Conan: the Barrage Said I Was Comic Cannon Fodder

The writing is good, but due to some interludes, switching of main perspectives, flashbacks, and even occasionally breaking the fourth wall, some of the content is a bit unclear. If possible, it is best to explain the time. Don't pursue a sense of literature and art too much.

Have you traveled through Conan? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The writing is quite good. The red restoration after the beginning made the perspective change a bit abrupt, and the overall look and feel is rough. But the writing gets better and better later on, and the multi-perspective part is also quite readable. Come on.

The reading experience is not good. Except for the occasional statement problem. Many plots are very abrupt. Character transitions and plot twists are rather blunt. It feels like it would be better to press the button at the beginning and start writing backwards in the timeline where the protagonist is.

A little recommendation. Xiao Ai is a single female protagonist, the emotional drama is very delicate, and the character of the heroine and male protagonist is also very well controlled. It can be said that it almost perfectly restores the image of Xiao Ai and Miyano Shiho in my mind. Some of the author's foreshadowings are pretty good, and some of the plots are quite imaginative, having the feeling of early Conan. There is no excessive use of supporting characters to add drama to the protagonist. Each character has its own shining point and highlight moment. The portrayal of the protagonist is also quite good. He prefers the mysterious British gentleman + the rational researcher, creating a very reliable image of Black Butler. In short, I recommend this book. The above only represents my personal views. If you have different views, please feel free to post them for discussion, but please don't curse, thank you.

(Let me tell you something. When I wrote it, I consciously recast it with a logical structure, but you may not be able to realize it immediately after reading it. It is a "tellable" easter egg foreshadowing.) In Volume 1 - Chapter 25, The Galloping Hamlet. When Shiho saw the car, his first reaction was: "Is this a Hamley?" But in fact, this car is called a Harley. Hamley wasn't the car's real name. The reason why I write this is because in Volume 1 - Chapter 27, the male protagonist said it when he took Shiho to ride a bicycle. "This car is called Harley, but I like to call him Hamley." Extended meaning The resistance to fate in Hamlet is also a foreshadowing of the road to freedom👻. In Volume 1 - Chapter 32, in the longing under the mask. Ayumi and the others were very worried about Haibara Ai. After the shock, Conan said, let's go see Masked Superman, and Haibara will pay for the treat. This echoes the beginning of Chapter 18 of Volume 1 - the reunion with the black organization. Conan took off his glasses and handed them to Haibara and said, "You know, as long as you wear these glasses, your identity will never be exposed." "Superman has also used them to deceive many people." The one responding here is the Masked Superman behind. The extended meaning of Mask is that Haibara Ai and Edogawa Conan are two people who do not actually exist. We can talk about the latter later.

I have read about a dozen chapters and I feel it is okay. I hope you will give the author a little more patience and read on. The type of this book is actually a variation of timeline salvation stories, such as "I Kidnapped the Timeline" and "Genius Club". It is not complicated in itself, but there may be several reasons why people feel that it is difficult to read. First of all, there are not many people writing on this subject in Conan fan fiction, and many readers have not gotten used to it. Secondly, the difference between this book and other salvation novels is that the jumping timeline is too short, all the people encountered are the same people and things, and there is no obvious sign to distinguish the timeline, which increases the difficulty of the author's processing. Finally, the author's own level has not reached the level of perfectly handling the relevant plot. He can only mark the jump process of the timeline at specific locations, which leads to a decrease in the immersion of the article itself. I have a few suggestions for your reference in this regard. 1. There is no need to mark the continuous content that does not jump in the timeline, which will aggravate the sense of fragmentation. You can use the title to prompt it. 2. Strictly control the direct recall content to the original timeline and reduce the number of interjections. The interstitial content can be presented separately in chapters. The content related to the comic line can be summarized through barrages and forums. 3. Add iconic descriptions when the timeline jumps, for example. For example, in general salvation stories, sleep and death are used as jump marks respectively. You can also complete it by talking to the system. 4. The last thing to note is that the atmosphere of the whole book does not need to be too serious. Write more love content. The existence of an organization that is leaking from all sides is a miracle of human management. To eliminate it, the red team sits down to have a meeting. You are not required to save the world, right? 🙂

Is this book a mindless attack on Conan and a grab for credit? Please ask Shen Nong

What to do? I don't want to read this book as soon as I read it, it's so brain-burning! 😥😥😥

First of all, the author is a complete newcomer. I cannot write this until now without the support of readers, although my readers are quite aloof, haha. But I know that's not the case, everyone has their own way. I haven't been in a good state lately, and I just woke up in great spirits. First of all, I would like to thank my readers. Habri812189. At the very beginning of writing this book, my thoughts were probably > my narrative. I wasn't very good at telling stories at that time. Then he told me that he thought the idea was good, but he might not be good at telling stories. It's hard to sign. I asked what kind of question it was, and then I also got suggestions on perspective and rhythm. He said that this chapter of Red Restoration Order should be at least 15 chapters long. So, the article about Juehai that I am writing now is Chapter 14, and tomorrow's Chapter 15 will be his final chapter. I think good advice is one that can travel through time and hit the author's eyebrows. I will read the suggestions you give me whenever I can. My learning and thinking also need a process. Laughing, why not let the bullets fly for a while? Then the second reader, Ling Mo, mourned with crane. When I reached 30,000 words in this book, I asked the editor if I wanted to continue writing it? The editor also gave me very good suggestions, but as a fan, you need to look at the data and follow up. After I signed the contract, I looked at the data and found that it was around the time I signed the contract. This reader of mine went to other book friends to benefit from this work. Perhaps, without his Amway, I might not be able to write at this time or see you all. The third reader is Guitong12138. He has been helping me find a lot of typos since very early on. Gives me the feeling of not being a stand-alone player. It feels pretty good, at least you feel that you are not writing alone. I think many people have read this book by now. There may be some readers looking forward to it. Everyone has a different way of expressing themselves, so I would like to thank you for this. I may not be able to achieve the reply aspect or the semantics, or my understanding at the time may not be enough. There may be some rudeness. But, good suggestions, ideas. Please let the bullets fly for a while. Then for the reasoning part, I may not write too much reasoning in the future. The reasoning in this part of Juehai is a mandatory requirement for this volume. He is not reasoning for the sake of reasoning. The real thing has not been told to everyone yet. By the time this volume is finished, it will be almost done. The above, I wish everyone a good dream. --22:54 on April 26, 2025

It's only 53 chapters. I'm starting to stock up. When will there be 3,000 chapters? Call me 😴

A good-looking and thoughtful Conan fan! ! The writing is so detailed!

Written with multiple timelines together (a chapter may change back and forth to different perspectives of different timelines, or even suddenly flash back to memories) Advantages: High readability. Disadvantages: The perspectives interspersed in one chapter are relatively rough and confusing to read. Current recommendation index:★★★

After watching it for a while, I felt it wasn't suitable for me. I couldn't understand it and it made me confused.

The characters are well portrayed and remarkable, and the plot is also full of twists and turns and thrills, making people look forward to the follow-up.

I think Pula is the most suitable heroine, but I don't think Haibara Ai is suitable. She is more suitable for a point. "Choose between Pula and Haibara Ai. Choose a companion who has crossed time together, or choose a heroine who is hard-matched for you in the plot." The plot I am more looking forward to is "Maybe becoming the enviable CP in the plot makes me not move forward, but for a companion who is a close friend of life and death, I will choose to run to meet him/her/it."

Since I am studying in the United States, I would like to meet Sharon Wynyard, but I don't know that she is Belmode. She thought her mother was a gentle and kind person, but her daughter turned out to be a demon who joined the organization.

The rhythm is well controlled, but in the last few pictures, the character of the protagonist has shifted. It is best to focus on safety. The behind-the-scenes boss flow is more suitable for the blank mode. It is too closely related to the winery and the police, so there may still be some problems.

After reading it again, I feel that it has been greatly improved and the overall writing is getting better and better.

I watched Conan's "The One-Eyed Remains" today, and I really think the author wrote it very well (I watched it with my classmates today, and there was one scene. I hope I saw it wrong. Kong Fu Gaoming only had one head and right arm left, and there was even a mud horse in the background. I really hope I saw it wrong). Really, this plot is like NC, and it is incomparable to the Neverland or something written by the author. It is even difficult to compare with the restoration order. Then there is something I don't quite understand about the author's article. The purpose of the protagonist's actions is to increase his popularity in another world to fight against the world line. What I am more curious about is the protagonist's attitude towards Kaitou Kidd, and Pula's manuscript was seen by Haibara. In fact, I feel that it is to illustrate, uh, and to show that the character is no longer bound by comics. What I am more curious about is the author. How long can this novel probably be? I feel that the characters in the author's novels are relatively quick to deal with this problem, and I feel that this issue is introduced a little early. In fact, I am more curious about how many novels the author can write. I actually hope to write more, but there is no need to write thousands of chapters. After all, the author ultimately hopes that the characters will break free. It is not appropriate to write so many chapters. But it's a pity that it's too little

I read your profile. Is this a comic character? According to the fanfic of the comic, it would be really great

We are catching up on updates, but one update a day is really too little 😭 When will we be able to have two updates a day like before?