

The reading experience is not good. Except for the occasional statement problem. Many plots are very abrupt. Character transitions and plot twists are rather blunt. It feels like it would be better to press the button at the beginning and start writing backwards in the timeline where the protagonist is.

I have read about a dozen chapters and I feel it is okay. I hope you will give the author a little more patience and read on. The type of this book is actually a variation of timeline salvation stories, such as "I Kidnapped the Timeline" and "Genius Club". It is not complicated in itself, but there may be several reasons why people feel that it is difficult to read. First of all, there are not many people writing on this subject in Conan fan fiction, and many readers have not gotten used to it. Secondly, the difference between this book and other salvation novels is that the jumping timeline is too short, all the people encountered are the same people and things, and there is no obvious sign to distinguish the timeline, which increases the difficulty of the author's processing. Finally, the author's own level has not reached the level of perfectly handling the relevant plot. He can only mark the jump process of the timeline at specific locations, which leads to a decrease in the immersion of the article itself. I have a few suggestions for your reference in this regard. 1. There is no need to mark the continuous content that does not jump in the timeline, which will aggravate the sense of fragmentation. You can use the title to prompt it. 2. Strictly control the direct recall content to the original timeline and reduce the number of interjections. The interstitial content can be presented separately in chapters. The content related to the comic line can be summarized through barrages and forums. 3. Add iconic descriptions when the timeline jumps, for example. For example, in general salvation stories, sleep and death are used as jump marks respectively. You can also complete it by talking to the system. 4. The last thing to note is that the atmosphere of the whole book does not need to be too serious. Write more love content. The existence of an organization that is leaking from all sides is a miracle of human management. To eliminate it, the red team sits down to have a meeting. You are not required to save the world, right? 🙂

Is this book a mindless attack on Conan and a grab for credit? Please ask Shen Nong

(Let me tell you something. When I wrote it, I consciously recast it with a logical structure, but you may not be able to realize it immediately after reading it. It is a "tellable" easter egg foreshadowing.) In Volume 1 - Chapter 25, The Galloping Hamlet. When Shiho saw the car, his first reaction was: "Is this a Hamley?" But in fact, this car is called a Harley. Hamley wasn't the car's real name. The reason why I write this is because in Volume 1 - Chapter 27, the male protagonist said it when he took Shiho to ride a bicycle. "This car is called Harley, but I like to call him Hamley." Extended meaning The resistance to fate in Hamlet is also a foreshadowing of the road to freedom👻. In Volume 1 - Chapter 32, in the longing under the mask. Ayumi and the others were very worried about Haibara Ai. After the shock, Conan said, let's go see Masked Superman, and Haibara will pay for the treat. This echoes the beginning of Chapter 18 of Volume 1 - the reunion with the black organization. Conan took off his glasses and handed them to Haibara and said, "You know, as long as you wear these glasses, your identity will never be exposed." "Superman has also used them to deceive many people." The one responding here is the Masked Superman behind. The extended meaning of Mask is that Haibara Ai and Edogawa Conan are two people who do not actually exist. We can talk about the latter later.

What to do? I don't want to read this book as soon as I read it, it's so brain-burning! 😥😥😥

It's only 53 chapters. I'm starting to stock up. When will there be 3,000 chapters? Call me 😴